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A new identity in the Redwall World

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With my time on Redwall wikia, I have had difficulty with portraying my ideas in a set of fan fictions. Now, I plan on making a new beginning for myself in the release of my Redwall canon, containing a collections of all of my ideas concerning the expansion of the Redwall world.

As of the future, I would refer to myself as 'Recorder Dan', a Redwall mouse, living during the 2000s, near the end of the war against the Corphans. As of the past, the Corphans, after declaring war on the world in 1949 (1929), had taken full control of what used to be Redwall Abbey, and is now a large military base. Their cause to declare war on us is not completely known, except that they are known to believe in some form of descendence from a higher species of mice, living on some other planet. At this time, due to the inspiration of a religion brought to them from the western continent of HamensHalt, the scientists of Patreignia had begun to consider the existence of a Superior Council of animal genera, who were thought to have created some of the started breeds of each species. Thus, the Corphan scientists theorized such as how their planet, (need to come up with a name), existed between two sectors, whose dominant species were of Mustela (weasel kind) of the subfamily of Mustelinae, and Mus (or Apodemus, I am still deciding on the species of the Corphan mice, I am considering field mice, while they still esteemed those similar to house mice) of the subfamily of Murinae. They believed that there was a war between the two, and thus strived for full dominance over the Redwall world, while the Mustela, in higher levels, were actually striving for unity of the sectors. This declaration of war occur in the midst of the second vermin war, leading to a sudden act of truce between the two factions, in an attempt to fight against the new threat.

I myself (as Recorder Dan), live with an organization for Redwall heritage, containing known descendants of the original inhabitants of Redwall Abbey. Our group is stationed at the location of Brock Hall, which is now the location of the government of Mossflower District. As of 2012 (in the Redwall world), the government of Mossflower District completely surrendered itself under the power of the Corphans due to a severe threat of nuclear fallout within our district. This threat became rather effective on many of the other nations that were incapable of defending themselves. The Corphans had already disabled our nuclear defenses, and were ready to evacuate their troops. After surrendering, our government was made to sign an act similar to that of the 'Corphan Imperial Expansion Act of 1486'. This meant that our government could continue to operate and perform repairs on its infrastructure, indluding the shut down of its military, and the continueation of Corphan military operations from Mossflower District. The E.C. had also been pushed out of most of Patreignia, yet had spread its influence to HamensHalt, and had reestablished itself in the southern continent of DervanHalt. This year, the Corphans have assembled a massive fleet which is headed for HamensHalt.

Today, within our compound, located at the Parliament, I have decided to work on recounting all of the events of the past in Redwall history. And now I shall begin with the story of my ancestor, Recorder Matthew, of Redwall Abbey, and the events that surrounded the setting of his prologue. (Initiation of the narrator of Warfare 1530, 'The First Days of War', in 1557, while Recorder Matthew was recounting his story)

For the stories existing past the time of Recorder Dan (my version of Redwall 3000 and the story of the Superior Council), no specific character will be considered as the narrator except the author him/herself in consideration of the possibility of a future community that will continue to work on the expansion of the Redwall world.


Current state of my book 'Warfare 1530: The First Days of War'

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I haven't been working on it much. But in the future, once I have completed my canon (collection of my ideas concerning the expansion of the Redwall World), I will begin to rewrite the story in another format. This time, the narrator would be considered as I, Recorder Dan. For example, the statement following Recorder Matthew's prologue would have been an addition made by Recorder Dan based on the siege that was occuring during the day. Every once and while, the narrator will be switching between Recorder Matthew's narration of the events during 1530, while also reading through some journal entries of his own and from other people.

In the story, the main narrator, Recorder Matthew, is reading in the setting of 1557, where the war continues to rage on. At that time, he was looking through all of the historical accounts that he had found surrounding the events that occured during the war and some of the early movements of the vermin. He had also retrieved a few journal entries made by those who were living during the war. Moving forward to the year of 2012, we have Recorder Dan, who is currently reading through Recorder Matthew's accounts while looking for some other information on what was going on around him while he was writing this account. From then on, I, the writer, continues to work on more accounts considering the history of the Redwall world before his age.


