https://redwallwiki.otterobservatory.com/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=67.142.161.18 2026-11-13T07:35:52Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.46.2 https://redwallwiki.otterobservatory.com/index.php?title=File:Veil_and_Kurda.jpg&diff=31405 2010-08-05T23:26:01Z

<p>67.142.161.18: </p> <hr /> <div>==Summary==<br /> [[Veil Sixclaw]] and [[Princess Kurda]], requested a while ago by someone on DeviantArt by the name of taggerungotterboy. <br /> <br /> == Licensing ==<br /> {{FanArt}}</div>

67.142.161.18 https://redwallwiki.otterobservatory.com/index.php?title=User_blog_comment:Laria_Wavedeep/Laria_Wavedeep/@comment-67.142.161.18-20100805224356&diff=31399 2010-08-05T22:43:57Z

<p>67.142.161.18: started new page.</p> <hr /> <div>I LOVE the part in the beginning when the family is fussing over Laria and she's acting so sweet and cute! Your descriptions are so touching, and I LOVE her mama's lullaby!</div>

67.142.161.18 https://redwallwiki.otterobservatory.com/index.php?title=User_blog_comment:Laria_Wavedeep/The_Son_Of_A_Warrior/@comment-67.142.161.18-20100805224047&diff=31398 2010-08-05T22:40:47Z

<p>67.142.161.18: started new page.</p> <hr /> <div>This is really good! I was impressed that you came up with your own original song (I CANNOT write poetry/music to save my LIFE!) and very, VERY impressed that you started on a totally clean slate with a totally new cast of characters! The only negative thing I noticed was that the descriptions are a tiny bit repetitive, like in the first paragraph: ''The leaves rustled in the breeze. The air was filled with an uneasy feeling. The bankvole scurried along, paws padding softly on the loam as his hooded figure weaved in and out of the trees. A breeze came, making the trees look as if they were dancing'' You mentioned a breeze already blowing in the first sentence, then you said it came for the first time in the third. But there's really nothing wrong with that - I just tend to notice that sort of thing. Great work!</div>

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