User talk:SalemtheCruel/Archive One

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Hi

Hiya! I like your fanfic! --Cheetahstar123 ^{Call me Cheetah!} 01:14, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're here! Okay I thought I made it clear but obviously I didn't. I have made a firm final decision. Layna is out/not in. Rori and Slashclaw are in! They may even get in the next update but I shall have to see abou that. See you round!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 17:40, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Answer.

I'll read that fanfic as well and see wot I can do. :)Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 01:21, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

In a little, I'm finishing french homework. Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 01:26, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Review.

Yore fanfic is cool, matey. But it needs a some cleaning. Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 18:21, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

You know, you're probably the only one who's really asked me that. I have a few small ideas for the next update but when I start writing it may flow out. If I get up to it-which I may since you asked-I'll probably write it out and either post it tonight or tomorrow. Thanks I guess-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 18:27, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Update

On SRV. I may continue this section or not. Start of Chapter 9. Please comment! I don't if I should introduce Slashclaw and Rori or just hint at them...comment your opinions!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 19:15, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

:)

There are a lot of good fanfics written how you write yore, and yores is no exception. I hope I can continue reading it in the future. Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 21:48, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

well hello, Salem, nice to meet you. I'm so glad to meet another member of the Cruel family :D if you want you can check out my other accounts on some websites if you like my art work. Course it's all a choice, mate, not forcing you to do so ;) ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 00:39, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

cool, mate, I myself have a story on here, but I need to do a lot of editing though ^^; my more recent ones are on Devaintart ;)One of these days I may add more chapters to the one I posted here after I edit it, but I'm not exactly sure if I have the time, but hey, I'll manage somehow ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 00:46, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Fan Fiction

Ideas, huh? Hmmmm.... How about Vinati and Matt travel across Mossflower until they come to Redwall. Then, they take shelter there until the ferret Warlord lays siege to the Abbey. Well, that's all i've got at the moment. Hope it helps! --Cheetahstar123 ^{Call me Cheetah!} 00:51, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

wow, and that went through an editor and everything. Like how Killconey was mentioned as a girl in a few chapters in some versions of Redwall. I called him, "Killconey the gender changing ferret." With me, I don't have an editor so I have to proofread myself. I find it easy to find my errors by reading it to someone like my little brother :) ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 00:57, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

ha-ha Sister Mary had a little abbey, little abbey, little abbey... oh and the chapter when the Redwaller's were in the Abbess's tomb, Constance magicall appeared out of no where. Oh my internet sister is a huge Slagar fan as well http://xxxsamanthaxxx.deviantart.com/ but she's mainly active on this account http://jublenarris.deviantart.com/ ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 01:09, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

or Badranga the Barbie girl ;) ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 01:20, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, I was weird too. Both my friend and I played Redwall games during recess (can't remeber how to spell it) when we we're young ^^; I was always a vixen named Darkshadows ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 01:38, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, though I'm kinda bummed about it though :(

It was his right side that they used (trust me, I have the screen shot pics and DvDs) and Slagar's mask was the wrong color (it's supposed to be red and purple, not pink and indigo) ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 01:51, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

hmm sure, why not? ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 02:02, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Review Request

I'm honored that you'd ask me and I'll do it within this week but I must ask, why did you ask me? Or did you just ask a bunch of random users? Hope I do a good job anyways.

Brockfang File:Brockfang.JPG Eeeee aye eeeeee 04:17, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I just did, matey :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 15:13, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

By the By, I updated my other fanfic. Would ye like to read it? Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 16:05, February 25, 2011 (UTC).No I don't think the tittle is weird:)

Kigam Tescer: Embodiment Is the name. :)Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 17:04, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

PS:I cant tell, mate, I have not read the Sable Quean.

That's Creepy and amazing at the same time O_o :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 17:19, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll read it all and give ye my opinion later, matey :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 17:48, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Kodo

About your character for The Wildcat's revenge. I think it's a very good idea, and I have to thank you. I wasn't quite sure where the story was going to go next. Adding a second villain is a great way to keep the story going. I might play around with his name and back story a little bit, but I will give you credit for the idea. I will try to use your ideas for him if you have them. Don't expect him soon, though. I have a lot to put in right now.

Thanks!

--I Am That Is, My sword will wield for me 20:53, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Does he lead an army, or a gang, or something? I might have to give him some group of bad guys that he leads. Please leave me another message with this and any other details about him.

Sure!

Sure thing! what exactly do you want me to reveiw? Do you just want me to read it and give feed back?--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 22:57, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I read and commented. btw, do you mind reading my fanfic(s)? I like feedback too! ;) Just go to my blog page to find them.--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 23:12, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

I read and commented, again, lol. It's goin' good! I gotta go now, Talk to ya later!!--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 23:30, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

okay, even though I haven't read the book... yet ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 03:27, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I updated again! Another update may soon follow about Slashclaw and Rori. Please comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 09:50, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I looked at it briefly, so I probably didn't glean everything. It seems pretty good, not quite as good as JOM but rather good =) Holly Thornblade^{The War to End All Wars- Have You Joined?} 17:13, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The part with Vilaya and the Cat. :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 18:00, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe CoolNitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 18:06, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I Think you should matey, I really like them :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 18:12, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not sure, is your story, but it would be cool to have another sword fight. :)Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 18:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm, what to happen at redwall....maybe leah is showing drake some archery or something, and some of her friends think she is being babyish for "playing" with drake, who trys to defend her but gets knocked around, ya know, kinda like a bully situation. It might be an idea to play with. It's your story, so, whatever you want goes! :)--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 18:35, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

YAY! I've been waiting for someone to try that! I'm no good at writeing that sorta thing meself, I'll belooking foward to it!--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 18:46, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

This should help you out with most of the sig stuff. If you're totally confused you can bring your questions to me and I will try and help-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 14:30, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

That's sorta how it came across. That should turn out very interesting though. They probably will end up becoming good friends by the end though (before she hopefully dies). I'll try and update soon and if I do I pretty sure it will include Slashclaw and Rori!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 20:23, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

No prob Matey. How is Vilaya going to hire mercenarys from Salamandastron? If you don't want to tell, that's totally cool, i'll just have to read like the rest of us. :)--Mad Maudie ^{you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?!} 01:28, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome!

that's really cool! But, I'm not familiar with any of those songs. :P Sorry.--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 21:43, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Yes! now that i read the lyrics, i think it exactly fits! I totally see where this is going. >;D--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 22:57, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Obviously, you really know how to pick good songs!! Yes it fits! ;)fergot me sig...--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 23:07, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Er.. I got 2 go now, Blarg, Bye! *Hugs*--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 23:09, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

End of Chapter 9! It's short but I think I'll be updating soon. Please comment and enjoy! Oh and please don't spoil Rori and Slashclaw for the others. I will give you credit for them. I hope they turned out well!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 16:53, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! That's a good idea! Like, he could be her little friend, kinda like a big sister, and she's the one he goes back to at the end of the day, and talks to. So, naturally, she tells him what she heard!--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 01:11, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

REALLY?!?! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ SOON!!!!!!!!!!!--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 02:51, March 5, 2011 (UTC) I'd love to.. but i have to go to bed... -.- I'll read it as soon as i can!!!!!--Mad Maud ^{I'm warning you, I'll jolly well be your friend!!} 02:58, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, well, i'll give ye some ideas, and you can think about them, and use your imagenation. I'm always glad to give suggestions, but i don't wanna, like, write it for you, ya know what i'm sayin'? so, for Drake, maybe he wants to look for Leah, to see if shemp is around, and she's hangin out with Shemp and some other dudes, and he hides and watches. Maybe another confrontation? Also, for future plots, you could decide wether Leah likes him, or she just wants to hang out with him cuz he's lonely. Maybe he's right, and she just wants to be his friend, or maybe she slowly starts to like him, Or maybe she's getting teased again, and little drake trys to come to her rescue.

For Jangus and vilaya, maybe they are traveling, and you could make up a conversation with them, maybe a back story for him? If i understand your "Lover Boy" theme correctly, she's reluctant to fall in love, and wont admit any attraction to him, and he's just waiting to fall in love, correct? So, you could play up that theme.

I hope my way-to-long list rambling ideas helps! (If this just confuses you, i give you full licence to kick me);)...fergot me sig again...--Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 15:23, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

) (so you didn't decide to kick me, thats always a good sign...)--Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 15:30, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

YEAH! that's a really cool idea! Like he could pretend, and she'll be all confused! Good idea! (btw, i thing i have to go now, my lil' bor wants the computer. -.-)--Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 16:19, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

How have ye been, Salem? :) Nitram the Warrior^{Let's be friends! :)} 16:02, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Coolio! A Gangsta! Can't wait to see how this plays out! btw, in case you didn't know, as of this wednesday, i wont be on the computer untill after easter. -.- So, don't be offended if i don't talk to you between those times.--Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 00:37, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I Absoflippinballyflaiminlutely envery-other-hare-ejactulation-i-can-think-of-love him!!!! Crazy hares are my faves! (Which means pretty much every hare, XD ) I love it when there's a crazy awesome hare in the story. it makes the whole thing more interesting. ;)Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!}

Yeah! that would be really cool if he grouped up his ol' buddies and formed a resistance! The light brigade sounds coolio! What does francis wear? Regimental clothes, or normal stuff?Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 01:09, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Sale! I'll probly read it after easter, cuz this is my last redwall wiki visit before i have to leave. Bye!! Talk to ye then Sale!--Mad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 03:16, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hullo!

Sure! I'd be happy to, Salem. ;3 --Raeoki 01:25, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

I really like your suggestion! I'll spell it Grexx and add it to the Poll list and see if anyone else agrees with you. Thanks! --Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the Highlands File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40 16:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC) 21:25, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

i would be absoloutely honored to review ur fanfic! Ariyh 00:08, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, your story is very good. Probably better than mine. However, you may consider developing the cahracters a bit more. other than that, its phenomenal! Ariyh 00:19, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

O.K., I'll check it out. --Cheetahstar ^{My Den} 00:40, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I like your character but if I do use her it will be much later in the tale, probably towards the end. I really don't much like using other peoples characters because I'm afraid I won't stay true to their creator's original conception of them; it would really annoy me if someone did that to one of mine. But thanks very much for the suggestion; I'll let you know when I make up my mind. I am about to submit the seventh chapter of Gingiverian, if you'd like to read it. The Black Shade is not in this chapter, but I will introduce him soon. We'll see if the name you submitted wins the poll!

God Bless, --Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the Highlands File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40 16:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC) 00:57, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Chaacter developement is simply telling something or everything about a certian character in an elongated fashion. For example, with my main character Natal, i told his story bit by bit, not all at once. Tell your reader a little bit more about drake and leah and their past relationship. these are just suggestions as to how to develpe your characters. s for when my story takes pace, it takes place after doowyte and just before the sable quean. i would love to eventually continue it over into the rouge crew, but that may not happen. Well here yu ave it, my opinion and a bit of a hint. Ihope you find this info helpful. Ariyh 01:29, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

reply

Sorry for not getting back to you on your last message. First, the review. I thought I did review it! I posted a comment, but I guess it didn't show up for some reason. I'll get to that ASAP. Second, about Kodo. I'm not quite sure how soon he'll be able to come in. I still have a lot to do before I can bring in another villain. We (well, my readers) still haven't even seen Terraz yet, the main bad guy. However, if you really want to see how he works out, I might be able to write something like a practice session with him. I wouldn't be part of the plot (unless it ends up being really good) but you would still get to see how he works out with the other characters and the rest of the storyline.

