User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Prophecy Fulfilled/@comment-26141072-20150227102213
I comment a lot, but first comment on TPF! Couldn't resist. XD
Your poetry is really good! I could never start off writing with that great poetry! And coupled with the thing Rose got . . . well lots of mystery swirling around just from your poetry!
I can't believe I completely forgot about Lotor . . . and he has Salamandastron! No!! Malimore admits Tsarmina and the others have failed, which means Lotor might . . . but he's definitely grown stronger from what he used to be. This bodes ill.
It's already a fascinating start and it already leaves cliffhangers (you always do that, but it's a good thing. ;)). I wonder if the two helpers are Ferran and Fragorl. Kind of odd for Malimore to use a white creature compared to creatures like Roderick, but ermine are white, so *shrugs*.
And if this is a rewrite of Legend of Luke, then we'll probably learn a lot more about Sayna/Martin/Timbal/whoever's histories, especially since they're all related to the Lukes, and, well, this is going to be exciting!
I wonder what things are going on back at Mossflower. Redwall Abbey being built, and the Queens and Kings have kids (your pictures are spoilers, but I love them! You're a wonderful artist!!) and, everyone else who got married is probably having kids too . . .
Either ways, I'm already excited for the next thing, even if you've only written the prologue, and keep writing!! --Vaylayna the Mercenary Shadows fall, yet they leave no mark. 10:22, February 27, 2015 (UTC)