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If you want a signature, ask Sambrook the otter for help. Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 17:16, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey!

Thanks for fixing Burrom for me!--Rose Of Noonvale File:The Pink Rose.jpg Noonvale Here I Come!

Update.Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Triss.PNG^Talk! 00:06, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Mayblossom

sounds like an interesting character. Please post your stories, it doesn't matter how long it takes for you to finish them. I probably won't finish my story for a long time. Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Triss.PNG^Talk! 01:59, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm looking for a beta reader please if anyone's willing to deal with a crappy writer

I'm not good at writing Redwall fanfics. When I'm doing this stuff on my own like I always do, I can create fanfic characters and detailed histories for the characters easily, but when it comes to the actual fanfics themselves, I have a habit of writing so far on a fic and getting stuck. My brain says "Told you you couldn't do it because your writing stinks" and I abandon the fic. I'm looking for a beta reader please if anyone's willing to deal with a crappy writer. :) TiriaW 14:18, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

What's

a beta reader? 71.213.13.101 14:36, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Whoops!

Sorry that was me. My computar somehow logged me out while I was typing that. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 14:38, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

No problem :)

This is going to sound overly detailed and probably stupid, but I copied it from the original wikipedia site because my brain blanked and I wasn't sure how to word this myself:

A beta reader (also spelled betareader, or shortened to beta) is a person who reads a written work, generally fiction, with what has been described as "a critical eye, with the aim of improving grammar, spelling, characterization, and general style of a story prior to its release to the general public." The author or writer, who can be referred to as the alpha reader, may use several "betas" prior to publication. A beta reader can serve as proofreader of spelling and grammar errors, or as a traditional editor, working on the "flow" of prose. In fiction, the beta might highlight plot holes or problems with continuity, characterisation, or believability; in both fiction and non-fiction, the beta might also assist the author with fact-checking. TiriaW 14:55, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Oh

okay. Well if you want, I can be your beta reader. I can be very critical when I get in the mood. And my brother has alot of Redwall books, so I can borrow them from him when I need too. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 17:06, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

That sounds great! Thanks. :) TiriaW 18:34, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Wondering something: I tried to see if you had an e-mail or something so I could send you my work and something came up saying you haven't specified a valid e-mail or have chosen not to receive e-mails from other users. I'm confused on how this is going to work. TiriaW 19:25, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

I'll ask Mom if I can get an e-mail account. Then we can e-mail back and forth about it. But if she says no, I don't know what we'll do. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 21:32, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Update. And I asked Mom about the e-mail thing and she said she'd talk to Dad. Let's keep our fingers crossed that he'll say yes.Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 23:35, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

How do you do that?

How did you make that fan-fiction characters page? I want to do it too!--Laterose

Well, if you mean how I created the character section, I copied the main section off of this site: http://redwall.wikia.com/index.php?title=User:Martin2/Character_pages , erased the character already listed and fleshed it in. If you mean how I created the separate page itself; another member helped me set up the blank link on my main userpage. You're welcome to copy the link below, erase my username, put yours in, and paste it into your page. It'll give you a separate, blank section linked to your userpage and you can edit it from there. TiriaW 14:25, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

http://redwall.wikia.com/wiki/User:WildloughRhulain/Characterpages

Thank you!!!!--Laterose

Glad to help! :) TiriaW 22:42, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

How does a user make a contents box for a page?

How does a user make a contents box for a page that changes as they add information? I tried to do that on my fanfiction page here and all I did was mess up. I know there's some way to do it, but I don't know how. Could someone help me with this please? TiriaW 17:45, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Character boxes

To do that you use some special code. Here is a select example from a character in one of my Fan Fictions:

{{Character|

image=[[Image:For MArtin2 copy.jpg|200px]]

|caption= The Hooded One

|color=background:#ff8080

|character_name=Elledis

|species=[[:Category:Weasels|Weasel]]

|origin=Unknown

|gender=female

|weapon=[[The Sword of Martin]],Ebony Bow,[[Sword]](Plain Steel)

|death=Unknown at present

|books= [[User blog:Martin2/The Storm |Fan Fiction: The Storm]]

|}}

The image is, of course, the image displayed. The caption is the image's caption. Don't mess with the color, that is just a default color, Do name, species, orgin, gender, weapon, death, and then books.

It then looks like this:

Glad to be of help! --The Hooded One File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgGaze into Darkness! 19:44, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the help in the character boxes! I needed to know how to make them too, but I was wondering how to do a main contents box.

Thanks for the help in the character boxes! I needed to know how to make them too, but I was wondering how to do a main contents box. I can't seem to get one put on my fanfic page; I tried to add one earlier and everything messed up, because when I refreshed the page, all I saw was the original text I'd typed. TiriaW 20:16, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Ugh!

Mom keeps putting off asking Dad! I think she'll ask tonight though, cause I've been asking over and over and she'll most likely do it to get me to stop pestering her.Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 23:38, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

The contents thing apears after four headings.Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 23:39, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

I just wasn't sure how to get it to work. After you get four headings in can you move the contents section to another place on the page, or do the contents have to stay on the page below those four headings? I'm still confused on a lot of this. TiriaW 00:23, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

No. You can't move the contents box. It stays in the same spot. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 01:21, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

That's okay. I was just wondering whether it could be done or not. TiriaW 21:57, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Would anyone be able to do a pic for me please? I was thinking of adding my Redwall alter-ego to this page.

Would anyone be able to do a pic for me please? I was thinking of adding my Redwall alter-ego to this page. I created this character off the top of my head: Her name's Jadrin (Jadd-renn) Streamrunner; I'm in the process of writing a fic introducing her. Jadrin is a pretty ottermaid with dark brown fur, emerald-green eyes and a lean, muscular build. She usually wears a simple green short-sleeved tunic, matching kilt, and tan sandals. She has a pouch of slingstones and a sling tucked in her kilt. TiriaW 16:33, 7 April 2009 (UTC) (note was left April 6 and signed April 7)

i can do one for you, but i can guarantee that it won't be as good as anyone elses. :/ --ladyamber88 File:Dotti.jpg ^{Mossfloweeeeeeeerrr!!!} 00:44, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

I could do one for you too. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 14:13, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Maybe I could get a pic from each of you and then decide which one I want to use. Thanks! :) Added notes on character: Jadrin also has a small, irregularly-shaped patch of tan fur near the tip of her tail; her birthmark. Sometimes she wears a light green novice's habit with a white girdle cord instead of her kilt and tunic. Could one pic have her dressed one way and one pic the other? TiriaW 16:02, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

i'll do the one with the habit, if that's ok with pinedance. i'm not sure what a tunic with a kilt looks like so...yeah...--ladyamber88 File:Dotti.jpg ^{Mossfloweeeeeeeerrr!!!} 16:35, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

I was thinking something like a shirt and separate checkered knee-length skirt (I envision Jadrin's kilt as green with black checkerboard-patterned lines across it). I think a tunic's slightly longer at the bottom than a shirt. Meant to clarify above but got mixed up. :) I know a tunic's different from a shirt, and a kilt's different from a skirt, but I'm personally not sure how to draw a tunic except by drawing it as a longer, short-sleeved shirt, or how to draw a kilt except by drawing it as a short skirt. I can't draw worth beans. TiriaW 17:04, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Where I mentioned "this page" above, I really meant to say "my main userpage" and "my character page." I have a bad habit of forgetting to clarify. :) TiriaW 18:03, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

hey, do you want a background or somethin'? --[[User: ladyamber88 |<font color="Green ">ladyamber88 </font>]] [[Image:Dotti.jpg| 50 px]] [[User talk: ladyamber88 |^{<font color=" Blue" size="2">Leave a messagge, matey, an' I'll respond ASAP</font>}]] 20:10, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Yes, please. :) I was thinking, maybe the background for yours could be a field of mixed flowers, a few clouds in a blue sky and maybe a spreading rainbow across the sky behind her. TiriaW 20:26, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

You want a background with that? Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 01:51, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Please. :) Could you maybe work out a background with varied weapons otters have used during the series? Something with bows and arrows and javelins, and have the only sling in the picture be Jadrin's? Thanks again. TiriaW 09:47, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

done with your pic

it looks hideous though. :( and i did the eyes on photoshop so it looks like it's glowing...sorry.

