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User blog comment:Danthemanb/Elmtails tail/@comment-1031927-20090502023700

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Revision as of 02:37, 2 May 2009 by imported>Shieldmaiden (started new page.)
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Really good. You need to build it up more, and work on your dialogue and phraseology. otherwise, A 10!