User blog comment:Mariel of Redwall/Mariel and Dandin: Never Again/@comment-988934-20090523152012

Wow...that is one vivid story, the whipping, the evil leader speech, the surprise attack on the vermin camp, all very detailed, like I am actually there as a spectator just witnessing it. Poor Mariel, shouldn't have suffered like that after her previous adventures.

Also, looks like feelings Dandin has for Mariel are getting stronger, imploring to Martin to keep Mariel safe, then as Mariel fainted along the way to Redwall, some of his true emotions filtered to his face.

Good story, keep giving me updates as usual please xD