File:For Wildlough Rhulain.jpg

--ladyamber88 File:Dotti.jpg ^{Please leave a message and I'll try to reply ASAP!} 15:09, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

That's great! You got both sides of her character at once!

What do you mean hideous? :) You don't need to apologize. That's great! It shows both sides of her character at once; the calm, relaxed maid on the outside, while on the inside, she's ready to whoop some vermin butt! Great work! TiriaW 15:17, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

What

did you mean by that message on my talk page? Sarcasm doesn't translate to the internet well.

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 21:49, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm really sorry for saying what I did. I was out of line.

I'm really sorry for saying what I did. I was out of line. I did something stupid there and I messed up. I don't blame everyone on this site if they hate me now. When I put that message there I wasn't thinking. You said that section was the wrong thing to add. After reading it over again, I agreed with you, but I noticed there were more hyperlinks out there linking to the page; they had notes like that referring to the section you deleted on their pages. I was trying to fix the section, so I went to the other pages linking to it, changed those sections and removed a bunch of unneccesary hyperlinks. TiriaW 22:46, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

It's okay

There was just a misunderstanding. --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 23:19, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

uh...thanks *blush* --ladyamber88 File:Dotti.jpg ^{Please leave a message and I'll try to reply ASAP!} 17:01, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

OK

Since Mom and Dad are taking forever to come to a descision, I came up with an idea. How about you post your fan fics and when I'm on I'll read them and critic them. I'll leave the critics on your talk page. Sound good? Oh, and I'm working on the sketch for your pic. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 19:09, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I'll be happy to, but I don't really have that much done on some of them. On some of my fics, I'm just starting on the prologues so there's only a few lines in them or a couple of paragraphs. TiriaW 19:16, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I can't wait to see your fan fics!

Have you read Taggerung yet or Martin the Warrior? Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 19:54, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I've read all of the books so far; more than once, and I love them :) Tagg/Deyna's one of my favorite characters! :) TiriaW TiriaW 20:00, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Could youread my fanfics, please?

User blog:Shieldmaiden/Martin the Warrior II: Return to Noonvale Title says it all. Complete, but am revising.

User blog:Shieldmaiden/Taggerung Quest Sequel to Taggerung. Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 20:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

As

a response to the section o your userpage, I've never known anyone on this sight to, as you put it, bash someone's fan fiction. I'm sure they are great!

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 22:57, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

The reason I posted that message there is I used to be a member of this fanfiction forum and this flamer was really harassing me on the boards. It was getting really bad and out of control, so I asked a friend of mine to change my password for me and delete my account there and she did. Since I got bashed that time I've been worried about showing my work to anyone; I've been afraid that the same thing might happen again. I've stayed clear of fanfiction forums since that day except when I'm reading other people's work. TiriaW 23:46, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Someone doing that on this wiki might get booted. It's a shame, I'm sure your Fan Fics are awesome.

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 23:50, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I wish I could get my stories done faster though. I've gone into periods where I write a whole scene then I think "oh crud, something's wrong with this" and have to scrap it. Sometimes I just end up staring at the computer unable to continue a scene in a fic; so I give up on it and try to start a whole new one, which never works, because I end up locking up on that one, too. TiriaW 00:18, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, that happens. My brother (the one with almost all of the Redwall books) tried writing several stories at the same time and got stuck with all of them. He warned me about that, saying it was suicide to write more then one at the same time. So, yeah. Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 00:44, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

So far, I've put all of my fics except three on hold. I'm trying to do a fic set after "High Rhulain" from Tiria Wildlough's POV; a fic titled "Entwined Destinies" from the POV of my character Mayblossom; and I'm trying to write that fic "Streamrunner" from the POV of my character Jadrin Streamrunner. So far, I've hit blocks on all of them. TiriaW 01:14, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Update on my stories. Pinedance Coneslinger[[[User talk:Pinedance Coneslinger|^{Coneslinger Wood}]] 01:45, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

A lot of people put their fan fics up here before they're finished. When you hit writer's block people can help you.--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 13:57, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. On some, I have no idea how to even start the things and get only a few lines/paragraphs in the fic before my brain blanks. TiriaW 14:01, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

I have the same problem. I must have revised the opening for all my fan fics 10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 times!

Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 14:12, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

I messed up on adding the first piece to "Streamrunner" and had to blank the page.

I started to post the little bit I have done on my fic "Streamrunner" but I messed up on it so I blanked the page. I don't think I can do this. TiriaW 21:41, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

If it's on a word file, just copy paste! --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 21:44, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Is there a name for a section of text that would go in before a prologue? I have that part done and I'm keeping it as it is. I don't have to change it. TiriaW 21:47, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Section of text before prolouge? What do you mean? Sometimes BJ puts in a poem or a song or a nice bit of text, but I don't think there's a name for it. --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 21:48, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay. No problem. :) I just wanted to know if there was a name or not. TiriaW 21:59, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

I hope what I have posted so far of my fic doesn't stink. I've hit a wall and don't know how to continue.

I hope what I have posted so far of my fic doesn't stink. It's not much. I've hit a wall at this point and don't know how to continue. TiriaW 18:02, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

I read

Streamrunner and there is one thing you might want to change, but you don't have too. You might want to say 'born to Radlar and Brookflash' instead of 'Born to my mother, Brookflash, and my father, Radlar.' Other then that, it's really good! Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 19:10, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Do you know where you want to go generally? Launch into it straight away. The more setup there is, the harder it is to read. --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 19:12, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

I wish I did. I hate when a plot bunny just nibbles and runs off. TiriaW 21:17, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Lets see. You need a villain and a reason for Streamrunner to have a bone to pick with said villain. It's kind of hard to write in first person. (I am writing a mystery novel in first person and can uderstand how hard it is.) P.S. Please check out the poll on my page. At the bottom under I have to know. --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 21:18, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

I've already come up with the villain, but I have no idea how to bring her into the story. She's this wolverine named Rygar. She's got this large horde of wolves, arctic foxes, and ermine working for her.

I'm also trying to think of a good name for her horde. Wolverines only appeared in Rakkety Tam, so I thought I'd have the main enemy in this fic be a wolverine. TiriaW 00:51, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Horde name

Possibilities:

• The Ravagers

• The Slaughters

• Or maybe they don't have a name, like Cluny's horde!

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 00:51, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

I tried to set up a poll here and messed up. I can't do this. TiriaW 15:34, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

It's better to set up a poll on your user page. Tis simple once you learn how.

<poll>

Chicken or Beef?

Chicken

Beef

</poll>

And it will look like this: <poll> Chicken or Beef? Chicken Beef </poll> P.S. You're problem was you put in the <nowiki> tags. Just copy and paste the text without going into edit mode on your talk page.

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 15:43, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Histos vos crest! Pinedance Coneslinger^{Coneslinger Wood} 17:33, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Hey

Happy Easter! --ladyamber88 File:Happy Easter!.jpg ^{Please leave a message and I'll try to reply ASAP!} 18:42, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Happy Easter to you too! :) TiriaW 18:58, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Fan Fic Idea

I had an idea on how to introduce your enemy. Maybe Streamruner falls in the river and is swept away, where she witnesses some beasts being slaughtered and vows to defeat the one responsible.

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 23:31, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

I think it's a good idea! Maybe Jadrin's father or brother taught her something like "when a strong current catches you, you don't fight it; you swim with it until you can find a safe place downstream to get out of the water"; the current's running pretty fast and she's trying to find a place to get out of the river; when she finally finds a place to get out of the water she hears some kind of noise and hides just in time to witness the massacre? Would this work? If it would, I don't know who the victims should be. The fact that wolverines eat other animals should make it more intense, but I'm not sure how to write that part in. TiriaW 23:44, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

The beasts could be nameless. I could write it how I would do it and show that to you. That might help, if you want. --Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 00:43, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Could you show me an example please? Thanks. TiriaW 01:01, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Example

Here's a block of text I wrote.