I will do the review as soon as I get a chance (I have to get off right as I post this) and please write me back about the "practice session" with Kodo.

I Am That Is, My sword will wield for me 01:42, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

great idea!

I think that's a great idea! I admit, I wasn't quite sure what I would've done if you had said yes, but now I do. I'll probably put it in a separate blog post, and I will update you as soon as it's done.

P.S. I commented on A little Night Music. Nice job.

I Am That Is, My sword will wield for me 13:31, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments! :D Check back often, because I update all the time! : ) --Cheetahstar ^{My Den} 01:10, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Your question.

I'm not entirely sure what you are asking. Do you mean, how do I personally develop character ideas; or do you mean, how does any writer do that, generally? --Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the Highlands File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40 16:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC) 23:54, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Answer

It would be an Honor, Salem. I'll read yer story and the updates soon. Chat to ya later. :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 02:12, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS:User blog:Nitram the Warrior/Kigam Tescer: Embodiment I have updated thif fanfic, if ye would like tae read it.

Well, I have a slight idea for the next part which if I got down to it I could expand on. I just did so well on the last chapter that I took a break. But since I have to stay home today I'll have time so I'll see what I can do. And the Abbess may talk about the possible war to Drake and Leah? I'm not entirely sure. Thanks!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 07:39, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Update! A short revealing diary entry. And there's a poll. Please vote and comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 08:48, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well, since you gave me a spoiler on YOUR fanfic, It's only fair that I should give you one on mine. (Don't worry. I've been dying to tell someone. XD) For one thing, Venice dies at the end of A Warriors Legacy, and the third book is going to be called 'The Darkest Hour Is Just Before Dawn', But I don't know what the second book is going to be called. Have any ideas? --Cheetahstar ^{My Den} 15:58, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Master and Commander? Good. But who's the master and who's the commander? --Cheetahstar ^{My Den} 18:11, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not? I really like that story :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:14, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mmmnnn... Maybe about then having to leave and meet a friend of hers, maybe? hehehe Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:26, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: Have ye commented in one of me fanfics yet?

Okay. Oh, I updated my fanfic, so check it out. : ) --Cheetahstar ^{My Den} 18:27, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I have seen the first episode, I really liked it and I'm thinking of watching it sooner or later. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: Thank ye. wot did ye think of my suggestion?

Like, she is telling then they will have to leave and find a friend of hers that could help then save the abbey. Is Just a suggestion :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:47, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: Do you like me new signature

No I have not. :P Wot do you think of Embodiment? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mah Brain is stuck on that too, matey. Sorry D: If I find anything, I'll tell ye. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 19:05, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cool and wacky, in a really great way :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 19:21, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: If ye want updates for me fanfics, sign the Update list on mah profile. :)

Yes, they are pretty wacky, hehehehe. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 19:28, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: Why did ye just deleted that message?

XD heheheh. Hope I can find anything else to talk about. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 20:13, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

PS: This message marks mah 600th edit. :D

Yiss,Yiss,Yiss!!! Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 20:27, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Somehow your Message was erased again XD. Fer yer answer, I'll think about it. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:04, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I answered with me last post. Jewel is suppose to be a wolf in yer fanfic right? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:11, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see wot I can do, matey (About Salem being in Tales of Mattimeo) :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 18:42, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted to check out your pass-a-long, But TBT deleted it. Sorry. :P --Cheetahstar ^{1 2 3} 00:29, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Probably because fanfic goes on blogs. --Cheetahstar ^{1 2 3} 00:45, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Fan-fic

I can't find it. Could you send me a link? --Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the Highlands File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40 01:49, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sure

Go for it! the idea of a sports using a vole as a ball sound really interesting :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 14:15, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I loved it :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 19:14, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll give ye the review tomorrow. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:41, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Update:Tales of Mattimeo: Slagar's Legacy

• First Update fer YE!!! Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:31, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

To make a poll...its easy, really. Just put '< poll >' at the top(without the apostrophes and the spaces), then put the question you want right under, then the answers right under that. When you've put all your questions down, put '< /poll >' (again, without the apostrophes and spaces), then hopefully it should work. I hope that helped :) Anyways, on to your writing. Well, like I said on 'A little night music', you need paragraphs when someone new speaks. Just press 'Enter' twice, that's what I do. Here and there, you also need punctuation. And capitalisation. And,(this is just my opinion, you don't have to follow it) I never use capitals for a whole word in a story. It just doesn't feel right to me. But you can use capitals, it's just a suggestion. Also, check your spelling. Most of the time, your spelling is quite good, but you spelt(in your comment) 'seperation' instead of 'separation'. And whenever you write a new chapter, read through it A LOT of times to make sure that it all makes sense. It helps. Well, I think that should cover it. Hope that lot doesn't make your brain explode. :) --Laria WavedeepFile:Laria.JPG^{I will find ye, wherever ye are...} 01:20, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad it did help :) Um, as for spoilers...if you really, really need to tell someone, then you can, but then everyone else would read my talk page and find out what happens. So I suggest you don't tell me. --Laria WavedeepFile:Laria.JPG^{I will find ye, wherever ye are...} 03:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then. To make a poll you put poll in <> then your question and options (Just enter once no indent) then </> with a poll after the slash.

<poll> Did this help? Yes No </poll>

An example poll. Anyways, I hope your ideas come back...as do mine! -Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 08:39, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hi

Hello Salem the Cruel, nice name and sweet avatar by the way. *hits self* where are me manners? I'm Niko Banks pleased to meet you :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:45, March 20, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, you still watch Redwall the Tv Series, how do you do that, do you have the DVD's or it downloaded on your PC, or do you just watch it on You Tube? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:57, March 20, 2011, (UTC)

My favorite bands are Green Day, Linkin Park, Nickleback, I'd like to see your poem, it sounds like it might be a good poemNiko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:20, March 20, 2011, (UTC)

Nice poem, I loved it, it was very moving and it wasen't that bad, the ryhms were ok, I hope to get another poem soon, you're a good poet :) *gives poem thumbs up* Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:44, March 20, 2011, (UTC)

aww that's so pretty. Thanks for the idea, mate, I'll make a remake of the story some time (I wrote it awhile back) and add that in :D ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 02:41, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey matey, I like your CivilWar, it was also touching and sorry it tuke me so long to respond, I was busy with something and now I am back on for the rest of the evening.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:43, March 20, 2011, (UTC)

Salem, hey, sorry for not giving ye feedback on the fanfic you send me, I'll give it to ye soon. By the by, I love Update in "A little night music."

PS: Ye misspelled Nitram's Last name, Is Rrav not Wrav, heheh. I really can't wait fer more. =D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 02:20, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem I'm on right now, would you like to chat for a while, if you're not busy, matey.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:22, March 22, 2011, (UTC)

I love old movies, my favorite old movies seris, is Friday the 13th, its a great movie series, my other favorite is, The Godfather.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:23, March 22, 2011, (UTC)

Cool

Cool, what kind of Fanfiction is your story? is it a good one or a random one or really awsome?Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:40, March 22, 2011, (UTC)

I don't think so

I don't think paragraph have definite lines while writing a story. Ye have seen mah stories, I don't have definite amount of sentences in mah second fic (And sometimes in me first one). :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:04, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe ye should fill the gaps of "one-sentecers" with more detail :D Just a suggestion Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:08, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, I have a fanfiction aswell, its on my blog page, so check it out when you have the chance, it's not really popular it acttaly sucks :( Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:20, March 23, (UTC)

Questions? Did ye changed Nitram's last name on Purpose? :P

PS: If I think of something, I'll tell ye. I'm coming up with an idea right now XD Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 00:58, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok

Thanks fer the answers :) I got an idea. Wot about making Nitram a kind of a teacher, at being a warrior, to Drake. This extremely annoys Francis XD since he cannot bring himself to thrust a rat. Wot do you think? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 01:18, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, did you get my previous message? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:38, March 23, 2011, (UTC)

'ow 'ave ye been, Salem? Puts friendly paw around Salem ;) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 15:16, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Answer

Tightens his friendly grip "Can't tell a confirmation, But I can tell ye there is a great chance :D. By the By, did ye liked mah idea? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 19:23, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I was not annoyed at all, Salem. :) Ye still 'av not told me if ye liked the idea i send ye. :P Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:36, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Salem, if ye like tae chat with friends. Maybe ye should join us on Speeqe. Here, some users from the redwall wiki come to chat and RPG. Niko is with us too. If ye like all that. Come to Redwall wars. Sing up at the protocol, and come join the fun, friend. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:28, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

ye saw the message I left? (See above :P) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:36, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hope...

Hope ye can maybe try to convince them. Ye are a nice person and we are nice people too. Hope there is a slight chance ye might be able to join us. Hugs Salem in sign of friednship ;) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:50, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Is that yer dream cast member for Jewels of Malkariss the movie? :P Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:03, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Are ye going to talk to yore parents, Salem? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:12, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ofcouse , Is yore choice :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:17, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rubs paws together in anticipation I can't wait fer the update. ;)

PS: Sorry if it seemed like I was nagging ye. It really is yer choice if ye would like to join. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 02:27, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Salem?

Salem, are ye there? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 15:07, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Coolz, so do I :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:44, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

"A little nights music" I vote fer :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:09, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Snippets from the past >:) PS: I'm updating right now Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:15, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Coolz :D Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:29, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:35, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

No :(

Sorry Salem, I have not read Eulalia yet. :( Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 00:48, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Socializing

Hey! Nice socializing! Are you two (Nitram the Warrior/SalemtheCruel) B.F's in arms?

F.F 01:24, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Fan Fiction

Hi, not a fan fiction writer myself, I stopped that long ago. Sorry. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 04:29, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!

Sure! I would love the spoiler, Salem :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 14:45, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.... I'm not sure, Salem. I'll tell you if I think of anything. PS: I also consider ye one of me best friends in the Wikia ;) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:32, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :)

PS: Did ye read the PS of last message? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:46, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds Promising :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:55, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I would be delighted. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 00:01, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

XD! Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 00:11, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

XD Even more. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 00:15, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Here's what I've got.

Name: Chitzu

Gender: Male

Species: Fox

Weapon: Dagger with blade on both ends.

Howzat? Cheetah^{Fear Me!} 14:30, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm... let me think about it. Ok Salem? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 15:15, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

SALEM! :)

Hey Salem, it's been a while since we last chatted, what have you been upto lately? keeping busy with alot of stuff, I bet.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:50, April 07, 2011, (UTC)

Hey Salem :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:36, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

You have a lot of blog post. XD Oh, and I updated a TON on A Ferret's Tale. Cheetahstar File:Swartt.jpg ^{Ferrets Rule!} 22:38, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Cool name :) Can't right now, But I will later :)

PS: Hey, did ye ever considered the speeqe thing? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:44, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Heheheheh :P Hope ye do it soon. (Sorry if I looks like I'm rushing ye) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:51, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ofcourse. There has always been intelligent Vermin :)

That sounds Great XD Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:07, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

GTG, hear ya, Salem. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:13, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Submission

Here's my suggestion.

