User blog comment:Floriana Braebuck/A Maid's Journey/@comment-1398069-20090817015620
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I find it annoying when people write ==Prologue== then just stop. It's much better if they put a little preview, like: "Twenta the haremaiden has had her last straw with the Badger Lord, Grentolikorish! She leaves from the mountain, furios. But, just as she's gone, an evil warlord shows up, and it's revealed that his only weakness is dorky haremaids with glasses that are Assistant Cooks. CanTwenta come back and save the day?! Find out in 'A Maid's Journey, Coming Soon to Redwall Wiki near you!" That sort of thing.