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User blog comment:Deyna Swordmaid/Deyna Swordmaid's Revenge/@comment-24.223.200.199-20091003193849

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Revision as of 19:38, 3 October 2009 by 24.223.200.199 (Talk) (started new page.)

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i think it is to condensed. the fight is to short. you need a little more setting discriptions and character backround. otherwise i think it is a great idea. keep going.

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