Name: Fumbillo Swishtail (the Invisible One

Species: Woodmouse

Gender: Male

Color: Tan, almost golden fur; white throat, chest, and paws; black eyes

Wears: Half-green and half-violet vest(divided straight down the line of white buttons); white-green-and-violet harlequin patterned shirt and trousers; violet cloak (white on the inside), half-green-half-violet eyemask; black belt, gloves and stockings, floppy-brimmed black hat with a swan's feather in it

Weapons: mostly sleeping droughts/hypnotic formulas carried in a pouched belt about the waist; also a thin rapier, and a flute/blowpipe from which he fires sleeping-drought tipped darts

General Description: A young-adult mouse with no permanant home and no known background, Fumbillo Swishtail travels alone, wandering here and there. Due to his habit of appearing and disappearing at random, he has earned the nickname of "The Invisible One." He can climb better than most squirrels, and swim almost as well as an otter. A skilled musician, poet, dancer, and magician, he earns his food by occasionally entertaining other traveling beasts, or dropping in to goodbeasts homes to put on a show. He will rescue any creature he sees in danger; usually, by tricking the vermin or knocking them to sleep with his potions, though he will fight with his rapier when necessary. After assuring himself the rescued beasts are okay (sometimes traveling with them until they can get along witout his help), he usually vanishes without waiting for thanks.

You can play with/edit this character as much as you like, if you decide to use him at all.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the HighlandsFile:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40, 1 Cor. 13:13, Romans 12 00:55, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Believe it or not, I started to like Redwall out of High assignment Last year :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:07, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

More Suggestions

I forget which season it's supposed to be, so here's four suggestions.

• Spring of the Lazy Butterfly

• Summer of the Shining Sun

• Autumn of the Golden Crowns (this refers to treetops)

• Winter of the Grey Winds

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the HighlandsFile:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40, 1 Cor. 13:13, Romans 12 02:27, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, thank you Salem. Not this time. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 11:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Help?

Salem, ye want help with separating paragraphs? I think I may be able to help you, if ye want the help. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 15:52, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll copy and paste a chapter in word pad and separate the paragraphs, then I'll send ye that copy and see if ye like it, Ok? :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 15:58, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll organized it, then send it to ye here. The you can delete it so you don't take up so much space :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 17:43, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't read that one yet ^^; I'm afraid --SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 06:07, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Acalle

If I do decide to work her in, I have two questions.

1. 1... May I make her a cross fox (one with black and rust patched fur; this is a real-life fur mutation of the red fox breed) instead of a black one? There is going to be a loosely organized, not-really-a-proper-band-or-horde group of independent and rather impudent-natured crossfoxes coming in to the story within the next chapter or two.

1. 2...May I change the spelling of her name to Akalle? It would seem to fit better with the other names of the self-named Krozfoxx people (Zyxxa, Kaia, Zaikee, Layka, and so on).

WORD OF WARNING: If I did work her in it would probably only be for a short scene.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the HighlandsFile:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare.jpg Matt 25:40, 1 Cor. 13:13, Romans 12 01:44, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. I kind of need to know this before I write the next installment of the story. If it is not OK to insert her here I probably won't put her in the story until much later.

I finally updated! It's long and...interessant. Enjoy and please comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 17:35, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Salem, I have been busy fer a while, I'm working on the last chapter, then I'll send it to see if ye like it. If ye do, I'll separate the whole story fer ye :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:54, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thank ye :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:01, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Later, I'm working on yer thing right now. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:04, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nods Just like I'm not rushing the day when ye come to speeqe, if it will happen :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:07, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter

Here is Chapter 12. Is not finished, but I wanna see how you like how it is. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 21:21, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

The night of the minstrel had finally arrived. Drake and Leah were en route to Indigo Crossing via the forest. Since Ambry already had plans at Redwall; Nitram secretly decided to tag along instead. Along the way he’d taken advantage of the long way up to Indigo Crossing to teach Drake and Leah better ways to shoot with arrows. So Nitram would walk alongside them, and say to whoever it was with the bow:

“All right. You tilt your head up likeways, make sure the arrow won’t fall out, then you pull back and let ‘er go!”

Even Drake, who was new to bows and arrows did not have a particularly hard time catching on.

“You really got Francis mad,” Drake said, rolling his eyes as they trotted down the forest paths strewn with pine needles.

Nitram gazed up at the starry sky. “I know.” The rat chuckled to himself. “Poor old hare hadn’t had such a good time with rats in that…. Regiment, what was it called?” the rat wracked his brain.

“The Light Brigade?” Leah offered.

Nitram grinned triumphantly. “Yes, that’s it! The Light Brigade!”

A crow cawed in the distance. Leah stared up at the night sky.

“You don’t really get nights like this anymore.” She commented.

Drake and Nitram gave each other looks. It seemed they could both relate to the night scenery as well; all was tranquil: The sky was painted a soft blue-black, crickets chirped in the bushes along the side-paths, pine needles were strewn along the trails, and a few night birds chirped softly in the bushes. It was a perfect night.

“This IS a night to remember.” Drake agreed wholeheartedly.

Nitram gazed up at the stars and uttered one single word “Aye.”.

Not too long later the lights at Indigo Crossing were in view. The three animals stood on a ridge overlooking the town, called Martin’s Ridge by the locals. Legend had it that Martin the Warrior had gazed at the then-new town from that very ridge; along with his unlikely companions Gonff the Mousethief and Albertine and Gingivere Greeneyes. So as they descended down from the ridge; Drake, (as he knew the story by heart) told Nitram the legend of Martin’s Ridge.

“That’s right great” Nitram commented as they went down. “t’is Martin creature must have been a great ole beast”

Drake nodded, but Leah said

“It is and was, but in Indigo Crossing, they’re used to distant echoes of history.” Drake nodded. Leah was definitely right; Indigo Crossing WAS an old, historic town after all….

Drake squinted, noticing a dark shape jumping up and down and yelling at the bottom of the ridge. “Nitram, Leah, look at this. I think that’s Francis down there.”

Leah sighed, exasperated.

Drake slapped his paw on his temple.

Nitram grimaced and headed back up the ridge. “If yew two’ll excuse me I’ll be going.”

Before Leah could say one of her typical clever remarks, Drake hurriedly asked Nitram “Where?”

Nitram shrugged. “Not too far off. I’ll come into Indigo Crossing through the south side of the forest. That way a certain someone down below won’t notice me.”

Before Drake nor Leah could do or say anything else, the rat was gone, bounding off towards the woods once again.

They had a very annoyed-looking Francis waiting for them down below. The two young ones begrudgingly climbed down to Francis, who was shouting things like “How dare you scalawags associate with vermin!” Or “What in the name of Warrior’s Honor were you doin’ with that bally old rat?”. His incesant chattering was unberable to the young creatures

“I can explain everything!” Drake finally exclaimed, to put an end to Francis’s crazed shouting.

Leah gave Drake an amused look that said "So you think you can pull this off?"

Drake sighed. Leah wasn’t usually ornery but when she was… WATCH OUT! Drake shot her an angry look quickly, and then resumed arguing with Francis. After a short time he was able to conceive a tale that satisfied the hare, and Francis walked off shortly afterwards.

As soon as they were alone, Drake grabbed Leah and dragged her over to a nearby tree. “What were you doing, abandoning me like that?” He hissed.

Leah just flattened her back against the tree, saying only “I wanted to see how you’d do against Francis.”

Drake was disappointed at the squirrels indifference “Leah, we’ve been friends for a while now, and friends are supposed to stick up for each other!”

She simply shrugged and walked away, back towards the path to Indingo Crossing.

Fifteen minutes later, Drake, Leah, Nitram (Nitram and Francis sat as far away from each other as possible.) and some animals from town were sitting around a bonfire. As the fire cracked and sparkled, it sent tiny flames into the night sky, burning ashes. After a while, a dog the color of the ashes wearing a burgundy cloak stepped out from one of the horse-drawn wagons parked nearby. The small crowd began to murmur excitably. “Ladies and gentlebeasts, my name is Abel of the Scraggway Traveling Minstrel and I can give you news and rumors from all over the nation.”

Immediately several males began demanding for war news, and so Abel cleared his throat melodramatically, looked around, and said “Well, the Royal House of Salamandastron and the planters down in Malkariss are still at war.” A steady stream of groans rose up from the crowd. “Travel to either of those areas will not be possible for the next three weeks.” Still more groans.

The rest of the evening was nearly as fun as a nameday, when the seasons are named. The audience gathered around the fire listened with rapture to southern and northern folk songs, watched abridged plays as well as bouts of slapstick humor by the minstrel’s traveling company. Finally, as the fire dwindled down to ashes in the pit, Leah and Francis headed back to Redwall. Nitram would take Drake to Redwall, before turning back and eventually going himself. That was the plan, but it wasn’t followed accordingly……

Before long Drake and Nitram decided to take the shortcut; down winding paths and trails Drake had never seen before. After a while they came to a dead end in a darkened meadow. A ring of pine trees towered above them, and it seemed darker than usual in this part of the woods….

Nitram grimaced. “Damn.” He cursed, and handed Drake his bow. “You’ll need that for protection. You never know what might jump out at you in Skelton’s Glade.”

“Huh?” Drake was puzzled. He had heard talk of Skelton’s Glade but had never actually been there before.

Nitram produced a dagger from his cloak pocket so that he had a weapon too. “They say the place’s haunted. At first I thought it was just stories to keep babes an’ little children in line, but it ain’t. I’ve heard tell from more ‘n a few animals claimin’ the ghosts of Old Man Skelton and his greedy clan prowl the meadow at night.” Nitram gestured around the meadow. “They say Skelton used to have a plantation here. Exactly where it lies nobeast knows. His family was fabulously rich- refugees from another plantation down south from the Border War. You were probably a babe then, but I remember it well enough. It was a lot of disagreement over slavery and the like if I remember correctly. Anyhow, Skelton and his clan are buried here, and they were the evilest pack of stubborn sables you’d ever want to meet. Don’t worry though, Drake. I’ve got your back.”

Drake nodded. The gazed up at the sky that seemed to darken by the glade’s presence. “How hard will it be to get out?” He asked, sort-of-worried.

Nitram shook his head. “Depends.” He answered vaguely.

“Nitram,” Drake whispered a moment later as they started across the wide meadow. “The ground’s starting to feel… Strange.”

Nitram nodded. “Aye, mate. I feel it too.”

The ground was indeed beginning to feel strange; soft, squishy under the two rodent’s paws, like quicksand. Drake’s eyes widened as his right hind leg disappeared into the dirt, then his left. Quickly his lower body became enveloped as well.

“It’s like bloody quicksand!” Nitram exclaimed. Drake was too stunned to think of anything to say as they were sucked down, down, down, into the earth…..

“DRAAAAKE!” Drake heard Nitram screaming his name as they fell onto a soft floor with a THUD!

They were now in a dirt walled room under the ground. Drake looking up, eyes narrowed because of the dimness of the room.

“Where are we?”

Seven stone slabs were at one corner of the room, nothing else decorated the gloomy scenery.

Nitram shrugged, baffled. “Your guess is as good as mine, matey, but I reckon this is Skelton’s tomb.”

Drake felt gooseflesh rising at the back of his neck, although he was certain there was no such thing as ghosts.

“Come on!” Drake said, wandering over to the coffins. “Let’s look and see if there’s an exit.”

Nitram dashed over to his friend, wary not to trip on any uneven floor in his haste “Capital idea.”

Before they began looking, Drake noticed old, dust-covered writing on the huge stone coffin nearest him. Curious, he brushed it off to read the inscription:

EPHRAIM JEBADIAH SKELTON;

PATRIARCH OF THE SKELTON CLAN

THE WINTER OF SHINING ICE – THE SPRING OF THE YELLOW DAISIES

AGED 75 YEARS, 3 MONTHS, 7 DAYS

Drake breathed, nudging Nitram “Nitram, look at this. The Old Man’s grave…”.