I leapt into the river. The water sloshed around me like a living beast. This was what I was born to do! I felt freer than I ever had before! Finally I was allowed to swim without my brother by my side. I could handle myself. I launched into the air with a cry of pure delight and tried to make the biggest splash I could on the way down. This was wonderful! I was so caught up in swimming I didn’t feel the tug of the current as I was pulled away. When I realized that I was caught it was too late. I fought, but wasn’t strong enough. The current pulled me downriver I weakly grasped a stones as my strength seeped away. I lost all sense as a great blackness descended upon me.

The first thing I saw was the face of an old hedgehog. He looked a jovial fellow with a face that seemed ready to crack into a smile. I took an instant liking to him. He helped me as I recovered from the incident. I had almost drowned, but lucky for me I had washed up on a bank while asleep. He had rescued me. He gave some warm broth to drink as I shudder from the cold. He left to go gather some more herbs. I lay down to rest, but was woken again. The hedgehog seemed urgent. “Jadrin. Go hide, quickly, get away from here, now!” I obeyed and ran away. I shuddered in the night air ad I heard crashing and steel. I heard a scream. I crawled forward and looked. There was a huge creature! It held the head of the poor hedgehog! I felt sick as I watched the creature opened its mouth and took a bite out of the carcass! I stifled a scream. “Nobeast stands to Rygar!” the creature roared to the skies. Rygar. At that moment I swore I would find the beast by that name and slay them. I swore it on the bones of that poor old hedgehog who had been so kind to me. After they left, I made a grave for what was left of that old hedgehog. I stood up and roared my oath to the sky. “I, Jadrin Streamrunner, vow on the grave of my friend that I will slay Rygar! You hear me cannibal? I will slay you someday!”

--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 02:16, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

That's good! You're a great writer. TiriaW 02:47, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

You have my permission to use it anywhere if you want. It's not my best, bu tI think it's better than dome of my other writing.--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 02:48, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch. I think I'll use that for a scene in my fic :) --TiriaW 02:57, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Well, there's your problem!

For it to be a link you need it to be this: [[User:WildloughRhulain|TiaraW]][[User talk:WildloughRhulain|Talk!]] copy and paste that, NOT in edit mode, to your sig box, make sure custom sig is checked and TA DA!--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 22:33, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

I hope I got it. TiaraW Talk! 22:46, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! I guess I had a brain barf. :) TiaraW Talk! 22:52, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm having another problem now: I can access the USERPAGE link in my signature, but the link to my talkpage seems to be locked up. TiaraW Talk! 03:26, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

You're on your talk page, so it can't take you where you already are. Try it on my page and see if it works there.--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 03:37, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

I hope I got it now. TiaraW Talk! 12:02, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Thank You!!

Thanks and you're welcome! Can you read my fan fiction Ziral Silvertail's Quest?--Ziral Silvertail

I did! Your fic's great! :) TiaraW Talk! 17:44, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

---

Thank you so much! Sambrook The Artist File:New Sambrook.pngI do commissions 4 free! 21:54, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Glad to help! :) TiaraW Talk! 12:13, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

Update Tagg quest Shieldmaiden File:Zara whatisit.png ^{Tell Me Something I Don't Know!} 12:17, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

update on WOD--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 04:53, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Sorry,

but I can't help you beyond that. Ideas just pop into my head, all the time.--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 21:43, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

It's okay. You're a good writer. :) TiaraW Talk! 14:49, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Update on WOD--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 03:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Blogs

You can edit your own posts, deleting is limited to admin only. If you want to edit your posts you can. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 05:34, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Sad News

take a look at the top of my userpage please.--Martin II File:For MArtin2 copy.jpgYou dare challenge me? 03:07, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if this avatar change is allowable or not. If it's not, could someone please let me know and I'll revert it?

I turned that picture of Tiria Wildlough from the Tiria Wildlough link into my avatar; I hope it's allowable, but I don't know. If it's not, could someone please let me know and I'll revert it? Thanks. --WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 02:56, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

(had to find and fix the avatar pic)

Blogs

You can edit your own blog, if you can't you are doing something wrong. Only admins can delete. Everyone can edit their own blog posts. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 00:49, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

*gasp*!

You used my spoiler thingie! I'm honored. (Do you even know what a ROUS is?)--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 04:12, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

ROUS= Rodents Of Unusual Size; one of the dangers of the Fire Swamp. I love "The Princess Bride;" it's one of my favorite movies! I found the DVD last month. :) --WildloughRhulain [20px | ] ^{Taste stones!} 04:36, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Sig

I would have to see your code to help you. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 15:06, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

BUTTERCUP: Die!

WESLEY: Assss youuuuuuuuuuu wiiiiiiiiish!

• Laughs until dead. Again*

--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 02:40, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

ummmm, huh?PrardFile:EvilWolf.jpgGrrr... 02:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

From THe Princess Bride.--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 02:50, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 15:22, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't think the blog's working. I want to post my fanfics, but I can't edit after I post it.

I don't think the blog's working. I want to post my fanfics, but I can't edit the sections after I post them. I tried to post a small section I had of a fanfic, and then was unable to edit and add more to it. Is there a step-by-step walkthrough to do this? Here's an example of what's happening: I paste the text into my blog, give the section a name, sign it and post; then I notice a mistake, try to go back to that same page and edit a mistake I saw or add another section of text to the same part, and everything locks into "read-only" mode. I'm signed in and I'm working on MY blog. Am I messing something up? Could someone help me find out what's wrong please? And now the sig avatar's messed up again; all I'm seeing is the text and no picture. I don't know how to fix these. ---- WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 15:44, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

As you can see above, I fixed your sig link, cut and paste the code into the my preferences box.

I don't know what's up with the blog, ask Lord TBTLady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 15:48, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Editing the post title has never been an option, only content. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 16:56, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Hmm

cut and paste this text into your sig box. Go to the red more box in the upper right paw corner, click "my preferences" scroll down, make sure the box that says "custom sig" is checked, and paste this text in NOT in edit mode.

[[User:WildloughRhulain |<font color="Goldenrod ">WildloughRhulain </font>]] [[File:Tiria.JPG|20px|]] [[User talk:WildloughRhulain |^{<font color="red" size="2">Taste stones!</font>}]]

The sig will look like this: WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 17:21, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 17:32, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: Update List

Push the Edit button on this section to learn how. That will be step-by-step, I think....

Update List

Amberalla Galedeep File:Rapsword.jpg A Born Killer....

Sweet!

I like The Princess Bride too! It has been several years since I last watched it though. Pinedance ConeslingerFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 22:50, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean? --Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 01:24, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Update on WOD Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 01:54, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Queries

1. Creating an update list is entirely up to you, and so is how you do it. I say just look at how other users are doing it.

2. That's because your signature code is wrong again. You were supposed to replace it in preferences with the fixed one.

-- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 03:23, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

I can't make an update list. I want to, but I can't. It's not working.

I don't think the so-called "update list" on my page is even working. The Star Maiden left me a message saying if I went into edit mode on a section of text added to my talkpage, I'd find out, but all I saw when I went into edit mode was this signature:

"Amberalla Galedeep A Born Killer...."

