User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway/@comment-74.4.72.122-20100715013740

well, someone is excited! But i agree! I've waited AGES for this update! i know how it can be, life gets busy and all (i can relate) but i still really missed getting a new chapter every week. :) I like how you planned out the battle, that part about Smoke seeing Wave was good. You described it really well. I caught three typos.

soon their shift would b over and they could get some rest be, not b. :)

Skipper had to convince them not to convince them that it was a Ah, not sure how that was supposed to be, but it certainly doesn't sound right. i got the idea though.

The other one i can't find now but you spelled think as thing.

Nice update and, as always, can't wait for more!!!

-Windy