Basic Ideas

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So, when I make ideas in my mind, they just tend to come and go from my mind. Just recently, I sorted out the different kinds of ideas I create in my mind.


Fresh Ideas/Concepts

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Everyday, when I am bored, I channel through different ideas in my mind. Somehow, a random character comes into existence then I start giving it a story. Once I make a plot, I give it a name then begin playing a story. In my mind, I simply play these stories every once and a while. Sometimes as I play these stories in my head, (In HDD Graphics lol), I automatically create scenery and background characters and building in my mind to accompany the story. Later I will discuss the two ideal productions that I call 'Auto Scenery' and 'Auto Mapping'.


Auto Scenery and Auto Mapping

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Somehow in my brain, while creating stories, I automatically create scenery in my mind. This makes it easier for me to concentrate on the main character in the story allowing me to make scenery in the background without me even interpreting a single detail! Thus, I don't need to create these details manually. Also, Auto Mapping allows me to memorize different places and scenery allowing me to go back to a certain place without altering the map. I am also able to make radial maps in my mind so that as I play a story in my mind, it isn't only a set.


Mental Concept Auto Info Reference Archive (M.C.A.I.R.A.)

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This is the part of my memory strip where I keep all of my plots and information of different characters. Somehow, I am able to memorize all of the names, species, and appearances of all the characters I have created; even their voices. Thus, I can make sure I do not forget much information.


Developing Ideas/Concepts

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These ideas are the ideas that I have made valid in my mind. Eventually, these are that concepts that turn into temporary movies or even series that I play in my mind every once and a while. In my mind, I start making the largest archives for these developing thoughts.

Fresh Uncovered Branch Ideas/Concepts

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In my mind, I start ideas and play them, sometimes as I play these stories, I come up with newly introduced characters that I haven't developed yet. Sometimes, these characters are uncovered when I relate them to another idea I created. For example, in a story I have been playing for a while, I black cloaked being is handing out scrolls containing messages of the future. Later, I remembered a maze system I was making, then the name AXUS came to my mind and I used it to develop this character, in fact, it became a whole organization. You should know about the different religious places known in Redwall where they practice different rituals, the AXUS was like that. After nearly completing the original plot, I started developing the Branch plot. So on I eventually created a new archive for this. Later I will make a whole fan fiction explaining this idea.


Fully Developed Concept Ideas

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These here are the ideas and concepts that I have actually completed and have started plotting. For example, the fan fiction of mine, 'Embarking that of Afar was originally a complete series I played all the way through my head. It was already divided into three series in my mind containing four books: Ascrod, The Far North, The City of Flames, and Through Dark Forest and into the Light.


Inspired Concepts

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Inspired concepts are concepts in my mind created off other original concepts. When I was younger, it was harder to make my own stories. I was already a Redwall fan thus I made a setting in that land where I created Patreignia. This world developed on and I played a long war throughout it. Eventually, I began going onto an even larger concept story and thus it became an 'Abandoned Concept'.


Abandoned Concepts

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These concepts are the ones I have been playing for awhile then when I stop for a while, I forget everything in the archive and I end up having to abandon these things. I have had many developed stories but now I have decided to stay with these three. The Great Shire, Legacy of the SabreFein, and TREXUS Antrium (enunciated as Tairus; a Sci-Fi).


Relative Concepts

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Relative concepts are where I relate different stories that have been somehow part of the same canon. Thus in my mind, I have a whole universe, different planets, galaxies, solar systems and all that. Thus all of my stories are in this place. For example, the setting of The Great Shire was in a continent west of Patreignia called HamensHalt and the pseudonym fictional writer of Legacy of the SabreFein was born in south eastern HamensHalt, and TREXUS Antrium is on a planet inhabited by the future people of Patreignia around the 2900s. It is all very complicated how I produce my stories.

Redwall has inspired my mind greatly in the many stories I create thus here I bring how I assemble ideas. I just wanted to explain it.


(statistics, general)

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Average typing speed: 27-40 W.P.M.

