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Nice one, I like the mousemaid and your depiction of Redwall Abbey. She also looks pretty but fierce at the same time. Her stance with the sword and the paw open like that makes her look challenging to anyone who seems to cross her path. But she sorta looks peaceful as well in that habit. Since fighters would dress very plainly and efficiently to get maximum movement, the habit seems to say, "I'm a peaceful mousemaid." But when you look at her eyes, her almost fighting stance, the sword in her paw, those seem to say "back off vermin." Good job with the folds in her clothing too.

Your drawing of Redwall Abbey is pretty good too, it looks like you based the abbey off the French chateau's or German or Irish castles. Though I did imagine the main gate and its wall to be a bit wider.

Critiques(From your favorite critic xD) You need to bold up the back of her dress around the tail part, its light enough to be confused with her tail. The pads on her paw don't go too well either, I think it needs to be a bit more animal like before pads look good, otherwise its distracting and whats that thing under her arm? The scabbard? I also don't think that mouse tails are furry either, just plain skin.

All in all, a nice 9.5 out of 10 on the Sambrook scale (lol I made up a scale for you xD)

Zaran Rhulain File:Azaira.JPG File:Kaylee.png ^{Message me!} 02:24, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

oh, yes :) you are my favorite critic ^^

this is the sketch I have so far and Im planning on coloring it. But Im glad you pointed those things out (as always xD) one of the first times doing paw pads in a while.

know what you mean about the abbey gate and all being... bigger. this has to be my first time drawing Redwall up close, so Its kinda a "spur-of-the-moment concept."

but, yeah you critisizim was 100% accurate on the zaranCscale (hah, made one for you to)ill do my best to improve this one on the computer,so as usual,

thanks a ton :)

Sambrook the otter(The artist) File:Sambrook glow.jpgNeed anything? 02:34, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I like it--Dannflow  File:Coggs1.jpg Talk! 03:57, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I take it

this is one of your characters? I agree w/ Zaran. Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 23:36, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

naw, She ain't mine ^^ Sambrook the otter(The artist) File:Sambrook glow.jpgNeed anything? 00:05, 6 March 2009 (UTC)