User talk:Swordbearer
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Re:Signature
[edit]Hi Swordbearer! To alter your signature, check the FAQs. The process is described there. --LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg Talk! 00:13, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
Random thought
[edit]I was just thinking, whenever I picture Martin's sword, I picture the Master Sword (from legend of zelda) hilt with Galaxia (Meta knight's sword from the Kirby series) 's blade. Swordbearer <+>()- 00:45, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
READ ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[edit]What is your favorite Redwall book? Favorite hero? Villain? In general? Please sign!!! (use ~ x4) Swordbearer <+>()- 00:48, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
the very best
[edit]- hi you ask about the characters I best: well that easy Martin the Warrior villain is um Badredd best book Salamandastron--Dannflow 00:45, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
how does Samkim get the sword of martin?Lady Gorse 17:29, 30 May 2008 (UTC)Lady Gorse
The Jokes on you
[edit]Hi. I dont understand your jokes about Badrang or Ferahgo on your Essay page.
--Charie Swordmaid 21:03, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
Don't Worry ^_^
[edit]Don't worry about it we all make some mistakes ;) You welcome, and if you need any more, don't be afraid to ask. Sambrook the otter File:Sambrook.jpg Talk! 23:47, 23 October 2008 (UTC) (P.s. I con't wait for you to add more to your story! Keep it up!)
Don't Worry ^_^
[edit]Don't worry about it we all make some mistakes ;) You welcome, and if you need any more, don't be afraid to ask. Sambrook the otter File:Sambrook.jpg Talk! 23:47, 23 October 2008 (UTC) (P.s. I con't wait for you to add more to your story! Keep it up!)
:D
[edit]please, feel free to use my name in your story, though I have one request. The first time you use my name you make it a link to my page. Other than that, my name is at your whim! Can't wait to see my part in your story! Sambrook the otter File:Sambrook.jpg Talk! 05:39, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
Um...
[edit]Um, sorry. But I'm really not understanding the story you wrote. Maybe you could give a little more detail on it. I can help if you would like me too. There is potential for LIfe of Rorzan. Continue workin, but keep peticulair writing skills in mind. Like grammer, spelling, and probably format. Just tell me if you want any help. :)
p.s. I hope you dont think i'm writing negative commentary on this, :) cause its not. I dont like critizising (idk how to spell that) anybody's work. But a little bit of editting goes a long way. :)
Charie Swordmaid File:Marielbaker.gif Talk! 23:14, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Tip
[edit]It may help if you try not to use Death Words (boring words such as: said, good, great, fun.) You know. Words that are used too much. Use a thesaurus to find better words. It will help. Also try to explain things in more detail. You dont have to use any of my tips. Its your choice. :) I mean. For my college english cource. We have to memorize part of the dictionary. :O
p.s. Indenting/Formating is VERY important! Or else its really hard to read and comprehend the story. :)
Example:
I was racing through the woods, chasing a ferret. His name was Fligar, and he had stolen the sword of Martin the Warrior. He tripped, and I caught up. I twirled my javelin above my head... and he began crying.
I kicked him and spat.
"Go on then," I said. "Escape with your life." He ran like you wouldn't've believed. I shook my head, disgusted, then ran back to the abbey, not knowing that my life was about to change forever...
I walked on. Then I remembered that I was late for dinner, and that Friar Dubble was making shrimp and hotroot soup. I blinked. Then I broke into a run. Weel, more of a mad sprint as if my life and soul depended on it. I crashed into another otter.
"Hey," he said. "What's the big idea?!"
"Sorry," I said. "I'm late for dinner." He just stared at me.
"I've never seen you around here," I quickly changed the subject.
"What's your name?"
"I'm Sambrook. You are?"
"Rorzan," I said. "Well, I'd better get going." Then a net was thrown over us and we were clubbed to unconciousness.
I woke painfully. Sambrook and I were each tied to posts. The heat was near unbearable. Sambrook opened his eyes. He took in his situation and fainted. I noticed a badger on another post on my left. He was still unconcious. I tried not to think about it. Then a ferret walked in. He looked at me disdainfully and turned to his accomplice, a scrawny stoat.
"That's all?" He said. The stoat shrugged and spoke.
"This is all we could find-" The ferret punched him a hard blow on the nose.