“Blimey….” The rats eyes widened, feeling uncomfortable around the caskets.

“Before we find that exit….. Let’s get a look at those other coffins, see who else’s buried here. So Drake set about brushing away more dust on the coffin to Ephraim’s left. He read loud and clear “‘Saul Greengate Skelton, son of Ephraim, The Summer of the Golden Hawk, The Autumn of the Early Leaf, aged 39 years, five months, six days.”

Nitram grimaced as he read from the grave to Ephraim’s right “‘Samson Ernest Greengate, The Autumn of the Black Oak, The Autumn of the Early Leaf, aged 33 years, one month, two days….”

Nitram gave Drake a look. They were both thinking the same thing: Murder!

Gulping, Nitram made his way over to the grave next to Samson’s “ ‘Amanora Greengate Skelton ’ ” Nitram slowly read aloud, struggling to decipher the elegant, curling script. “ ‘The Spring of the Thorn Birds, the Winter of the Great Snowstorm. Amanora. Ephraim’s mate…..”

As Nitram stared shock at the coffin panel, Drake leaned heavily into the wall. He pulled back as part of the wall pulled back with a sliding sound! Nitram immediately came over, and a set of dust-covered steps led beneath the ground, far deeper than the tomb.

Drake felt adventure surging through his body. Leaving behind any thoughts lurking danger or paranormal terrors, he put his paw on the first step swiftly and beckoned to the rat. “Let’s go.”

Nitram grinned at young bold creature. “With ye all the way, matey. Onwards we go!”

Five minutes later Nitram and Drake were hopelessly lost in a dark, underground corridor with no light to guide them. It was light enough to distinguish the handy work done ground, cultivation made in bygone seasons. There where even traces of some unidentifiable herb.

“An underground plantation…” Nitram muttered, shaking his head. “Old Ephraim must’ve been off his rocker when he dug this place out!”

Drake wandered ahead of Nitram in the dark, squinting as they entered towards what appeared to be a lit chamber. “Call me crazy Nitram, but I think we’re going towards light.”

Nitram had swiftly caught up with Drake. His pace matching that of the mouse “Drake, I’ve seen so much of this place, now nothing surprises me anymore.”

Drake couldn’t have agreed more. The two animals both ran into the light without another word between them.

Re:Akalle

Just to let you know, I've updated the story. Akalle is not in this chapter, but she will be in there soon, I promise. --Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the HighlandsFile:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{1 Cor. 13:13} 22:04, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Glad ye liked it :). I'll be helping ye separate paragraphs for now on if ye would like it. (With a few edits or two, I won't destroy yer inventive genius). Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:06, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

PS: I also added a little detail to yer scenerary.

Ummm?

Did ye already re upload? becasue it something seems to be wrong with the chapter. Oh and, Well, most of the whole story needs a little separating and cleaning. Hope I'm not being too critical, but most of your chapters consist on three or more run on paragraphs. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:19, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Did ye copy and paste it? Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:26, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I see... But if ye check it right now. Everything has been put back together, and a chuck from the beggining is Missing D: Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:31, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

But the stuff is still glued together. Mmmm. Maybe if you copy and paste every paragraph individually.. Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:44, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Depends. Now I'll start from top to botton. I'll do it when I have updated one of me fics. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:49, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, hows it going my friend, you must be keeping busy I bet, So are you looking for the weekend, the best part of the week :P Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:59, April 15, 2011, (UTC)

I'm doing well thanks, just been very busy and all, ain't we all busy, I really need to update my fanfic, IDK if you have read it or not, but still, I need to update, even though it's a waste of my time because no one comments on it.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:20, April 15, 2011, (UTC)

Great :D! Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 23:26, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hi back! How are you doing? Holly Thornblade^{The War to End All Wars- Have You Joined?} 09:53, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wanted Freedom - FanFic

Hey there! Check out the beginning of my first fanfic. User blog:ForrestFighter/Wanted Freedom

F.F. - Mossflowerrrrr!!!File:Firlow2.pngPs. 82:3-4 13:52, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, you want to chat for a while? I'm not doing much at the momment.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:09, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Sweet, tomorrow I have pottery, its going to be awsome :) gives Salem a mug that says "Salem rocks" in rainbow colors I enjoy pottery, have you ever done pottery before? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:17, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Pretty weird, but not completely weird, the only thing that I find weird is ummm, I don't find much stuff weird, so are you looking forward for the weeken, Salem? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:30, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

You weird? whats weird about you, Salem? you're a nice and awsome friend if you ask me. hugs Salem Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:40, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

I'm the first to sign your friends section :P I bet more people will join soon, Salem.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:53, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

No today, but soon. PS: Today is by Birthday :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 22:59, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind me asking you this, but what makes you weird? to tell you the truth, I am weird myself.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:05, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Me, the only thing that makes me weird is, that I was born with Autism, which is cool in its own way, what you do is not weird, and who ever says you are weird doesen't know the real you.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:17, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Anything for a friend.

Anything for a friend like you, when ever you have a rough day at school, just come and chat to me about it, I am here for you my friend :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:30, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

I like scary movies, my favorite scary movie is Friday the 13th, and my favorite comedy movie is, Rush Hour, its really funny lol, and my favorite sci fi film is Starship Troopers and my favorite Animated film is Fantastic Mr Fox, that film is so funny lol, what is your favorite films ? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:36, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

They sound like awsome films, I have watched the Secret of NIMH 1 and 2, but I think 1 is better, because it's a classic, the only thing I like about The Secret or NIMH 2 is, that it has great songs in it, but the bad thing is, that it is not really based on the original film.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:53, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

I agree both films were awsome, I have both on DVD, I just wish they made a third film, now that would be awsome, really awsome :) do you think they should make a third Secret of Nimh film? Niko BanksWhats up gangsta!, 02:10, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Cool idea, I would love to read that fan fic, speaking of fan fics, have you read my fan fic? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:25, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Thats ok :) Hmmm, we should really think about this, how about the story starts when Martin The Warrior bumps into one of the rats, and at first he thinks they are bad, and almost starts a fight with them. how does that sound for a beginning for the crossover? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:40, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

I was thinking the same thing, are you my long lost sister? hehehe jk anyway, it totally does remind me, anyway that song is awsome steals the song from Tim Brisby, making him cry Thanks skinny! I think the song is really well made.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:59, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

IDK, maybe we should both think of a name and once we choose a name, we'll name it the name we give it, anyway I GTG now, thanks for the chat and lets chat some more tomorrow when I get on again (hugs) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:22, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Salem, ye gave me a message that was suppose to be for Forrest Fighter XP Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 01:34, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Gtg, Bye Salem. :) Nitram Roy Rrav ^{vermins can be naive too :)} 01:44, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

sorry, not right now. I have a lot of things to catch up on --SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 02:50, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Listening to music while robbing your house, jk I'm just listening to music while chatting to you :) and what are you upto? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:20, April 16, 2011, (UTC(

Cool idea

Hmmm, good idea for a title, I think that is a perfict name for the Fan fiction, So what are your plans for the fan fic, so far? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:30, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

Ooooh, sounds exsiting, you must of been thinking of this fan fic for the last few hours, I can actually imagin Mrs. Brisby living in Redwall Abbey and becoming friends with its residents and some of the locals of Mossflower.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:50, April 16, 2011, (UTC)

I can imagin that, it will be like when Harry met Lloyd, yeah, this is alot of fun, we seem to defanally think alike, what do you think?Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Thats a great idea, here is how I see it, he joins their side, but what Jenner and Cluny don't know, is that Martin is acting out as a spy for Timmy and the Redwallers, which will make the story intrasting, what do you think of the idea, Salem? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:20, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

I'm glad you like the idea :P So, which characters will you be putting in the fan fic, between Redwall and The Secret of NIMH? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gifWhats up gangsta!, 12:36, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Cool idea, I can see the GOUSIM now as they meet the Brisbies, and can you imagin the Gousim meeting the Rats of Thorn Valley, now that will make the story very fun and intrasting to read, so do you think there should be abit of humor in the fan fic? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, I was thinking that for a joke, when Matthias finds out Cluny's not dead, Matthias says "What does it take to kill you, a safe?" hehe I think that would be funny, what do you think of the idea? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:23, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, the idea just came to me, really. I kinda have the neck for comedy, I watch alot of comedy shows and cartoons for ideas for my fan fics and stories. Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Thats a pretty cleaver idea, it would probably be easier if they did that at night, so they don't get cought messaging each other, what do you think of the idea? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:07, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing Salem, I'd like to see what we have come up with so far :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:27, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, I like the beginning so far, I hope to read the fanfic soon, we make a great team, coming up with ideas for this fan fic. Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:47, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Ok :)

Ok Salem, take your time with coming up with ideas, if you need any help with ideas, just ask, ok? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

YAY :P it's good to have you back, Salem, so hows your day been? I hope it hasen't been raining like it has been here where I live.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:10, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

lol, cool idea I think Cluny would be very upset when he sees that sign, and hows this for Martin Brisby, when he sees a sign below the no Warlords sign, he sees a "No Evil Brisbies with amature Brittish accents" hehe won't that be funny?Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:30, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Yeah, I saw PoE, it is a real classic and really funny aswell, I think there is another film where brother goes against brother, but I forgot what the film was called again, but it was very funny, I think? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:44, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Awsome, so its kinda the same, I think the other movie I was thinking of is either Dumb and Dumberier:When Harry meets Lloyd or the Dukes of Hazzard, IDK but I think it could of been one of the films or both of the films.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

So, anyways, hows your weekend been so far, Salem? Hope you had a great weekend so far, matey? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:20, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

That would be awsome if there was a Secret of Nimh Wiki, do you think we should make a The Secret of Nimh wiko, what do you think of that idea? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Oh wait, one already exsists, here is a link to it. http://nimh.wikia.com/wiki/Mrs._Frisby_and_the_Rats_of_Nimh_Wiki take a look at it if you want to, ok.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 10:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

I will, once I am done working on afew projects myself, plus I have alot to catch up on, but once I am not so busy I'll read your fan fic, if thats ok with you? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 10:16, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, so you want to chat for a while or you want to talk more about the SoN/RW fan fic? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 10:40, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Hey Salem

Well sure, lets talk some more, you're lots of fun to talk to :D You're making a new fan fic hmm, tell me about it, and about the characters and I'll help you in any way I can.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:00, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

How does this sound to you, Salem "The Blademaster's Tale: The Conqueror" how does that sound to you, Salem? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:27, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Its for the actural fan fic, major characters hmmm, I think we can think of something, I know some names for the fan fic, what names have you come up with so far? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:35, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Well, I can let you have one of my characters, the lonely hare can be my one character, Jerry, he can be the very lonely and has no friends hare you told me, I give you promission to use him if you like to, Salem, can I call you Sal, short for Salem? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:57, April 17, 2011, (UTC)

Hmmm, I am stuck with names, but if you want me to, I can give you a like that has all of my characters thas is on another Wiki, and you can choose a character from there, if you like that, Sal?Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:09, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing Salem, tell me about these events in the story, this is starting to sound really intrasting, and alot of fun :P Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:23, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

