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		<title>imported&gt;SaynaSLuke: Comments can be hard for me to find time for, so I made this userpage to help with that :) sign if you&#039;d like me to comment/critique something ^^</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Comments can be hard for me to find time for, so I made this userpage to help with that :) sign if you&amp;#039;d like me to comment/critique something ^^&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;I decided to make this page cause there&amp;#039;s a lot of great stories out there on RW that aren&amp;#039;t getting enough comments, and I feel unable to comment a lot of the time. But I know how important it is to a writer&amp;#039;s inspiration to get feedback, believe me, I know. The first half of FWC I wrote with very few comments, and it was like dragging a sack of rocks up a steep hill .. to be honest. I&amp;#039;m an extremely stubborn person, that&amp;#039;s why I didn&amp;#039;t give up XD But I want to offer help to all my friends, lately, I just feel buried in a pile of schoolwork, 4H projects, and archery. However, I&amp;#039;ve devised I way that I will be able to comment/critique more often, so yay! :D&lt;br /&gt;
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Ok, here&amp;#039;s the deal. If you want feedback (and Astar, Lus, I&amp;#039;ll probably do yours anyway. But sometimes I need reminded on everything else ..) put your siggy and what kind of feedback you&amp;#039;d like at the bottom of this page. Also, which story you&amp;#039;d like it on :)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want a comment, I&amp;#039;ll just encourage you/tell you what I like about the story. It probably won&amp;#039;t be super long, just a little something. But then it might get long depending on how much you have written ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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However, if you really want to know exactly what I&amp;#039;m thinking, that&amp;#039;s when you ask for a critique. Critiques are very helpful to an author, and often helpful to the one critiquing. In a critique, I&amp;#039;ll first .&lt;br /&gt;
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1. Tell you want I do like about story/chapter&lt;br /&gt;
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2. Tell you things that didn&amp;#039;t feel quite right/might need improved upon&lt;br /&gt;
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3. Point out random things&lt;br /&gt;
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4. And again probably tell you something that I like&lt;br /&gt;
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It&amp;#039;s not something to be afraid of, it&amp;#039;s just sometimes people would rather not have a critique. And since critiques take longer, I&amp;#039;ll probably critique per chapter. (I do this on the other site I&amp;#039;m on, OYAN, so I do have a bit of practice)&lt;br /&gt;
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Anyway. I&amp;#039;ll probably do a few of these a week. I just don&amp;#039;t always know which story to do first, and this will help that.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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