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<p>started new page.</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>WOW... That was really amazing!! But sad, I was reading and it suddenly just came to an end, bad form to just end something like that, Segalia m&#039;dear! <br /> Anywho, I forgot where I was at from the last time I read so I figured I&#039;d just re-read it all over again :D <br /> <br /> There&#039;s a bit of a need for revising in the early chapters (maybe a little more detail me thinks?) but it progressed steadily and the last few chapters were really great! I&#039;m curious how Carma and Rori are going to get along and what their stories are :3 and also how everything&#039;s going to turn out with so many of the young&#039;uns not wanting to fight! I get the feeling they&#039;re all going to meet up somehow and start their own little group and figure out a way to keep the war from progressing... Nice updates and KIC! :)</div>

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