I know what Dryditch fever is, I read about it few times, its kinda like one of those illnesses House would deal with, that si if you do watch House, do you? anywah I'll look at the link you put on your fan fic.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:42, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Say, are you any good at drawing? Cause I'm terrible and I'm looking for someone to make me a picture for my userpage. --Cheetahstar File:Swartt.jpg ^{Ferrets Rule!} 23:23, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I can actually see house as a crippled mouse or squirrel working at the Abbey, in the fan fic, that would make the fan fic funny in a way, ya know ? :P so are you going to put House in the fan fic or a character that is like House in the fan fic ? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:00, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Yes lol, that sounds just like house :D "Really, I don't remember additenion for a Redwall fan fic" :D what did you think of my House-ish talk? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:20, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Okay, I'll see what I can do. But it's time for bed where I live, so I'll get back to you tomorrow. --Cheetahstar File:Swartt.jpg ^{Ferrets Rule!} 00:52, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thats ok :P Writersblock, hmmm, hows this, the story begins with few woodlanders walking through the woods, and they are on their way to Redwall abbey, as they go there, they meet woodlanders going the same way, what do you think of the idea so far? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:56, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Ok, sure. Just one tip, it helps if you envision a plot line befor you type it out. That is why I only have the prologe to my fanfic. Sometime I just carry a notepad with me and I write any ideas for my fanfic that come to mind. Also I have a growing list of names that sound Redwall-like, often I hear interesting words and mix them up till they sound right. :) Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 01:10, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, that might be a little hard because I don't want to give away any of my personal ideas, but I will make a seperate list of ideas that I think are worthy of use but would not correspond to my plot line. Also, I'm interested in online chating which would be a great way relaying ideas, I heard someone mention an online chat room called RedwallWars do you no about it? Because I don't know much about it. Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 01:19, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Sal

Hey Salem, did you get my last message, and what did you think of it? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:30, April 18, 2011, (UTC)

Hey, I read The Blademasters Tale and I have a few questions and recomondations. First I would like to say that the plot-line is great and I like the way it is going. Second I would like to recomend that you change the title, I actualy do like it, but the "Blademaster" was a hereditary title used at Salamandastron asumedly created by Brang ForgeFire, so, unless it has Buckler in it I don't "recomend" it. If the title does refers to Armuk Rinn, then I "recomend" using something like The Conqueror's Quest or something like that. Just to remind you, these are all recomendations and I wont mind if you ignore them. Also, I would like your permission to edit certain "small" portions of your fanfic for you. Once again I wont be offended if you ignore me. Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 20:00, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome! Sounds great! So could I have permission to make minor edits to your fanfic? Its good as it is, but I just wanted to know. Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 22:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, would you like to chat for a while? I'm not busy at the momment.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:58, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Sweet, so what awsome ideas do you have for the fan fic you're making, and can I help you in any way? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:10, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Cool! Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 23:18, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I did, and it seems off to a good start but I think you might want to remove some of the language.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 00:01, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I like the fan fic, it is really awsome :P will you keep me updated when you update the fan fic again ? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:30, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing :)

Cool, I like to see the spoiler, and it shall be deleted, I am programed to delete thingz, and I'll bee back :P Guess where I got that from ? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:44, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

I liked the spoiler, it was pretty awsome cool, and I deleted it as you asked, Salem. So what did you think of the new section I made on my talk page? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:00, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Oooh, of course I liked the song child, and it suits just fine, not let Big Momma sit down and eat some crumbles. Big Momma sits down and accidently crushes the abbot Oooh my, diden't see you, there Abbot uhhh what ever your name was. Hehehe, take a good guess where I got that from :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:10, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Thats ok, I was imtimadating Big Momma from "Big Momma's house, its a funny film, have you watched it before, Salm? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:20, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Hmm, how about she has a vision of her master failing his quest, but lies about it, and after that she goes off somewhere, and as she walks along, she is attacked by a gang of vermin and she is soon killed by them, so what do you think? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:20, April 30, 2011, (UTC)

Thats ok, and I thik your version of how she dies is better, and abit more creative for each character.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:45, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

I'll awnser your question tomorrow, but for now I GTG now, chat to you tomorrow, Salem.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:56, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Hey Salem, no I'm not busy at the momment, how are you doing my friend, and hows your day been besides it being boring? (watches Salem twiddle her thumbs) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 06:00 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

I think Armuk gets Dryditch fever before he killes Brownjaw, which will make more sence I think? (Looks down to Salem) Oy! what are ye doing missy? having a lazy day huh? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 06:30 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

I understand you being lazy, I am lazy myself, plus its fun to be lazy, oh BTW move over and let me lye on the grass, I need to chill. (sits down) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 06:55 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

I read your few words of your story, chapter 1, it looks good but if you have read my comment, the story needs abit of fixing up. Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:55 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Well I saw you diden't put any "Enters" in your story, take a look at mine and you will see I have added enters to my fan fic, its a simple fix.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:09 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Hehe, no prob.

Hehehe, no problem Sal, I had that problem aswell when I first came on, then I started to improve as you can tell when I write to you and other users.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:55 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

You're welcome, a none redwall story hmmm, I'd like to know about it, it may be intrasting, I don't mind reading it Salem :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:10 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Hmm... I'll think about it. I hope I can come up with something awesome. ;) Cheetahstar File:Swartt.jpg ^{Ferrets Rule!} 19:10, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem! Check out the new pic I drew. It took a while to draw.

File:Firlow meets Guosim.jpg

Firlow Treetye(me) meets up with the GUOSIM and waits in line for food(soup).

Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 19:14, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

You bet I do! Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 19:19, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I like to see the summury, so I know what the story is about.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:30 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Awsome plot, I deleted it and everything else the section of my talk page it was on, so there is more space for you to talk on.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:48 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Yep, I can see it becoming a movie (bribes movier derectors to make the film) it it does turn out to be a film, don't forget to mention my name, :P .Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:55 April 19, 2011, (UTC)

P.S So, what else you want to chat about?

Yeah, that sounds interesting. I just thought I'd also mention the fact that by the end of the book, Rowanbloom is about 14-15 seasons old, so she'd presumably be much older than her brother Brang, I think.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 20:38, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. I can't do it immediently(because I'm trying to finish first "chapter" of my fanfic) but I will try to do it within the next two weeks. Don't worry about being shy, I'm still learning about being social on this site. I'll get to it as soon as I can though, matey. Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 20:51, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, whats up, you want to talk for a while, I am not busy at the momment.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:20, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Yeah. I couldn't think of a decent reason for deleting it, so I just put "Belongs on Blog" even though IP's can't have blogs. As far as I know. :P --Cheetahstar File:Swartt.jpg ^{Ferrets Rule!} 21:27, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome, I like to read the fan fic, but I will do so, later, so hows your day been so far, still boring or abit more fun? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:33, April 19, 2011, (UTC)

Cool

Awsome, I am glad your day has become more better. (gives Salem a muffin) I hope you like muffins (Hides hot sorce) so anyway, what kind of foods do you eat, if ya don't mind me asking? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:15, April 20, 2011

P.S I eat alot, but I weigh upto 68 KG's

If you don't like pizza thats ok, we all have our favorite kinds of foods, my least favorite kinds of foods are fish, there are some fish I will eat, though.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:54, April 20, 2011

Ok, lets hear it, whats your question about the none Redwall Fan fiction story? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:07, April 20, 2011

Well, all I can say about the story is, it seems pretty good, and might be an enjoyable to read once it is started.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:47, April 20, 2011

Cool, and sorry if it takes me so long to reply, the speeqe chatrooms are busy, here is a little something for ya (gives Salem a backet fulled with muffins and chocolet goodies plus her favorite foods) hehe, I tuke some time to do all of this some how :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:23, April 20, 2011

Hey Salem, I am on at the momment, so if you want to chat feel free to, and sorry if I diden't tell you I was getting off, it was late and I diden't want to risk getting caought with my paw in the cookie jar, if you know what I mean? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:08, April 20, 2011, (UTC)

Awsome, have you noticed that you are 200 edits behind me, and you have been here since Feb, which is amazing, I have 636 edits made and you have 468 edits made, which is pretty good, we are like bees, busy and doing stuff on the Wiki.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:44, April 20, 2011, (UTC)

Hey Salem! I updated my Fanfic. I will do some more later today. User blog:ForrestFighter/Wanted Freedom Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 14:30, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, Llamao here.

For your new story, you could start by mentioning Armuk's arrival on the shores of Mossflower, and maybe add a twist, like make either Vilaya or maybe Zwilt his daughter/son. I forget everything that happened in the Sable Quean, so I don't really know anything about Armuk except that I think Buckler's dad or grandad killed him. Anyway, you can incorporate Vilaya/Zwilt into the story to make it more interesting, and you can say how Vilaya took control after Armuk was killed.

Hope this helps!

Llamao ^{Hark to the battlecry: Llaammmaaaoooo!}

Hey Salem, its ok, so what is this important thing you want to talk to me about, I am here to listen.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 11:44, April 20, 2011, (UTC)

Ahhh, it sounds like an awsome story, I'd like to read it, will you give me a link once the story is done? and which Wiki is it on? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:00 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Hey Salem, would you like to talk abit more or you busy at the momment? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:00 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Yay! you're a fun person to talk to, which is a good thing, I love chatting with my friends, no matter if they are on the wiki or if I know them in real life.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:13 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

YAY! :)

Cool, so should we chat about more ideas for SoN/Redwall Fan fic? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:30 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing, as I said before, I am happy to help :) ok, how about while they are spying on the hares of the long patrol Armuk starts to exsperiance his first symtomps of Dryditch Fever, and when Brownjaw ask him if he is ok, Armuk lies and says he is just nervous, what do you think of this idea? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:44 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sure, I'd like to see a little sneak peek, and I will delete it once I am done reading it.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:00 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

I like it, and I made some more space for us to chat on, I call it, section recycling, which might become useful.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:24 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing, I will think on it, but for now I must be off to bed, and I will get back to you with the subject. (hugs Salen) I shall see you tomorrow, Salem.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:43 April 21, 2011, (UTC)

I wish I could help but I'm kind of stuck on my own fanfic at the moment (I know what's going to happen but I'm not sure of the order it's supposed to happen in). I'm sorry that I couldn't be of any help to you. :( If I come up with anything later, though, I will be sure to let you know.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 03:28, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hello Salem, I am back from my work, if you want, we can talk about your fan fic, I have loads of ideas, waiting to be telled.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:13, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Well one of the parts of Armuk delirions I was thinking of, that he sees some hares making fun of him and he starts yelling, Brownjaw watches this and asks if he has lost it, Armuk looks to Brownjaws and his delirion makes him believe that Brownjaw is a hare, so he attacks him, till he realises what he is doing, and lets go of Brownjaw and ask what happened, and he has no memoery of attacking Brownjaw or anything else, so what do you think? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:35, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

P.S I hope this idea works for your fan fic.

Sure thing, and don't worry about it, I'm a patcent fellow, so what shall we chat about? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:30, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, have you ever watched a show called "The worlds Funniest Animals" its really funny, I watch it, but not all the time, though. Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:42, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing, I'd like to see the lycrics, you want me to delete them after reading them? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:00, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sweet.

