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Revision as of 02:24, 7 October 2008 by imported>Sambrook the otter (→I gotta agree.: new section)
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It's a nice story, but you should expand more in each chapter

Zaran Rhulain File:Tagg-big.jpg Talk! 02:21, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

I gotta agree.

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you probably should make the chapters longer, or combine them. I ran into this almost exact smae problem with several other stories. nice job tho, Sambrook the otter File:Sambrook.jpg Talk! 02:24, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

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