The sig was under the topic "update list" but it doesn't seem like that "list" is working. The name's there, but it seems like that user isn't getting any updates. If I just create a PAGE titled "update list" and can fill in user's names, will it work? Will they still get updates? Will it work with all of the fics I'm writing or do I have to create different update lists for each fic?--WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 04:02, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you quite understand about updates. Say, if I were to update my Fan Fiction, I would then go to my update lists on my user page and leave a message on everyone's talk page. I wish it was automatic. --Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 04:08, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

(whacks self over head with rudder) So the user reads the names under the update list, looks at the names, goes individually to those users' talk pages and THEN posts an update notice: "update on fic 1" "update on fic 2"; ect. I'm STUPID. I should have seen that. WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 04:18, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

I guess, but seeing as all updates look practically the same I see how you could get confused.--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 04:27, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

What I did was create an update section on my user page and then mini sections for each of my fan fics.--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 04:38, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung enter Ribbajack! Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 17:13, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Do you mean like, plot details? --Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 18:50, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Well, when you brainstorm, don't be at a computer. It's distracting. T dreamed about half of mine.--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 19:22, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

I'll be your beta reader!--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 19:23, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung, Tagg Quest Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 19:35, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

I'll make a section of my userpage. You can post your stuff there, and I'll make comments below that. Would that work?--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 20:02, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Sounds like a great idea to me :)--WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 21:24, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

WOD update! Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 00:41, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Tagg Qust Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 02:01, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: Plot Bunnies

I'm honestly never heard of the term "plot bunny", so that would probably be no. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 03:25, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Try the RFFW. It's got loads of Fan Fic helps. The link is on Hollyfire's page.--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 03:38, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Tagg Quest Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 19:13, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Beta reading area

the link is here: user:Martin2/Beta--Martin II File:Jay.jpgWant to race? 22:35, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

oh. that's ok. Amber Streamgale File:Amber Streamgale.jpg ^{Talk to the Warrior!} 02:40, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Update AoS and Unsung, finished Tagg Quest Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 03:52, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 14:27, 12 May 2009 (UTC)

Update: User blog:Ladyamber88/Amber Streamgale --Amber Streamgale File:Amber Streamgale.jpg ^{Talk to the Warrior!} 23:57, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Update

Alanna of southsward Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 04:22, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I think you should somehow contact the original author. It depends, though. What is teh name?--Martin II File:Wiki.pngTalk! 03:34, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Update Unsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 04:40, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Updte Alanna of Soithsward Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 01:52, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

Update: User blog:Ladyamber88/Amber Streamgale --Amber Streamgale File:Amber Streamgale.jpg ^{Talk to the Warrior!} 00:05, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Ok, finally got unlazy enough to finish User blog:Ladyamber88/Kristy Streambattle. Hope you liked it. --Amber Streamgale File:Amber Streamgale.jpg ^{Don't mess with me!!} 02:46, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

update UInsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 03:16, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Update ACQ and here's yore pic. :) File:Jadrin.JPG Pinedance ConeslingerFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 22:37, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Update!

TS!--Martin II File:Wiki.pngTalk! 02:54, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

Update AoS Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 20:48, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

You're welcome. Pinedance ConeslingerFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 22:47, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't notice that

oh sorry, didn't notice that! (I'm usin speed sign cause I gotta go, oh an would you join us in? we could really use ya!--Silverfalcon Pikehawk 16:22, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Oh, if you join Wars, please be on Lady Amber's team. We need more people on it! Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 17:12, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

You can be on Silverfalcon's team(the baddies) or mine(the goodies) and you do anything that is not against the rules to try and destroy the other team. It's fun!! Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 17:16, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

You're side won't turn against you no matter what you do. Haha! Lady Amber and I were singing in horrid voices and nobeast on our side turned against us. Then Martin2(EVIL!!) gave us good singing voices and we enchanted everybeast against us. Basically you can do almost anything to destroy your enemies that isn't against the rules(Look on the top of the Wars page for the rules). Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 18:24, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

You do whatever you what to. For example:(I'm pretending I'm you for the moment)*chops Silverfalcon in two and gets army of ROUS to attack his cohorts*Take that! It's crazy. Or you could:(These are just messages I'm using to show you how you could help) *jumps up and down on Martin2's stomach chanting* Rain, rain, go away, Come again some other day! Get it? Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 19:07, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Pinedance, I just got an idea: I come in, start slinging stones to get the enemy's attention focused on me; when they have all eyes and ears on me, I start belting out the Barney theme at the tops of my lungs; the enemy turns tail and runs for their lives :). "Oh no! That otter's NUTS!" LOL --WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 19:13, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay! Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 19:14, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, mine weren't showing up either, but it should be working now. Do whatever you want. You could even bounce up and down on the enemy's dragons and make them carry you around. :) Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:MarielGull.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 01:17, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Update

update UnsungLady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 01:56, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Help in story

Well, I read what you have, and I looked at your character pages, so you could have Rygar go south, and destroy her holt, taking Skipjack as a slave. Jadrin would pursue her, meeting many friends, and enemies, on the way. Your most trustworthy warrior, ~Blizzard6654. P.S. Next time, could you just leave a message on my talk page? It's much easier that way.

PoL

I didn't revert your edit at all. I'd advise you to check the page history. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 22:32, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Now then, what do you want to happen next? I'm not entirely sure of thta. Contact me if you've made a breakthrough. Umrag the Destroyer 23:36, 4 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

I'm trying to figure out the next piece for Streamrunner now. :) --WildloughRhulain File:Tiria.JPG ^{Taste stones!} 23:55, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Grammar

You got everything right, except this: Tell you what,{that's supposed to be this symbol ;} I'll let you live and keep you as my personal slave. Umrag the Destroyer 00:15, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Jumping between scenes

I think it's fine. What's your next idea on this story? Umrag the Destroyer 00:24, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Sounds cool to me

Yes, that sounds fine. Maybe Rygar needs to have a meeting with all her captains, so she tells him to contact the captains and bring them to her tent. As he walks around he meets numerous different vermin, and gets to know the camp.{I think My Lady sounds better then mistress, but it's your choice} Umrag the Destroyer 00:55, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Story

Scene figured, though this will be pretty long. Skipjack was lying on the ground, having a rest after the march. The march was not long, but he had to carry some of Rygar's things, not to mention drag his chains along. He was enjoying a bit of quietness and peacefulness when an ermine kicked him, and said, "Get up. Rygar wants to see you." The otter gulped nervously. Why had she summoned him? When they got to her tent the stoat stepped forward and called out, "Commander, I have brought him." She answered back in a smooth, silky voice. "Bring him in the tent, then leave us." Skipjack entered the tent, shaking. What horrors would he find inside? The tent was sparsely furnished, for Rygar had no time for such foolish things. She was sitting on a plain wooden chair, and they're were similar chairs next to her. Yet there was a feel of darkness in this tent, a feel of death. He bowed low, and asked, "What are my orders, My Lady?" She smiled dangerously and said, "I will be having a meeting with my captains. Be sure to get them here by one hour. Or else..." The otter swallowed again, and answered, "Yes, My Lady." Then he exited the tent, still bowing. Once he got out he started walking in a random direction. It was not long before he came across a small group of foxes, all who were eating woodpidgeon. He timidly walked up, and asked,"Um, sirs, could you point me to where the Captains are, sirs?" One fox, larger then the rest, wiped his mouth on his hand and stood up, walking to Skipjack. "Oh look, it's Rygar's little pet, wandering all alone here. Why don't we show him the correct way, eh mates?" The group sniggered. The otter nervously backed away from him, then cried out in pain and fell on his knees as the fox punched him in the stomach. Then the fox grabbed Skipjack by the neck and brought him closer to his own face, and then he threw him on the ground. Suddenly a voice sounded out of the gloom. "Don't you have better things to do then to assasult Rygar's slave?" The fox ran as he heard that voice, and he was closely followed by his comrades. A tall wolf stepped out, looking at Skipjack. "What are you doing here, slave? You should be back at your spot!" The otter stood up and said, "Sir, I need to find all the captains and bring them to Rygar." The wolf grinned, and said, "Well, you have one captain right here, and I know were the rest are. Probably." The otter asked, "Could you take me to them, sir?" "Of course. But you better not speak unless you're forced to. Some captains take offence very easily." As they walked the otter asked various questions, and he would answer them. "Where exactly are we going, sir?" "We'll be going to Captain Smena's tent. She's the only female captain in this horde. She can charm almost any vermin with her looks, and she excellent at weilding a blade." They soon reached a tent which was packed with creatures and full of noise. They entered the tent and the wolf tried to overshout the din when a slender, female fox called out, "Quiet! Captain Saberfang wants to speak!" "Well, Rygar's new slave wants to tell you-"Quiet!" A large wolf, twice as big as Saberfang, put a cutlass at his throat. "If he wants to speak then let him speak!" The otter gulped and said, "Captains, Rygar wants to speak with you at her tent." An old, wizened stoat walked up to him and wheezed, "What if we don't want to go, eh? What then?" The captians began pressing in on him, all shouting objections. All except for Captain Saberfang. He stood secluded, growing paler by the minute. Suddenly all the captians fell back, scared of something. Skipjack turned, and fell from a glancing blow. He swallowed as he saw Rygar above him, scowling angrily. "Why did this take so long? Why did you not just blow the whistle?!" The otter cried out as her footpaw smashed on to his chest, constricting his breathing. "My Lady, uhhh, I got no whistle from anybody!" She gnashed her teeth and called out, "Rargar, get over here!" The ermine that brought Skipjack to the tent went in, and said, "Yes Commander?" Her voice sounded like thunder. "Why did you not give him the whistle?!" "I-Arghhh!" She slew him with one single blow, and took a bonehandled whistle from his corpse. "Here, just blow it and any hordebeast will follow you." She turned, and exited the tent, followed by the captains. A fox took Skipjack back to his post.