Ok, I shall delete once I have done reading, as you have commanded, my master :P (bows to Salem) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:20, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

I read the lyrics and I love it, the song fits the fan fic, and I deleted the lyrics as you requested, my friend :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:30, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing, will you give me a link to it? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 08:52, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Well, I always have read fan fics chapter by chapter, which is good to do, cause its easy and no problem at all.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:10, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Annoying me nah, I shall be reviewing it this weekend, just wondering, do you mean my review on Son of the Scourge or Bladmaster's Tale? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:18, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Just making sure, I will review by reading one chapter at a time and I will review and tell what I think of the story and each chapter of the story.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:25, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

Ok, chat to you later Salem :( Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:35, April 21, 2011, (UTC)

I think both are great =) The only thing I would say about SOTS is to keep updating! Redtail + Beth is good, but we all want to hear what twisted plotsies come next.... Holly Thornblade^{The War to End All Wars- Have You Joined?} 20:38, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

hmm, I guess I could squeeze in a little time to draw something for you. Who did you have in mind?--SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 22:21, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome, lets chat some more, Salem my dear friend :D Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 12:52, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

So, whats your day been like, Salem? fun, boring, busy ,ect ect ect? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:00, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

Meh ok, I will chat with you when you get back, have a good time :) Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 01:20, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

NO!!!, yer back. (Nabs Salem and sends her to China) JK :D its good to see you're back, so where did you go to? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 02:40, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, so I like have 30 minutes to chat, so lets chat, Salem.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:00, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

Awsome, so Salem, hows it coming along with, Blademaster's Tale, it must be coming along pretty well. (Shivers) Berrr, it's cold.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:14, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

okie doke ;) --SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 02:52, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, I just got back on, would you like to chat, I am not busy at the momment.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 03:52, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

Cool, so what has your day been like Salem, and what have you been upto? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 04:26, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

Sure thing Salem, and I am about to read your fan fic now.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 05:53, April 22, 2011, (UTC)

I edited my fanfic (a lot)! User blog:ForrestFighter/Wanted Freedom If you'd like to comment of suggest please use comment area on the fanfic. Hope you like it matey! Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 14:45, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, its kinda outa my league, but you can post it on my talk page and I'll see if I like it. No offence, I'm just kinda perticular about it. Treetyyyye!!!! - (F.F.) Mossflowerrrr!!!! 02:35, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds really good, I'm sorry I'm taking so long to get back to you =P Going to read your update now Holly Thornblade^{The War to End All Wars- Have You Joined?} 15:33, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Could you please read my FF that I'm rewriting? It's called Hollyfire's Tale. Thanks =) It's not very long... right now.

Hey! I read the summery, Sounds awesome!!! can't wait!:DMad Maud File:Yikandmaudie.jpg ^{I'm warning you, I'll bally well be your friend!!} 01:41, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Update! End of Chapter 10. I don't know if I'll be updating again soon or not. And guess who comes in: Rori! Please comment and enjoy!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 09:34, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Update

There's a new chapter for Gingiverian: A Tale of Redwall if you want to read it! Akalle has a sort of cameo appearance in this chapter (she'll be more fully introduced later on).

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:22, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Huge update on Journey of Hardships!! Slagar the Cruel ^{I am the Master of Life and Death...} 17:45, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, that sounds good... I think nyou sent me a message that was meant to go to Segalia!! Haha. HollyFile:Hollyfire by Ferretmaiden.jpgStechpalme-Feure's Krieg 00:38, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

What's the Trouble?

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:37, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm afraid not; the book's pretty explicit in saying that Romsca's spine was fatally severed by Lask Frildur, and that she died in Abbot Durral's arms, and her body was later thrown overboard by him. Perhaps you could have Rosmsca have an estranged daughter named after her mother(I have an aunt and cousin who share the same name like that), or maybe she could appear as a ghost, like many characters who have died in the Redwall series have done. P.s. Did you read Akalle Bladewhip's cameo/introduction scene? I'll introduce her by name in a later chapter.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Unless it's in a flashback scene, probably not. Bad Vermin don't come back as ghosts, as a general rule.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:52, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

As I said, unless it's a flashback, probably not a good idea. The book's pretty explicit about his (rather humiliating) death, too.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:56, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Are there any more questions? Always glad to help.

Sure! I myself have written a few fan fics, so just tell me what's up and I'll try to help. you probably haven't met me yet because I don't come on very often, as I am very busy with life. but I'm glad to meet you.

And no, you're not annoying me. :)--Verminfate

That's great! :D Which fan fic is it?--Verminfate

Akalle

Hi, Salem!

I updated my fanfic, and the character you submitted makes her official debut here. Thanks for submitting her, she's turned out to be a more main character than I originally thought she'd be. Here's the link. Please comment on the chapter if you like it.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:21, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

good question

okay, what I did is that I went to a character's page that has a picture, click the edit button, then copy and paste the character base, and then I edited the settings and viola. To help you out, here's a blank one, just erase what says "info here". just edit this part of my message and copy and paste this to your page

hope this helps --SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 17:54, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

File:Crossface.png

finished Crossface for ya. Sorry it took so long though ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 22:26, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

lol, any time. It's okay. Well, I guess I do have a little time to spare, who do you want me to draw this time? ----SeloundFile:Slagar's GOOD side digital.PNG REVENGE FOR THE FOXES 03:22, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, I just got on, so if you like, we can chat.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 07:54, May 09, 2011, (UTC)

Poll Page=

I have created a Poll Page; this will have questions on it regarding things I'm having trouble deciding in my story and will be updated every so often.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 21:44, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

An art trade is between two artists; both draw a character that the other one suggested.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 21:35, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Updated Fanfic

I have updated my fanfic; please comment!

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 18:16, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE: request and siggy

it's coming along good, just some tweaking to be done on it.

for a siggy

copy this>> Salem the CruelFile:Crossface.png Salem the Cruel

just edit this selection of the message, copy and paste (make changes if you want, like image[with image, you fust type down the file name], font color, and tagline) it to your signature space in your preferences

if you need more help on this, just ask me ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 11:19, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

no problem. I checked it out: very nice story :D but really sad though ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 17:52, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Overdue Update

There is a long-overdue Next Chapter to Gingiverian now.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:45, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

File:Had enough.png

not much going on, plus I finished that request you wanted ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 22:03, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

okay, what do you want to talk about?

P.S: any time :D---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 22:10, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

not yet---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 23:24, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Updated! Bit melancholy, enjoy! And please comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 16:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

i'm sorry, but no... i just do art trades, and maybe some giftart.. -- FerretmaidenFile:Meeks new.jpg RAWR! I'm An Artist! Fear Me! 00:14, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Update

There is a new chapter to my fanfic!

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 20:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Long, ottery, masculiny, thoughtful update! Enjoy and please comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 19:38, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hello there!! Salem! I was very glad to read your story!, so when you update make sure to let me know! Also about Alex theres a lot you can do with him, he's what you would call a potential character, meaning even though he only appears briefly his role could increase exponentially in the future for example, in the story up to now Feryn and Alex are somewhat friends if they continue their friendship this could cause problems with the long patrol since Alex is a ferret, another instance is that they manage to keep being friends but Alex is recruited in the villians horde because he's in need of a job and Feryn being from the long patrol would probably have to face him in combat creating all sorts of trouble, so in conclusion his role could be quite significantly expanded or you could just leave him as a simple support character. Hope this helps!!

May your blade always strike true and happystorytelling!!--Redmight 02:04, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, would you like to chat for a while? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 10:26, June 12 2011, (UTC)

Update

Thought you might be happy to hear, I finally finished chapter three of The Wildcat's Revenge. No, Kodo isn't in it yet, but I'm thinking he will appear within the next 5 chapters. I'll try and write fast, but if it's going to be longer I'll let you know. The short story with him isn't really my top priority right now, but if I don't get to Kodo soon, I'll still try and finish it.

--I Am That Is, My sword will wield for me 14:33, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

More Story

There is a Chapter to my fanfic! :) Akalle makes another appearance here, albeit a brief one.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 18:58, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hello~

Hey Salem! I see you recently left a message on my talkpage. Thanks for the late welcome. Anyway, you got my name wrong. I'm JumpoverMoon, otherwise known as Jump. You called me Redmight, who is another user on this wiki lol. Maybe you got a bit confused or something :) Anyways, sure we can chat. Are we gonna chat on our talkpages? Also, check out my fanfic Here JumpoverMoon I'm Ready!

Hey.

Hi if you want to chat with someone you can chat with me any time until 1:00PM. till friday.Badger Lord RoseThorn 19:14, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Burr aye

Hello once again Salem. I understand the fact that you are busy and can't be on the wiki much. I am quite the busy person myself. I see that your fursona is a fox named Salem that's Slagar's daughter. I'm trying to think of a fursona that is a mouse for myself. She's awesome so far... I'm an artist. I'm going to take requests as soon as I fix my scanner. You can leave a request on my talk page if you want when I say people can on my profile.

Anyway, have a nice day~ --JumpoverMoon 20:52, June 28, 2011 (UTC) I'm Ready

Boi 'okey

Hello Salem. Sorry about it but I won't be able to chat for a while. I have to do something. Maybe you can tell me if you've got a fanfic you're writing. I'll be happy to see it and leave comments later on. JumpoverMoon 23:18, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hi!

Hi Salem. I have just started to read your fanfic "A Little Night Music". It's cool. KIU! Anyway, I'm taking art requests. If you want something drawn, you can leave a request on my talk page. I'll be happy to draw. The link to my art page is on my profile. Also check out my fanfic here JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 19:47, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

So...

I'm done reading chapter 9 to be exact in "a Little Night Music." So what do you wan me to draw?--JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 00:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Alright

I'll draw that scene for you! I'll be on vacation for three days so I won't be able to finish it quickly, but I'll do my best. And no, you didn't bother me. I'm one of those users that tend to reply late also, so I understand. --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 20:42, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Book

There is no book by this name, this is a malicious lie that insults the memory of Brian Jacques, and I mentioned all of that in the comments here. Please stop in the spreading of this lie, thank you. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 21:16, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've finished the picture. How can i get it too you? I am on dA just in case I can give it to you that way. Treetyyyye!! (F.F)Mossflower!! 13:48, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Salem, about another art picture that you'de like me to do, I am busy temporarily but you can send me a description of the char/chars and the scene(one scene of course) and I will get to it later. Possibly, the end of June, maybe later. Treetyyyye!! (F.F)Mossflower!! 13:22, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back!

I'm back! Your picture will be up by tommorow, just so you know. --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 00:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

All done

I'm sorry if I'm late to show you this, but anyway, here 'tis! Click on it to make it bigger! --JumpoverMoon 22:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

File:Vilaya vs Cobak.jpg

Vilaya vs Cobak for SalemtheCruel

okay

Your welcome. Anyway, another request? No problem, mate. It could take a while, but I'll try my best. So what do you want me to draw next? Oh,and please check out my fanfic --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 22:40, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Description

Sure, but can you please tell me how Jangus at least looks like?

PS. Are you still updating "A Little Night Music?" --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 23:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hey there! I've read "Son of the Scourge" and it was pretty good. I started reading "A Little Night Music" and I need to finish readin it. it was pretty good too. I'll have to check out your other fan-fics. :)--Wolf985 19:24, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Wolf985

I have already planned out most of what happens next but I'm always willing to hear suggestions. Fire away! :)

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 16:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done!

File:Jangus.jpg

Jangus for Salem

Jangus is done! Isn't he pretty? --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 18:09, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm interested

Carry On!

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 00:59, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

This seems interesting; the only thing I'm wondering is who Solomon, is, as you didn't specify.