"I don't care! I have soldiers to feed and two otters and a badger isn't enough! And then there's that bratty son of mine, Fligar, to be accounted for. Just kill them now."
The badger couldn't've chosen a better time to wake up. Thet is, if creatures could choose when to wake up. His eyes were red and glaring. He snapped out of his ropes as if they were made of paper. He roared and charged the ferret, killing him instantly with his claws. The stoat, meanwhile, was clumsily putting an arrow on his bow. He fired at me. He badger plucked it out of midair and drove it through the stoat's heart. The blood fell from his eyes. He plodded over and untied me and a very limp Sambrook.
"Are you okay?" He asked me. "I'm sorry if I startled you. I was just waiting for a good time to wake up." I stared at him blankly.
"What?" he asked. Sambrook opened his eyes.
"Damsoncream pudding... Hey, who wha?! I'm awake!" He breathed deeply for a few seconds. Minutes. I slapped him in the face.
"There's no time for this! We have to get the hellgates out of here!" "Calm down," the badger said.
"Let's start like this. Hi, I'm Mercury. You?"
"I'm Rorzan. This is my friend Sambrook."
"Alright then," said Mercury. "I've been here before. The exit route's this way. Oh, and you can call me Merc." We followed him to a brick wall. I tried the door. It was locked. Merc kicked it to the ground. We walked on into a dark tunnel. It went up at quite a steep rate that at one point, we had to climb. Finally we got to the end.
"My friends," Merc said. "Welcome to Loamhedge."
Charie Swordmaid File:Marielbaker.gif Talk! 23:40, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
hmm... I like ti Charie!
[edit]Maybe you could add that (what she wrote) as part of your story? Oh, (dang this is so hard to write...) It looks like its in plot format right now, like you have an idea for what every chapter should be about. (And you got a great plot line) I would love to help you with any detail or writing you need help with =) thanks ^_^ Sambrook the otter File:Sambrook.jpg Talk! 23:49, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
I don't get the jokes for Badrang
[edit]But I got th other- FUNNY!!--Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Talk! 16:30, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
Gruvens Joke ????????
[edit]Image:Felldoh's_revenge.png|thumb|80pxI do not remember what happened to Gruven when he died , airgo I do not get his Joke ! What happened to Gruven when he died ???????
--Luke Reguba 12:53, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
RE
[edit]HAPPY NEW YEAR, SWORDBEARER!!! Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:45, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!11
[edit]I get it now! hahahahahahahahahahahaha! Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 17:26, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
A prequel?
[edit]You want me to write a prequel to yer story? (I know, I'm stupid.) Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Image:Untitled.png| 85px Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:41, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
RE- Prequel
[edit]Yur story is good- you want me to write a prequel to it? Maybe you should read a bit of my fan fic before you decide if I'm any good. I think I'm not, but my sister idolizes me..
Taggerung Quest is a sequel to Taggerung
And Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale- welll, the title speaks for itself!
Also, I noticed you left Bosie off your list of swordbearers on yer user page. this picture shoud do nicely:
here's the format:
[[Image:Lairdbosie.jpg|thumb|left]]
It's the only one of him down.
You're a good writer, again! Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Image:Untitled.png| 85px Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 00:00, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Also,
[edit]Tam's Revenge written by Lady Amber 88. Thought you'd like . . . Shieldmaiden File:Matthias2.JPG Image:Untitled.png| 85px Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 01:54, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
I couldn't help but see what you wrote to Barkjon...
[edit]This is how you strike through text: Do you see the 2nd-to-last-button-on-the-right on the toolbar right above the subject line (you see the subject line when you are leaving a message on talk pages)? It says: str. Click on that, and delete the words: Strike-through Text, put your text there that you want to strike, and boom! it gets striked through. Or, you could do: <s>User:Swordbearer</s>. It turns out lke this: User:Swordbearer.
Glad to be able to help! Can you look at my fan-fics: Hollyfire's Tale, Nightmoon, and Fires of the Sea? Thanks!
- Hollyfire Queen Tsarmina's Lair 13:48, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
New System
[edit]Hello, for approximately 1 month our new blogging system for Fan Fiction and Essays has been in place. You are receiving this notification because you have not yet moved your work over to this system. In two weeks, all content not moved over to the blogs will be deleted, with no chance of retrieval. You can learn more about the system at the help page. Thanks for your cooperation. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg Talk! 06:40, 3 March 2009 (UTC)