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I hope you like it, I put a lot of effort into it. Umrag the Destroyer 02:20, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Whoops

How about...Dargar! Umrag the Destroyer 02:41, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Yes

I meant Skipjack. You're switching to Jadrin next, right? Umrag the Destroyer 03:26, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Skipping scene

How about this? As I grew older I began to realise it was not likely that I could avenge my rescuer's murder, so I asked my dad to teach me how to sling well. We took lessons in slinging, and soon I became a master. Then, a season after I was rescued, we had two more kits, Ayeren and Cadron. They were both little scamps, running around all over the place. Soon, Skipjack taught them how to swim, and I instructed them in the art of slinging. Father made them little slings, perfect for those rascals. We once met a large otter, who said he was Skipper of Redwall Abbey. We wanted to go there, and we were about to leave, when disaster struck.

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You think that's enough for four seasons? I'm not entirely sure. Umrag the Destroyer 15:40, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

?

What type of tracks? And, is it the same friend that made her the portrait? And also, what would she need back at the holt? Umrag the Destroyer 15:55, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

O-kay

Sure! So who's the friend? Umrag the Destroyer 16:02, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Sorry, but whenever I get a chance to read it something changes. --Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 16:20, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

check out Wolfrise, its my fan fic

title says all --Colonel Acelin 16:20, 5 June 2009 (UTC)colonel acelin

alright

Sure! Should I start doing the scene now? Umrag the Destroyer 16:21, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Scene

This good? We were about to leave when Ayeren suddendly fell over, and started wheezing and coughing. "Are you alright, Ayeren?" She was curled up in a ball, and was wheezing worse and worse. "Throat um be hurting, and head too. It hurts!" Jadrin worriedly knelt, and touched Ayeren's forhead. She gasped. It was ice-cold! "Cadron, can you carry our stuff? I'll need to carry her." The little one grabbed the stuff and said, "Where we be going, Jadrin?" "Remeber Haunicca?{I know, random name} We're going to visit her, and she'll make Ayeren alright." Haunicca was a nice and cheerful haremaiden, about Jadrin's age. She lived in a small, cozy hut, all alone in the woods. Her father, before he died, had taught her how to box. She was an expert. Once they got their a slim haremaid with a clearly homemade kilt stepped out, smiling. "What ho, Jadrin, what brings ya to me cozy little home?" "Ayeren is sick. Can you help her?" Haunicca looked at Ayeren, and said, "Sure thing, but this'll take a while, doncha know. Why don't you make us some food while I'm working?" Jadrin nodded and turned to Cadron. "Cadron! Where are the food packs?!" The little otter giggled and said, "Ooops, I forgot em. Bring em back Jadrin, will ya?" The haremaiden roared with laughter as Jadrin's hand slapped to her brow. "Fine,I'll go get them. Haunicca, make sure this little rougue doesn't run away!" As she was running home she noticed something strange. There were tracks, but not just any tracks.Her father had taught her all sorts of tracks, and this one was a wild cat. The tracks led straight home. As she nervously entered the holt, some sixth sense made her turn around. She only had time for a quick scream before something tackled her and everything went black.

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SUSPENCE!!!!!! _____________________{insert maniacal laughter there} Hope you like the scene, and you're welcome! Umrag the Destroyer 16:54, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Go ahead and post the stuff on the beta page. Will try to be quicker this time 8|--Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 16:55, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

You mean the scene I wrote? Wasn't that already in there?--Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 18:53, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Explanation

What I mean is after evrything that we have now, when Jadrin and co. are about to leave to find Skipjack, Ayeren get's sick. They take her to her friend, then Jadrin goes back to the holt, where she gets attacked by whomever. Umrag the Destroyer 19:06, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Sure

That's fine with me! Umrag the Destroyer 20:48, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

All good

Everything is good now, 'cpet you forgot to capitilise some sentences. Once they enter the hut, maybe Haunicca tackles the wildcat and stuns him for a short time{she's good at boxing, remember} Umrag the Destroyer 21:53, 5 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Story

Sounds good, and the accent SEEMS correct to me. {I'm not too good at it either} I think Pinedance Coneslinger knows a lot about this accent. So, we going back to Skipjack, or are we staying at Jadrin? Umrag the Destroyer 00:15, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Idea

I have an idea for Skipjack: Rygar tells him to bring her food, so when he's really close to her he slips, and food spills on Rygar. He gets punished severly, and when he falls asleep he's ready to give up hope. But then Martin the Warrior comes to him in a vision, and tells him not to give up, that Jadrin is coming, etc. etc. etc. Umrag the Destroyer 00:29, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Finished User blog:Ladyamber88/Amber Streamgale --Amber Streamgale File:Amber Streamgale.jpg ^{Don't mess with me!!} 00:39, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

O-kay

Sure! Umrag the Destroyer 01:08, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Hmmm...

I think ten isn't enough, maybe twenty. I was also thinking about Rygar slowly, extremly painfully, scratching Skipjack chest, from his left shulder to his right hip, or something like that. Umrag the Destroyer 01:41, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

*snort* Sure

Why don't we do both, if you want the readers to REALLY hate Rygar, as you put it. Umrag the Destroyer 01:50, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

?

I don't get your point. Why shouldn't they be able to hate her even more? Umrag the Destroyer 01:58, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Scene

Here we are, then: "Get up, slave. Rygar wants you to bring her food." Skipjack stood up, groaning. He was exhausted, both because of his labor and because of constantly fearing Rygar. As he took the food and walked to her tent, he was lagging more and more, until every step was an effort. When he reached her tent at last, his eyes were almost closed. Then, right next to Rygar, he fell asleep. He slipped on a patch of wet grass, and the food flew right into Rygar's lap! Skipjack's eyes went wide open as the bronze{or whatever} plate clattered to the floor. He cried out in terror as Rygar picked him up by the neck, her face exploding in rage. "I need four guards at the double, now! You two, clean up this mess, and you two, chain that otter someplace up and give him twenty lashes!" The guards obeyed instantly and without question, knowing what Rygar could do when she was angry. They chained up the otter between two trees, leaving him quite helpless. "Now, take his tunic off{or whatever coveres his chest and chest only!} so the blows will hurt him more. Skipjack prevented himself from crying out in pain as the first lash hit his back. He managed to not cry out till the sixth. After that, what was a horror became a nightmare. His back was covered in rivulets of blood, and he found it painful to move. Rygar dismissed the two guards and stood in front of Skipjack, sharpening her claws on a rock. "Now then, Skipjack, you know the only reason I let you live is because I thought you would make a good, capable slave. That can change if you keep making these mistakes. This time, I won't kill you, but I will teach you a lesson." The otter shuddered. Then he screamed as the wolverine dug her claws in his left shoulder, and then dragged them down, so slowly. The otter was covered in sweat, panting, and half-dead by the time Rygar finished. She broke the chains and placed a footpaw on Skipjack's body, which had fallen to the ground. "This is your last warning." Then she walked away, and let the guards carry Skipjack back to his posts. Almost immediately he fell asleep, not even bothering to eat. In his dreams there was darkness and terror everywhere, vermin sacking villages, and evil covered this world. Tears poured unchecked down the otter's face, as he knelt and cried out, "Must I succumb to evil?! Is there nothing I can do?!" "No." Skipjack looked up. He saw a ray of light shining through the darkness, and out of it was striding a strong, handsome mouse with a beatiful sword. "Do not lose hope, Skipjack, for Jadrin is coming. Jadrin is coming, and nothing will stop her!" Skipjack awoke with a jolt, thinking only about three words. Jadrin is coming!