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 14:17, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem, hows it going, I just got on, so would you like to chat for a while? Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Whats up gangsta!}, 09:00, July 14, 2011, (UTC)

Sorry I didn't clarify. There won't be any villian's songs for the next three or four chapters, probably; however, it seems a good idea and I will probably use it when I do get to writing villian songs again. Thank you very much for your Idea!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 23:29, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Salem would you mind reading my fan-fics. The first "A Tale of Two Rogues" still needs some work but its just some simple editing so i'm sorry if there are errors. That story is finished. Now i am working on a fan-fic called "Mina Silvermist." I plan to update that one real soon. Please comment!!!--Wolf985 18:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC)wolf985

I don't mind being updated at all. Please continue!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:39, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

yes!

Yes you can send me another request. I love drawing, and you can request as much as you like. The only thing that worries me at the moment is that I'm having a bit of trouble with my scanner. So it won't be a surprise if it takes time to upload my drawings. --JumpoverMoon 02:29, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Random thought

Something else I just thought of with Kodo: Do I have permission to kill him if I need to? If you don't want me to, I won't, but it is a bit better if all the villains end up dead. I don't plan on doing a sequel to Wildcat's Revenge, so that would leave it a bit unfinished if he was still alive.

--I Am That Is, My sword will wield for me 14:33, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! The scanner problem is fixed! What would you like me to draw? --A not logged in jumpovermoon

Redwall Books

I've read every book except for The Rogue Crew. I think I read some of the books twice. Did you read The Rogue Crew? --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 21:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

ooooooh....

Interesting! What exactly is it about? I'd like to hear about it. Just wonderin' Sale, but how do you manage to cope with all those fanfics? Do you think you can finish everything? No offense there, mate. You can check out my fanfic. :]

Oh, and my scanner is being especially cruel to me today. It's not working anymore and I have to upload pics for Selound and Wolf985. Have you still not thought of what I have to draw? I'm going to fix the scanner somehow. :c --a not logged in JumpoverMoon

here 'tis!

File:Vilaya dressed to kill.jpg

Hooray, my scanner is fixed and whatnot. Here is Vilaya, dressed to kill. Hope you like it!

PS: I'm a fast drawer, am I not? Just wonderin', but do you take requests? --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 06:21, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Update

My story is updated!

-Pieces of Eight

Request

Hey there Sale. It's okay about the quality of the drawing. I used to be a really suckish drawer myself xD. ANyway, I would like you to draw a mouse named Notch Grayfur. She is a mouse with pale gray fur and heavy lidded blue eyes. She wears a long black tunic with purple trim that is patterned like flames. The tunic is long and reaches her knees. She also has a white sash around her waist that has a dagger with a black hilt and a red pommel stone thrust into it. Hope that helps!

And yes, please do update me. --JumpoverMoon I'm ready to draw, mateys! 21:01, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Picture

The picture of Notch wasn't that bad in my opinion. It looks cute! If you practice your skills, you'll be really good. Keep on drawing! --a not logged in Jumpy

Update!

Piece-of-Eight 02:09, July 26, 2011 (UTC)Piece-of-Eight

Tada! Darrow is done!

File:Darrow .jpg

Darrow for Salem!!

Hello there Salem!! I finished the Sketch for Darrow!! not sure if you'll like it but here it is anyway ENJOY!!

Behold! the new and improved Darrow!!

File:Darrow Colored.jpg

Darrow illustrated in color for Salem!

Hello Salem!! I finished the illustration of Darrow a lot faster than I thought, hope you enjoy it!!

Update

Long overdue update on Gingiverian please comment!

God bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 21:26, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

FanFic Update

Thanks for what you said about my fanfictions. It was really encouraging! Just so you know, I have an update on The Tribe of Rivergale. I may be a wildcat, but I'm no vermin!

Update

I updated The Tribe of Rivergale. Thanks for what you said about my fanfiction. It was really encouraging! Sandingomm the Wildcat 23:56, August 2, 2011 (UTC)Sandingomm the Wildcat I may be a wildcat, but I'm no vermin!

Hello!

File:Salem .jpg

Sketch of Salem!

Hey there Salem! heres the picture! I have no idea if I got the clothing right, and for the sword I just improvised on its design since I had no idea what I looked like.........well here it is! hope you like it! --Redmight 19:04, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

File:Salem colored.jpg

Salem colored!

Tada!! Salem in color! tell me if I got her right, I"m not sure if I did. --Redmight 21:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hey =) Sorry, I poofed for the summer, but I'm back!!!!! =) Lotsa updates O.O Anyway, I updated The Ultimate War (are you following that? It's pretty long) and The Bridge (but that one's on the Fan Fic Wiki) :) HollyFile:Hollyfire by Ferretmaiden.jpgStechpalme-Feure's Krieg 20:09, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Um... soon :P I say that to everyone but I mean it... :P I updated again but I have so much going on... Holly^{Love Conquers All} 12:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Of course it's alright if we chat! So what do you want to chat about?--Wolf985 14:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Wolf985

About

About the art request: Okay. What do you want me to draw?

About the bad news: What do you mean by that, Sale? JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 20:15, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okie doke

I'll get to work on the foxes as soon as I can! Oh, and about Scotty's big pic, maybe she was just adding in characters that did art trades with her, I dunno. But to tell you the truth, Scotty wasn't going to put me in her big pic until I found it out by chance and asked her to add me in. Don't be sad about it, Sale. No hard feelings, eh? :) I'll make sure to add you in if I get to draw a pic of my friends in this wiki.-- A not logged in Jump.

File:Conner and Merle.jpg

I know they're dibbuns, but they look like teens.:P Sorry 'bout that.

I'm done with Conner and Merle! Hope you like!

Oh, and did you read my above comment? --JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 00:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I forgot to add in the fanart category and TBT deleted it. No worries, I redid it! --JumpoverMoon 15:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure

What do you want to chat about, mucker?(I call friends muckers because Dingeye and Thura are one of my favorite characters :D)Are you still writing The Prussian or whatever it was called? And I know that this is random, but what's your favorite fruit? I like blueberries. --JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 21:15, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

You sure do write a lot of Eulalia related things. --JumpoverMoon 21:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, it isn't bad at all, but rather interesting. How much have you written it out? In the case of myfanfic I've wrote all the way to chap 6 and I'm working on chap 7 at the moment. Fanfic writing is fun! And another question: Who's your fave The Sable Quean character? I think I like Zwilt. Vilaya was just sitting on her rump all day and just bossing Zwilt around. :P --JumpoverMoon 21:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. But I won't be able to chat for a while, cause I'm a little busy, but I'll make time to come here sooner or later. And what do you mean your upset? Is something wrong?--JumpoverMoon 23:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure--JumpoverMoon 23:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'll be quite busy for maybe a few days, but I'll try my best to go on here as much as time can let me. So, what do you want to tell me Sale? --JumpoverMoon 01:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Listening is understanding.

I know how you feel about being bullied I myself was bullied every year of school the worst was my first two years of high school in first grade a sixth grader and a fifth grader broke my right arm.Badger Lord RoseThorn 14:43, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I Understand.

I know how you feel any way hope you like the story and I also hope you join the contest.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Writing Advice

I'm not a pro writer or anything, so I don't know if my advice will be of any help, but I'll write the way that I do things anyway.

I thought up a plot. I sat in silence for a while and decided the genre. Adventure? Horror? Action? Romance? When I did pick one, I decided on the 5 Ws. Who(the characters), what(The story), when(The setting), where(The background), and why(Why things have happened in the story). When I was doing this, I based characters and events from real people and events. When I thought and planned enough to have the general idea in my head, I started a rough draft. I wrote down a rough draft in my notebook, and when I went to typing, I fixed things in my rough draft, and tried to make the story run smoothly as possible without being too fast or chunky. After doing so I read it again, just in case, and when I am satisfied with it, I saved my work.

That's my advice. :) I'm not the best around here, but I still hope it can help. --JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 21:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't help seeing your comment on Jump's talkpage w/out jumping at the opportunity of doing such a noted work of art. :) What I mean to say, is that I have been improving on my art, and if you would like a computer-drawn version of a fan-fic cover, and I don't mean to steal the opportunity from Jump, I am open. I also have some experience in the cover's font( I am making my own "book"). Of course, if I offend either you or Jump I with forget the notion forth-with. Just askin'.Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 00:46, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. I have some Internet restrictions until the end of August. :( Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 01:30, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Fire ahead.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've seen your pictures; I wouldn't call them terrible - in fact I rather liked them. I would be more than happy to do an art trade with you; you can either do my avatar or pick whatever character you want to doFROM THIS LIST. When you've made up your mind let me know and tell me what character(s) (No more than three please) that you'd like me to do.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 02:03, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

anything, really. its up to you. I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 02:15, August 17, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

How I got into Redwall

well, I actually got my first Redwall book as a Christmas present. I couldn't stop reading it for the next week. I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 02:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

sure, I love reading fanfictions! I'll be sure to check them out. I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 02:27, August 17, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

sure thing. I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 02:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

About the cover art, I would do it, but it seems our friend Forrest is interested. Why don't you give him a chance? I've drawn a lot for you anyway. But if you still want me to draw a cover pic for one of your fanfics, I'll gladly do it! :) --JumpoverMoon 03:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

That'll work.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 04:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. I only do cover art if A)you want to work that as the art trade, and B)you don't mind it not being in color.

I thought you liked my picture of Feryn and his sister. :( I admit, I did get there heads terribly wrong, but I have improved a lot sense then. I might even redo there heads if that will nolify your "embarassment". Also, I don't have computer restrictions w/art. Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 14:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Chatting

Hey, Salem, of course I'll chat with you. How come you aren't feeling good ATM? I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 18:35, August 17, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Cover art thing

No need to apologize, Sale. It was fun drawing for you. I'm just wondering, but it seems your asking Scotty for a cover art pic too. You've got more than one fanfic, so multiple people can draw cover art for you. Why don't you give Forrest one last chance? He says he's improved and I can see that he's not lying when I look at his recent pics. If you refuse to ,then I guess I have no say in this matter anymore, but I'm just saying that Forrest really did want to draw and whatnot. No matter how bad drawn the pic may seem, if the artist tried their best, it's a fairly good picture in my opinion. Anyway, if you still want me to draw cover art, I'll do one for A Little Night Music because I follow that story more than your other fanfics. Keep up the good work on those fanfics Sale!--JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 19:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

You wanted me to do a fanart of you for you right? Can you give me all the necessary details then so I can see about starting work on it? Thanks!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 19:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

) Ok. Of course it is-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 22:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Chatting

I dunno, anything! And thanks for liking my art! Do you do art trades? I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 00:23, August 18, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

cool! maybe we can do an art trade sometime! I cant right now, the computer that I do my art on is broken at the moment. :( I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 00:34, August 18, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Uh, I dunno. Maybe the ghosts of past students come to haunt the school while Lupin is there. (shrugs) I wouldn't know. Hey, have you by any chance checked out my latest fanfic? I'm having a little trouble with it. For some reason it keeps showing up in the little horizontal box that you have to scroll sideways. Any suggestions? I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 00:52, August 18, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

I finally updated! End section of Chapter 11...a little midnight escapading, shall we say? Please enjoy and comment!Oh, so that's what happened to it. Cool...are you going to be able to manage so many fanfics? :P I'm sure you will...does that mean I'm still betaing it?-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:57, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay, thanks for trying to help. I'll go ask Lord TBT. I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Question

Can I still draw the cover art for you, Sale? It'll take some time, but I guess I'll do it. JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 01:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aww.Thats nice. Thanks a lot. Anyway, I'm not of neccecity because I'm working on art for Jump. So take your time in getting me the specsifications. Once again, thanks! Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 13:03, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh. Thats the thing. I'm not really allowed to do speeqe right now. Its kinda hard to explain, but it has to do with "some" internet restrictions. If you hang around for a while, you can see the art pic I am making for Jump. It is almost done. Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 13:57, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Why?