Average time it takes to read a Redwall book: 2-4 months, without speed reading

Books I have read, possibly in order: Triss(I started but did not finish. I was in a library and I remembered the Redwall series and I soon found out that it was a whole entire book series, thus I now read Redwall and I am now familiar with the canon. I remember when I found out it was a TV* [I meant to ype 'book'] series, I was amazed at how much I did not know. Also, I first felt bizarre to the term 'Redwaller', it was wierd to me at first then I understood. Also I tried attracting squirrels in my backyard with Woodland Script 'Nuts here'.) Mossflower, Martin the Warrior, Redwall, Eulalia (my friend who read it first pronounced it as 'Eh-oo-lay-ah' in grade four), Loamhedge, The Bellmaker, the Long Patrol, Marlfox, Outcast of Redwall, Lord Brocktree, The Sable Quean (got halfway, lost it in a hotel while coming home from my vacation), bought it again in Canada.), Doomwyte, The Legend of Luke, and the Taggerung, with 7 more books to go, maybe The Rogue Crew.


Conceptions and Misconceptions

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1.First when I was reading through the siege of Kotir, when it said 'then a procession of Loamhedge Mice came in' or something like that being read 3 years ago, I imagined them as some sort of elite troop or monks wearing red cloaks and Forest Green Priest hats with a gold button diadem attached to its centre (that much detail). Now I know they came from an old Abbey to the northwest.

2.Painted Ones being lemurs as the Redwall TV show pictured them. But they are tree rats, and speak the common language; not ape. (did Nervana even read the book?)

3.Wearets: they don't seem to look like the weasel-ferrets they are supposed to be

4.Martin being WAY younger in the book, Martin the warrior; I thought he was still a kid.

5.Pronouncing Brian Jacques as 'Brain-Jaquess', sorry Brian, I didn't read it right at first.

6.Cats: beings rather large compared to badgers, well, I know that in the winter's tale, badgers were one head to the ceiling.

7.Stoats: I had to google them to find out what they are (I was new to that species)

8.Coracle, Skiffs, and such: also googled them

9.My friend told me that Cavern Hole was below ground level


Archived Characters (main or major characters) in my Brain

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Within or beyond Redwall M.U.C.K.

Mark IV - great great grandson of Truffen (embarks on journey to the northern shores)

Ashcrod - unusual fox that leaves his family and embarks that of afar

Carol - ferret who joins his father's crew to survey the western coasts of the Great Sea, lives north of Mossflower

Darius van Strauvenn - 1400 weasel of the Early Courtesy (a group of creatures from the ermine and weasel family who wish to have peace and no longer be considered as vermin to the woodlanders being good in heart compared to other vermin) who established the Shoktt Caverns and lined the coast with them to house vermin in cages that were suspended by a complex chain system that dangled over either a spike cavern or lava lake. A stone truss supported by chains hanging from the ceiling provided a passage way to place or feed prisoners in the cages. A collection of levers raised and lower the cages, and the worst thing a vermin could do was struggle free, for if they did while treading on the thin stone path, they could fall to their death, maybe bringing their jailer with them, but if the jailer was thrown off, the prisoner was either torchered or be sniped by Shoktt-Keeper Musketeers.

1500s-2000s and the far future

General CromWell IronFists - Lord General of the Corphan mice army. Ruler of the south western extension of Corphania to Mossflower Country

Engineer Morty - Engineer in the Corphan southwestern extensions who invented different weapons used to teach vermin a lesson (some created by my friend) such as the Steam Gauntlet (releases retracting iron fist into enemy) The Disembowelment Gauntlet (too gruesome in action, hooks are attached to a steam powered glove, first it would grab, later, it would/could grab, rev up, and spin... too gruesome I tell you)

Engineer Faultesmitt Vaulkenn - Morty's son, designer of the Mark 5 Vaulk's Tank equipped with Heavy Explosive rounds (talking 1900s, sorry, I know this is a Medieval setting site) and many other machines.

From the AXUS concept series

Zerphy's Assassins: (by age: 32 in all, 24 survived) Heinrich, Melver, Basil, Jarvich, Sterrov, Harvi, Derron, Venrich, Charles, Samius, Mavenn, Sovus, Grae, Jonver, Petrov, Marwhick, James, Ceivus, Henri, Zephen, Jeremias, Wahrald, Vuhlov, John, (among the dead and slain) Cerevus, Ivan, Alvern, Trovius, Kerrev, Heimen, Derrich, Saltoh.