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Hope you like it! Umrag the Destroyer 02:56, 6 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

New fan fic

Hi Lady Wildlough, I have a new fan fic posted! I am Lord Brocktree of Salamandastron File:Brocktree.jpg ^{Want some combat?}

I meant on both stories, I can't wait to read more, its really interesting!!--Aida Otterock File:AOTfanart.jpg ^Talk! 20:12, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Story

I think your right, 'bout Lady Rygar, and changing Martin's words, and all that stuff. Well, about the scene, here you go.

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Haunicca desperately put a warm rag on Ayeren's brow, and gave her more medicine. But nothing seemed to help. Suddenly, Cadron yelled, "Look, it's a wildcat!" The haremaiden ran to the window, and sure enough, there was a wildcat running to her home. "Cadron, sling at it!" The babe shot a rock, and the wildcat narrowly ducked it. Haunicca ran up, and blacked his eye out. Then Jadrin arived on the scene, and shouted, "He's a friend, he's a friend!" The haremaiden paused in mid-punch, and stared inridicoulsly{how do you spell that} at Jadrin. "WHAT?! Vermin are never friends Jadrin, you should know that!" At this point Cadron ran out and cried, "Don't hurt em, varmint!" The wildcat groaned and rubbed his eye, saying, "Ah'll have ya know that mah name is Garnrion Swiftaxe, and ah'm no varmint! Ah'm here to help the sick un'!"

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I'll need to think about how to continue this, but here you are! Umrag the Destroyer 23:07, 7 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

update

on WOD--Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 23:11, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Scene

Haunicca and Cardon watched Garidiron with eagle eyes as he approached Ayeren's bed. "Let me see ya, lassie." He looked over her carefully, and then he said, "Lassie, do you have an allergy to ants? " The otterkit nodded. "Well, then ah know what to do." He fed her some medicine and she fell asleep. Soon they were back up, and Jadrin and her friends prepared to leave. Then Haunicca bounded up, holding a haversack of her own. "What ho, chaps, I'm coming with ya!" Jadrin stood up and said, "No way, Haunicca. I don't want you to get hurt." Gardiron grinned. "Why aren't ya objecting to me, lassie? Ah'm going too." Jadrin whirled around on him. "You have a good reason to go, but Haunicca-"I have a good reason also." They turned to her, shocked. "Rygar killed my pa, and I'm not gonna sit around here while you guys go off to adventures!" There was a moment of awkward silence, then Cadron said, "Well, I don't know about you twee, but I'm rescuing Skipjack." The group chuckled and started walking, following their destiny.

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I can do the part with Skipjack as soon as you tell me a bit more. Healing is just not enough. Umrag the Destroyer 01:47, 8 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Scene

Here you are: Skipjack woke, aching all over. A stoat walked up and said in a harsh tone, "Get up, slave. We have some marching to do." The poor otter tried to stand, but he could not. The stoat whipped him, again and again, but the otter still didn't get up. Then the stoat stopped whipping him and moved over, bowing. Skipjack looked up, and saw Rygar standing over him. "So, slave, do you want me to kill you now, or do you want to live?" Skipjack tried to stand again, but he couldn't. "My Lady, uhhh, I can't, uhhh, stand up!" She smiled cruelly. "Then I shall make you." "My Lady?" She turned, to see Captain Saberfang bowing before her. "Maybe we should heal him, My Lady?" She grabbed him by the neck, and bared her teeth. "What?!" The wolf blanched with fear, and spoke. "My Lady, what use to you is a slave who can't stand properly?" She let him go, leaving the wolf massaging his throat. "So be it. Get a healer, Saberfang!" Skipjack watched from almost closed eyes as Saberfang walked away. The otter wondered, who's side was the wolf really on?

Umrag the Destroyer 03:31, 8 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

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Scene

There you go:

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Suddenly, Ayeren felt something bite her and she yelped with pain. Jadrin looked at her. "You okay, Ayeren? Need a rest?" The otterkit shook her head. "Skipjack is more important. Let's go!"

{extra line}Everyone bowed their heads, sorry. They never thought that Ganrion was such a good beast.

{after Skipjack gets knocked out} His mother screamed and ran to the far side of the Holt. She managed to outrun her foes, but they were coming, and quickly. "Ayeren, Cadron, go hide in the water and use reeds to breath! Hurry!" They obeyed, both scared witless. Just after they ran a contemptous voice sounded behind the ottermum. "If you tell me where those little otters went, I'll let you live, scum." She turned, and saw a wolverine with a nocked bow. Her face was completely devoid of fear as she answered, "I do not fear my own death, but you will pay if you harm one single hair on Skipjack's head." The wolverine smiled. "Then die!" The poor ottermum was blasted back from the force of the shot.

Hope that helped! Umrag the Destroyer 02:29, 10 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Jadrin gasped as she heard that Skipjack was captured. "But where is Mom, then?" They sniffed, and then took Jadrin to the back door. There, she saw her mother's corpse, with a giant arrow sticking through her. Jadrin cried out in horror, and began to pry out the arrow. After that she took the body and put it next to her father, then arranged them in a sleeping position.

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Shouldn't you have put I knelt and squeezed his STIFFENED paw, not stiffening, since he's long dead. Hope this helps! Umrag the Destroyer 13:35, 10 June 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Could

you have a look at the Mossflower General Company Patrol, please? The info is on Mauran's blog. Thanks :) Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:Celandine and Felldoh.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 01:01, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

update AoSLady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 01:00, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Update.--Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:Celandine and Felldoh.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 23:26, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Update.--Pinedance the Slinger of PineconesFile:Celandine and Felldoh.JPG^{Coneslinger Wood} 22:44, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Update on The Storm. Wow, that took FOREVER. Sorry, been rather busy *cough* lazy *cough* lately, so it's not much to show for a week.--Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 03:08, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Finished with the beta corrections!--Martin II File:Wiki.pngConfucius say FIGHT! 03:14, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Dual

You wana fight the real redwall way? you want to become the stongest of them all? Then go here!--I'm Elmtail, please read Elmtails tail! File:Elmtailpic.JPG Communicate with me 18:51, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Hello

Hi!I'm Bluestripe the Wild and I want to be your friend.If you want to be my friend, leave a message on my talk page.Please read, rate, and comment on my fan fic and essays.It was nice meeting you!Bye!

From Bluestripe the Wild(Sorry, my signature is messed up.I will fix it, though!)

Can you please put your sig. under the Friends category on my page?

From Bluestripe

Meet me at the shoutbox!--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 01:56, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Go to Widget Dashboard on your page.Once you click on it, you'll see it.--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 02:01, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Would it not let you post another message? You might have accidentally hit the X button on there.I'm not too sure. Ask Lord TBT, he'll know.We can just send send messages to each others' talk pages.--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 03:00, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, if you head on over to the Widgets dashboard it should be there. There's also a button at the top of the Widget Dash where you can add it to your sidebar (that's what I've done.) I'll give you the link in a second.

--Long Patrol Girl File:Longpatrolgirl.jpg ^{"Fish and Chips!!"} 03:01, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Special:Widgets is where you can add it to your sidebar.

