User blog comment:Abriella Laterose/Maid's Quest/@comment-1427879-20130706164017
Welcome t'Redwall Wiki! I decided to check out your fanfic and so far it has a lot of potential. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and the first chapter still needs its dialogue split up. Your poetry was quite good, as were your descriptions. I look forward to seeing how it will all work together! I figured I'd let you know that, while your personal characters so far seem unique, the idea of Deyna's children is not. Keep me updated!
Also, if you're interested, I have my own fanfics here, its sequel here, and a completed unrelated one here. There are quite a few good fanfics and fanfic writers, like Salem below, on the wiki, so feel free to check them out!