Re:Planet

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Given that canon-wise, to my knowledge Redwall has never been given a 'planet', that's a bit difficult to answer. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg Talk! 04:30, April 4, 2011 (UTC)


Book Plot

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'Redwall; 1500+' Outline Somehow upon entering the Redwall Wikia community, my first idea in my writings was to begin work on the places outside or beyond the known Redwall World including the events that occur by the coming of the Modern Era. Books: Book 1: Days of Exploration (Abandoned document) Book 2: The first days of War '1530-1614' (in progress) Book 3: The Great Siege Book 4: Document on the Early Courtesy Book 5: Warfare Book 6: History: The Vermin War Historical Summary Book 7: Corphan's, the Superior Race and Aftermath

"HamensHalt, the well faring land west of Patreignia" A series going back into my imagination and how I created certain concepts and validated them into more valid and original inspired concepts. HamensHalt is a continent west of Patreignia that I created in my younger age. At the end of the series, I will explain more on my thoughts of how I applied other's concepts into mine and how I deducted those originals and rebuild to make my own ideas more original. Thus I write these books that are out of the three main concepts that I wished to share to the people of the world and the members of the Redwall Wikipedia Organization and how I gained my inspiration.

• Book 1 "Peace within the Great Shire' • Book 2 "The Second Rising" • Book 3 "The Beginning and End of the AXUS (Document on the AXUS)" • {Book 4 "Warlords of Early HamensHalt" • Book 5 "The Great Shire" • Book 6 "The Great City and other Advancements"} (History of Hamen's Halt)

Spiritual System of the Redwall World Redwall features a specific system that directs where people of the Redwall world go when they die which is what we call 'Silent Forest' or 'Dark Forest'. Here is a document based on my idea of the whole system's origins and what events had occurred in this world of the higher beings. The stories will feature a few 'faint references' to different parts of my brain archive and other concepts that I know and are known to the Redwall community. Thus here it begins: • Book 1: Historical Documentary, 'Rise of the first DoomMaster' • Book 2: Historical Documentary, 'Establishment of the AXUS' • Book 3: Historical Documentary, 'The Death of the DoomMaster' • Book 4: Historical Documentary, 'Dark Forest' • Sub-story 1: The AXUS • Sub-story 2: System of the DoomMasters • Sub-story 3: Iaeus Terra and the System of the High • Sub-story 4: Historical Documentary on Iaeus Terra and the Superior Races • Sub-story 5: The Council of the Superior Races • Sub-story 6: Vulpuz's Story: The Leader of the Gate • Sub-story 7: Council of the DoomLords and Councilors


Observation, Mustelidae and the Flitchaye

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Flitchaye could have been 'least weasels' being around the size of an average mouse. Also, otters could be part of the mustelidae family.


How to Avoid Stormtropper effect, reasons to use it and not to use it.

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I know that the storm trooper effect tends to give a better chance of victory or survival during a battle, but if each unit has similar weaponry, strategy, skill, and quantity, wouldn't each unit suffer similar cassualties. But if one unit has better weaponry, more troops, and an equal advantage to the battlefield, wouldn't the weaker unit suffer the most, or nearly be obliterated? So in an average battle, there are clearly two leaders conducting their units but when Brian Jacques writes his 3rd character book, its only he who is commanding the whole battle and constructing a battle that will correspond with the plotted outcome and still have an accurate outcome is difficult. When I play with my miniatures, or play Risk without the rules, I set advantages for each army then begin battle until I have a final outcome in which I do not know who is most likely to win. So I believe that one would have to make a chart of outcomes, set the battle's preferences and properties and should see how many outcomes he can get then trace the desired outcome to the battles main preferences that lead to that outcome. Thus they begin writing.


The Redwall Kitchen website

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It has a lot ofrecipes but it seems like it teaches you how to brew your own wine using the yeast principle of alcohol producing. I saw how it works on discovery channel HD