--Long Patrol Girl File:Longpatrolgirl.jpg ^{"Fish and Chips!!"} 03:03, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Oh, .........that must be REALLY hard for you.That's terrible how you they never told you!--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 03:16, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

:( x 100000

That's..........horrible. Your own family talking about his death and acting like it was nothing. Then your grandma has to go talking about your friend's death in front of you.Do you have other relatives you would like to stay with for a while?--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 03:48, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm gonna leave tomorrow for NYLT.It's for Boy Scouts.I'll be back Saturday.But, I leave for the beach that night.Good thing is that I'll probably have internet access there.--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe the Wild.jpg ^{For Salamandastron!} 03:51, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Updates

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Update TS--Martin the Loony File:Wiki.pngAm being… Mysterious… 15:35, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Update TS--Martin the Loony File:Wiki.pngAm being… Mysterious… 17:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

update Unsung Lady of the Shield-arm File:Zara whatisit.png ^{By My Sword I Am} 23:47, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Update on ST--Martin the Loony File:Wiki.pngAm being… Mysterious… 19:08, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

hoi

Part one of my carefully planned revenge complete! UPDATE UNSUNG

And be SURE to read the A/N

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 13:17, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Deathsong Update

Yes, i did just update it! Yaaaaay!--Eulaliaaaa! Forward the Buffs! I gave you my music... : ( 22:03, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Ya welcome! ~Layla the Wildcat File:LaylaGoldeneyes LPG.jpg Talk! 21:56, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Hi,have a jolly ole Holloween! --Stardust Haremaiden 22:09, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Update The Siege

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Update ACQ.--Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Pine-Barko color.JPG^{Want to chat?} 18:39, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

UPdate

Alanna of Southsward

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 19:58, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

What's up?

We haven't talked in a while. What's new? --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 16:41, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

I've been changing the personality of the main character for my story,The Lord of Bloodwrath. Now he's cocky, arrogant, quiet, unstoppable, and he's after the creature that slew his clan. --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 16:47, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

You mean the shout box? Yeah, it is still here. Ya need help findin' it? And the story I was talkin' takes place after the story I'm still writing,Bluestripe, a Name Remembered. I'm almost done. I'm on Chapter 29 where the final battle finishes up. THere will be 3 deaths in that chapter! There will only be 32 chapters and the epilogue, so I'm almost done. --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 16:56, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

You go to widgets or somethin' or widget watchlist. --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 17:05, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Who are your favorite heroes and villains? What chapter are you at? --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 22:24, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Update

The Siege

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 22:43, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yes! Someone who likes Acer! I wanted him to be a popular character, but...--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 23:42, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Streamrunner

Please send messages to User:Umrag the Destroyer, because I forgot Blizzard6654's password. Anyway, here is some stuff.

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Scene with Jadrin leaving: "Honey, I'm a bit low on dock leaf. Will you go gather it?" my mother called. "Sure!" I replied. I departed, carrying nothing but I sling and some food. Little did I know what would happen when I was away!

Scene with woodlander As we sprinted after the tracks of the vermin horde we got tired quickly. Soon we stopped for a rest to regain our breath. A vole suddenly came out. He was old, and had scars all over his face. He said, "Why hello there, my friends! Perhaps you would like to come in and drink some tea with me?" We agreed, and followed him to his home. As we walked he said conversationally, "There's this wolverine, she's been causing lots of trouble lately. They say she slaugthers anyone she sees, and more. Not what was her name-"Rygar?" put in Garnrion quitely. My mind had been dwelling on other things, but with the mention of her name I snapped back into focus. "Rygar?!" I growled. Later, Garnrion said he had never seen anything like this. He said that veins all over my body stood out, foam formed on my lips, and most disturbing of all, my eyes turned red. Red as blood. I had leaped at the vole, trying to maul him with my paws and legs. Garnrion barley managed to stop me in time, and he staggered a few steps before holding me off. "Come to your sences, Jadrin!!! He's not your enemy!" The blood-red haze dissapaered before my eyes, and the vole was nowhere in sight. "What did I do?" I murmered, staring at the clumps of red-orange fur in my paws before passing out.

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There go my creative juices. For Skippjack, I had this idea, but I'm not sure if you'll like it. Umrag the Destroyer 18:34, November 12, 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

I know. MUHAHAHA!! My idea was that Rygar would have a special unit working for her. This unit would be an expert in pretty much anything. And this unit is a female otter. So Rygar finds out that Saberfang is planning to help Skippjack escape, and she sends thsi otter to seduce Skippjack. He falls for it, seeing as she is pretty, and then he has an argument with Saberfang, who dissapears later. The otter acts as a slave and sees Skippjack very often. Her description: Amber eyes, black fur with a few pearly-white spots, slim, unusually long claws, teeth that some say can bite through metal, a very sharp wit, sence of humor, and the ability to calm down nearly everybody. That's it. Umrag the Destroyer 22:19, November 12, 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Badger Ruler "Atttten-shun!! Posss-itions!! Lady __________ (insert name here) is commmm-ing through!" yelled a hare, presumably a sergeant.

Umrag the Destroyer 22:34, November 12, 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Well, here's two more scenes. One with Rygar talking to the unit, one with Skippjack meeting her.: One "So you're saying the wolf is a traitor, My Lady?" the cloaked figure said, tossing a stilleto back and forth. "Yes." replied Rygar. "What do you want me to do about it?" "You? Nothing. I'lldeal with the wolf myself. You deal with the otter." The blade fell into the figure's hands, and did not fly into the air again. Instead, it gleamed, in a particularly dangerous way. "The otter?" the figure asked. "Yes." "Very well, My Lady." The cloaked figure slipped into the darkness, as if it had never been there.

Two Skippjack fiddled with a piece of grass, looking down at his feet. He couldn't wait till his escape from this camp. With luck, it would happen soon. "What are you doing?" asked a voice, at the same time as a soft paw descended on his shoulder. He whirled around, and stared into the most beautiful face he had ever seen. An otter with a ragged skirt and tunic was smiling at him. Her fur was black, with a few white spots on her arms. Two amber-colored eyes stared into his, entrancing him in every way possible. He blushed, and said, "N-n-nothing. Who are a-are you?" "I go by the name of __________ (insert name here). Rygar captured me, and now I have no hope of survival." (you can take it from there) Umrag the Destroyer 22:56, November 12, 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

OK. Message receieved!

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 23:14, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Righto then. I'll simply wait. ---Clockworthy File:Madmaudie.jpg From Clockworth to Eternity, or wherever my stories lie 00:04, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Streamrunner

That name for the special unit is good. Scene with ermine I had heard a river nearby, and decided to fill our canteens with water. As I approached I was aware of a slight rustling followed by a slurping sound. i had behind some shrubbery and saw an ermine drinking from the river in great big gulps. At her side lay a standard with a picture of a wolverine on it. Rygar! I growled, and lept at her. My eyes were tinged with blood again as I jumped on the vermin and grabbed her by the throat. She tried to resist but in my Bloodwrath nothing could stop me. It took me no effort to grab the scum and push her into the water. When she was about to suffocate i came to my sences.

That's all I can think off now. Her name could be...Anna? I guess? Umrag the Destroyer 14:09, November 13, 2009 (UTC)Umrag the Destroyer

Re: Vandal

Hi, you must be misreading the page. After I blocked him, he has been gone. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 04:26, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Again, you're misreading the page somehow. The vandal's last edit was at 18:09. I blocked him permanently at 18:11. No more edits after that. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 05:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Update

The Siege

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 00:05, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Sure- easy!

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 21:42, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Tonngrian - The Courage of a Sunwave

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 22:26, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Update

The Siege

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 13:41, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

On Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 02:14, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Update

on Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 22:30, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Another Update

Tonngrian [=

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 04:45, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Update

on Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 05:00, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 02:37, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Update. --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 23:01, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Small one on Tonngrian.

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 00:20, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Final Update

--Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 19:31, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 05:48, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Happy Holidays, Rhulain! --Bluestripe the Wild File:Bluestripe.jpg ^{I am the Wild!} 15:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Merry Christmas, WR!--Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Pine-Barko color.JPG^{Want to chat?} 20:52, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Minor Update

The Siege. I hope to have more up soon! Merry Christmas!

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 04:58, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! You, too! --Martin II File:Wiki.pngI scare myself... 19:49, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Update on The Storm (no it isn't finished. It will probably be next week)--Martin II File:Wiki.pngI scare myself... 21:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 05:59, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Update!

Tonngrian

--Rhula Sunwave - Suuunwaaaaaaaave!!! 07:22, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Update.--Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Pine-Barko color.JPG^{Want to chat?} 17:35, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Update

The Siege

ShieldmaidenFile:Thorn the Shieldmaiden.jpgI live by honor and die like a warrior 03:47, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Block

Not sure where you say that they were blocked, because they are not. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 18:19, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!

