User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-26141072-20150406101712

Sorry I haven't commented in a long time DX but wow this is getting better and better! You make excellent use of cliffhangers and making it seem like all is lost until someone comes along or something happens to make it all better . . . but not quite yet.

I wonder where the squirrel slave went. He better have escaped . . . XD

And Riah, well, Cerberus that was not nice of you, not nice of you at all. But she's gone! Ha! :P

Quira! No don't die! Fralt and the Major are there and Zev's thinking of you! I wonder what was used on her. It certainly isn't good, from this.

Juni, tut tut, it was all entirely your own fault. You shouldn't have been so naughty. :P Hmm, Bessie and Jase . . . Now I seem to recall Briar saying something about a 'Bessie' and she was with a dark beast and a mouse-like creature when Cota found her . . . wasn't she? Hmmmm. Bessie and Jase have Juni now. And right when Skipper kicked out Briar, who I have strong suspicions is their companion . . . XD

Anyways, this is going great! Great job and keep writing! Vaylayna and Rosebrush ^Together! 10:17, April 6, 2015 (UTC)