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<p>started new page.</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>Aye! :P<br /> <br /> this is great so far, sorry it took so long before I could check out your story. Anyways, update soon! <br /> <br /> Oh, and here&#039;s a tip you might want to try. <br /> When a different person starts taliking, press enter, so the two speekers&#039; lines are separated. It makes it easier to read, and you know who&#039;s talking. <br /> Make any sense?<br /> <br /> Incase it didn&#039;t here&#039;s an example. (from your story)<br /> <br /> “Nobody calls me a coward! Take this, and this!” “Hey, Coward your self! Ouch! Grrr, how do you like this!” “Ouch!” <br /> <br /> See how they&#039;re all bunched together. It makes it hard to read who&#039;s saying what. so if you do this:<br /> <br /> “Nobody calls me a coward! Take this, and this!”(enter) <br /> <br /> “Hey, Coward your self! Ouch! Grrr, how do you like this!”(enter) <br /> <br /> “Ouch!” <br /> <br /> See, it makes it easier to read. <br /> <br /> Well I hope this helped. Again the story&#039;s great! <br /> <br /> ~Mariel</div>

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