Thanks! I meant Cieran, sorry for not being clearer. I love your Username, too! :) Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 18:46, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

UPdate

Update on Redwall's Hero!-----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 19:44, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hey WildloughRhulain, I just added chapter 2 of my fanfiction!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 21:48, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if I can be your beta anymore

I don't know if I can be your beta anymore. Sorry, I don't have much time, really. I can help with ideas and names, though. --Martin II File:Wiki.pngThe Mad Poet 23:45, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hurm... Well, I think the character (this is the Nyestreak one) could be a little deeper, you know? It's kind of, well, recycled. (sorry) --Martin II File:Wiki.pngThe Mad Poet 23:58, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah

My advice for characters is when you have a really good idea, fit into the other really good idea your working on. For example (yes I know I seem stuck-up when I use my own work as example, but it works for me) when Alana Daran and Card Jordan (they're on another wiki) asked me to write a back-story for their book, I took about five-six ideas I'd already developed and merged them into a single time-line. A better example is Waves of Darkness where I took one idea (Zarstan the Cruel) and merged it with another (mysterious otter man) and another (Now that would be a spoiler!) and created the current story. --Martin II File:Wiki.pngThe Mad Poet 04:49, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re: How could you say that

Oh... So can't you find another beta? Even if somebod was editing your work, the ideas were still all yours, and they're all really cool ideas. Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 19:16, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I kind of see what you mean. I'm pretty new here, so I don't really know anyone to ask, but i could try, If you want. Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 19:27, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Of course not! And you're not a terrible writer! The Legend of the Green Arrow, like I said, is one of the best ffs I've ever read! Redally, it'd be you putting up with me, XD. Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 19:40, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

for Legend of the Green Arrow, while Grath is in the Rainbow Cave, you could have another flashback describing a little of what happened after the Redwallers left. Creatures she met, if she and Inbar ad any children, or even the wedding that she and Inbar had. (the light glancing off the crystals could remind her of something from the wedding) Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 19:55, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe Inbar could wake up, see that Grath is gone, and guess that she goes to the cave.Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 20:38, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

A beta page on my site would be great! I really like your idea for Inbar's proposal- maybe it you could have the bands not be bands, maybe something like an earring? Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 14:57, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Update

Large update on Redwall's Hero-----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 01:40, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 17:54, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Lance

It's a special object, like the Sword of Martin. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 23:56, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Chapter 3 posted on Vengeance and Wrath

Chapter 3 posted on Vengeance and Wrath!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 01:28, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 01:34, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hey WildloughRhulain, there's an update on Vengeance and Wrath!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 03:47, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The beta page you made...

When you made our beta page, how did you start that page? I'd like to make an art gallery for myself, but i can't figure out how. Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 20:14, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Fainnen File:Adaerna galloper photoshopped.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 17:31, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Update

Update on Redwall's Hero -----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 21:32, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Update

Fairly large update on Redwall's Hero -----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 22:00, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 22:32, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 01:05, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Update

Update on Redwall's Hero--Been a while, hasn't it? -----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 13:51, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Update.--Pinedance ConeslingerFile:Pine-Barko color.JPG^{Want to chat?} 18:47, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

UpDaTe!

Update on Vengeance and Wrath! Come check it out!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 16:29, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

update

On The Runaway, sorry it took so long.--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 21:20, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 01:25, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--23:34, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Update-Vengeance and Wrath

Chapter 7 of Vengeance and Wrath is posted!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 16:39, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Update on Redwall's Hero -----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 20:02, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 01:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 00:11, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

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Update on Redwall's Hero -----Clockworthy File:Tiria3-1.JPG Redwall's Hero 12:08, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway (there's a poll too.)--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 21:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Why do people have to be so serious? 02:09, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye ee! 20:12, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye ee! 15:24, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

On Vengeance and Wrath! Chapter 8 is posted!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 16:15, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye ee! 21:48, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Storm. --Martin II File:Wiki.pngThe Mad Poet 01:49, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye ee! 13:54, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Happy Easter! Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiaaaaaa!} 14:57, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye ee! 21:52, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 19:13, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 20:14, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

NOTICE

Because of lack of commenting, I have removed you from my update list so it isn't so long. Leave a message on my talk page if you want me to continue updating you.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 21:24, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On Vengeance and Wrath!! Hope you like it!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 16:09, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sure

I'll keep updating you.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 20:24, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 03:17, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Where've you been? I haven't seen you in forever! Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 03:50, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

If U don't mind me asking. What kind of health issues? --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 04:00, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I see. --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 04:12, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway, sorry it took so long, i've been busy moving *cough* and lazy *cough*. --Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 20:05, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hey! :3

It's great to see you/talk to you/write with you again! *squish* How's life? Fainnen File:Adaerna running.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 09:01, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doin' pretty good. My summer starts Thursday. I gotta study for exams. xP Yuck. --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 18:19, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Update

The Siege

Shieldmaiden(talk) 01:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway. There's a poll too.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 01:11, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

me too. D:

Argh, the same thing happens to me. DX I have all the characters and the plot decided, but then, when I start to write, it won't come out. I hope it starts going better for you! Will you stay active long, d'you think? Fainnen File:Adaerna running.jpg ^{Hares, sabres, and scoff, oh my!} 20:23, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway, almost finished with book two!--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 18:49, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Voting for my contest

Hi! I was wondering if you could vote in my art contest. Just go here to vote. Please vote in all three polls. Thanks! Wild Doogy Plumm File:Doogy068.jpg File:Wild doogy plumm.PNG Haway Braaaaaw!

Update

Guess what? I've updated The Runaway! There's a poll too.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 22:31, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 18:17, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Update!

On Vengeance and Wrath! I’m sorry I haven’t updated in a while! Writer’s block, school, and camp have slowed me down. I promise I will update more often!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 00:38, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

On Vengeance and Wrath!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 22:17, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

On Vengeance and Wrath!--Trisslivesinme ^EULALIAAAA! 14:22, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 16:34, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 18:45, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Update

A Greenstone

Brockfang File:Brockfang.JPG Eeeee aye eeeeee 02:52, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

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The Siege

Shieldmaiden(talk) 01:26, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 01:34, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Update

On The Runaway.--Rorc Ee aye eeeh! 01:24, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

If ye don't mind, I'd like t' clarify somethin'

In your characters from your fanfic Legend of the Green Arrow it says that Riggdogg is five seasons old. Seasons converted into years would be: five seasons = 1 year 3 months not:five seasons = ten years because there are four seasons in every year. Also, Brian Jacques uses seasons for years in some of his books such as Taggerung where Tagg is fifteen seasons, which is almost four years old. Just tryin' t' help, I don't want to offend anybody. If'n ye don't want anymore help just tell me. Thanks Lathagarr ^{Haharr me cullies!} 20:37, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

P.S. If ye want to check out some o' me fanfics, here's a link This Is Your Story a fanfic that ye can join, Ferret's Tale an' Legend of Gelm. I have alot more fanfics but they aren't as finished(none of them are really that far along anyway). Ye can also check out me userpage an' sign my friends list if ye want Lathagarr ^{Haharr me cullies!} 20:37, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot t' mention...

I forgot t' mention that i like yore fanfics and KIU! Update me, please! Lathagarr ^{Haharr me cullies!} 20:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Answer to yore talk:

Well, if ye want any 'elp, I have lots of ideas running around in me head! Whatever ideas yore havin', no matter how small, you can give me clips if that's all they are right now an' I'll try ter give ye some 'elp there. Anytime ye need 'elp on anythin', I will try ter help Lathagarr ^{Haharr me cullies!} 21:14, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! Gmail!

My gmail address is benoffairwick@gmail.com Lathagarr ^{Haharr me cullies!} 21:38, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

How's life?

How's life down in Florida? I haven't seen you on in a while. How's life? :) --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 05:53, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

Removes hat and places it over heart Der Todesschrei Box ist in mehr. (The Shout Box is no more) Wikia was all stupid and removed the sidebar, including the Shout Box >:( --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 13:41, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

I just don't know :( --Lord Bluestripe File:Orlando.jpg ^{Eulaliiiiiiaaa!} 23:42, November 9, 2010 (UTC)