Why are you thinking about not continuing A Little Night Music? It was my fave fanfic from you. What exactly do you need help on?JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 20:32, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'd love to chat! I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:37, August 19, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

RPG

Why, yes, I do! I play Guild Wars somewhat often. I'm also an avid fan of D&D. :D I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

RPG

Why, yes, I do! I play Guild Wars somewhat often. I'm also an avid fan of D&D. :D I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Really? Whoa, I've got to check it out sometime! What's it called? I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:49, August 19, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Okay, thanks! I'll check it out right now! I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 02:13, August 19, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

I don't see a whole lot of problems with your characters, but which character do you need the most help on?--JumpoverMoon 02:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm...

So you say that you are having trouble with the characters Drake and Leah. I don't know if this will help, but I'll throw in a few words.

It seems Drake is the main protagonist of the story while Leah is a kinda sorta side character along with Nitram and Francis. Drake sort of reminds me of Matthias; the clumsy weak mouse that grows to become a great warrior. I dunno, but I think you should style Drake's storyline to go on sort of like Matthias. Maybe he will save Redwall from the vengeful Vilaya's new army. Maybe he will go on a quest. Maybe he could become the next warrior of Redwall! But right at the moment, Drake seems to be a weak mouse that is slowly growing more stronger. You are doing a nice job of portraying him like that and you should keep on doing so.

Leah is more of the side character that interacts with Drake. You could make her and Drake's relationship more fun to read about by making her bicker with him one moment, but being friendly with him the next. It also seems Drake likes Leah. You could make Leah realize that and sort of be hesitant at first, but start to fall for him more. She could also help Drake defend Redwall or go on a quest or help on whatever else our mouse guy will do.

Phew! These are my ideas and thoughts for Drake+Leah. I hope I didn't write too much. (Previews it.) No, wait! I guess I did. :D--JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 19:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

What's the good news? --JumpoverMoon 21:11, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

aww, are you okay? Is it school that's making you sad? -- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 07:54, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

no, I'm afraid you didn't tell me. I hope you feel happy again. I'm going through a little bit of depression because my parents are seperated and my dad has no job, but we'll both over come it ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 19:22, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there Salem. Sorry for the super late reply. What were the songs that you found about Jangus and Vilaya? Oh, and I hope you feel better if you're not feelin' good at the moment. PS:Did you decide which fanfic cover art i'll draw?--JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 20:07, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, of course we can chat! I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm Treeblade 01:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Yes, I've read it. It's a very good fanfic! I also read the one where you're asking about continuing it. You should continue it, I enjoy reading it! I'm with ya, mate! ~Kalm 01:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Re: :D

Why yes, I have! :) What idea do you have in mind?

I'm with ya, mate!  ~Kalm 01:49, August 21, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Cool, that's a great idea! (I love secrets! Tell me!)

I'm with ya, mate!  ~Kalm 01:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC)Kalm

Whoa, that is a cool secret! You should totally keep writing it! Your Username File:Nifty Image.jpg Talk Page 02:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please tell me.--JumpoverMoon 02:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I feel your pain, I'm constantly bullied too ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 07:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!

Sure anytime but you might want to check the bell schedule I have posted on my profile page to see when I will be on. So what's up?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

ANYTHING EXCEPT country and opera music it is really irritatingBadger Lord RoseThorn 16:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC).

I don't suppose I have read any of yours yet though I would love to read them, how about my Fan Fictions do you like them?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'm reading one right now blademaster's tale sounds interesting in every way say do you think you're going to enter my contest?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:35, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do as I am horrible at drawing by hand but I am pretty good at doing artwork that looks like old 2D video game spriting. I don't think it would hurt to check out your contest where is the briefing info for the contest?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I am touched to see that you were inspired by me in other words of course to have your very own contest I would love to make something for you I just hope it will come out okay enough.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome of course. I would also like to know if you have seen any of my art on the Redwall Wars wiki if you want to see some just follow the little blue link on my profile page plus you might just see my picture on there maybe.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Got to go to snack be back in about ten minutes or less.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back now so did you take a look?Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Be more careful sorry if I didn't respond so soon I was sorta lost in your Fan Fiction it's really nice.:)Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:27, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The Blademaster's Tale and I will always comment on whatever I am reading at the time.Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:34, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The Scene

That seems like a cool scene for your fanfic. You seem to portray Vilaya's slyness and evilness well, but for some reason Vilaya seems to have a soft spot(Maybe because of Jangus?). Just wondering, but when'll Vilaya wreak her revenge on the abbey? ps: I started the sketch for a little night music. Prepare to be surprised! ;) JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 18:48, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

What's the matter with Jangus? He's a cool character with a cool past! And yes you can show me the scene if you wish. JumpoverMoon 20:06, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hello Salem

Hello, Salem! I'm glad you like my fanfiction. That was really encouraging! Sandingomm the Wildcat 22:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Sandingomm the Wildcat

Ok. Could you draw my character Rivereye? He's a white kitten with blue eyes and black whiskers. His upper fangs stick out, and he wears nothing but a floppy green tunic.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare, in Color.jpeg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 00:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Go Ahead and give me the description of the character or characters (no more than three please) that you'd like me to do. Just be warned, I have an art project in real life that I've got to get done before Sept. 15th so there may be a few days' delay in your pic. I'll also make an entry for your contest.

God Bless,

ScottyBlue (not Logged in)

Sorry about that; I fixed it. I keep getting you and Selound mixed up because you're both supposed to be foxes and it gets confusing. I will try to get your pictures done as soon as I finish working on my other project.

God Bless,

ScottyBlue (not logged in)

Is this good?

How do you like this?

File:Salem The Cruel By Lord Rose Thorn For SalemtheCruel.png

Lord Rose Thorn's Submitted artwork for SalemtheCruel's contest.

Is it cute or what?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

No problem I am bored as well since a certain partner of mine has not responded to my message.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:42, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

No it isn't him though I don't think I've talked to him yet and sure I would be honored to be in your Fan Fiction if you could make a cameo appearance that would be just fine with me.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:51, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Talk to you in a little bit see you in about ten minutes okay?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:58, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sweet! Thanks! I'll go right now...and work on the update :)-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 17:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'M BACK! :)Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:11, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure don't see why not go ahead and shoot me the link alright? BTW is there anyone else on right now besides us?Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

What about Segalia or Scotty are they on as well?Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:22, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks I've been meaning to talk to her for a while to see if she has been keeping up on the reading so far and I just got ahold of my partner so I will be in touch still.Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:29, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Art Trade

Sure, Salem, I'd love to do an art trade, just send me the details for the character you want me to draw and I'll send you the details for mine. ~Kalm

This is new.

I should tell you I am making something called The Redwall Armory on the Redwall Wars Wiki there is a link on my profile page check it out if you can and tell others please.Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:10, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for welcoming me, I appreciate that. I would love to be friends, as all the friends I have at the moment don't have a clue what Redwall is.

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:13, August 24, 2011 (UTC) I iz the grandson of Martin II

Clutch The Cruel

Woah...Thats cool and odd at the same time :D

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Answers

Sure, feel free to use any of my characters in your fan fiction. Clutch is Horribly evil.

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Clutch's story

Clutch was born to Slagar the Cruel and Nijan The Trader. He looked up to his father and wanted to be just like him. He got half his tail chopped off by a loam hedge mouse when he was young and wants revenge of them, making him as evil as he could ever get. He now lives alone in Bracken Woods, planning his revenge on Loam hedge and the mouse that sliced his tail. When he finally had a plan, he attacked Loam hedge and was killed.

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changes to Clutch's story (XD)

Good point....ok so I'll change it to Redwall that he attacked. As for his death, the same mouse that chopped half his tail off (That mouse happened to be Raybeck) also killed him with the sword of Martin.

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

BTW

Yes, you may write a fan fiction about Clutch, as I would love to see his story have something done with it. :)

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:45, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Your fan fiction

Yes, I would Love to hear your idea :D

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

If Clutch hadn't died

Then I guess they would have joined forces, gathered an army, and try to attack Redwall again XD (Clutch isnt one to give up)

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Your fan fiction

Yeah, I think that would make a better story. This is gonna be a fan fiction I'll really want to read XD

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:54, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, no problem. And where can we chat faster??

RatthiasTheWarrior 17:57, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem, I would like you to draw my mouse character Horrus Bladepaw. He is a mouse with medium-brown fur. He wears a yellow tunic. He wears a dark brown belt, with a longsword thrust through it. He has bright brown eyes. Thanks! I'll get started on Scirius. ~Kalm

I can't believe you would forget I would be on I was looking forward to chatting with you BTW you should check out my profile page in a little bit since I am adding a new link you should know about.Badger Lord RoseThorn 19:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Of course we can though I'll be logging off around 12:54P.M. to get on the High School bus to go home but why not chat for a bit?Badger Lord RoseThorn 19:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

How come there is no link for Kalm Treeblade?Badger Lord RoseThorn 19:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Chatting

Sure, I'd love to chat! ~Kalm

funny fanfic

Why yes, I would love to see the fanfic! Kalm Treeblade 21:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

THE CAKE IS A LIE!

I liked the part where Gabool is all like "THE CAKE IS A LIE! BLASTED BELL! BLAST IT!" :D Kalm File:Nifty Image.jpg Talk Page 22:04, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

where? ~Kalm

Cool! I'll chat with ya later, the computer that I'm using right now is about to be occupied by another person. See ya later! ~Kalm

um... I'm not sure. I'll let you know of o find out. ~Kalm

WHAT?

It is right under the polls.Badger Lord RoseThorn 14:48, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Only if we can do it via talk page. I don't use official "Chat" websites.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 16:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't had a chance to look at it yet (insane school busy-ness); plus, I keep forgetting. I will look at it as soon as I get the chance and let you know. Sorry I haven't read it yet; I should have long ago. :(

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 16:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. How have you been?

Wanna Chat?

I was wondering if you would like to chat with me and Scotty is that okay?Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I started class on the 15th. :P Your story sounds very interesting; I'll check it out later. :)

Would it offend you too badly if I go ahead and sign out? I just remembered I've got an essay to write for history class that's due so I need to finish it pronto. Sorry I didn't think of this sooner.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 16:28, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

All right, thanks. I will try to get to work on your pictures sometime in the next week or so. BTW, Thansk again for coming up with the Character Akalle; she's going to play a large part later on in the story and I've been having fun wiriting her. Did you see the picture Selound drew of her for me? It came out pretty cool.

Thumb

Sorry!

I had a little computer problem but I fixed it.Badger Lord RoseThorn 16:52, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fanfic cover

File:A Little Night Music by Jump.jpg

The long awaited fanfic cover!

I'm done with it! Hope you like!--JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 18:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

hey hey!

Mind if I use your characters in my fan fiction?

Ratthias The Warrior Forever Mighty, Forever Strong

Its fine, and thank you for letting me use them :)

Ratthias The Warrior Forever Mighty, Forever Strong

Done again

Hope you like!

File:Salem by Jump.jpg

Salem

--JumpoverMoon 01:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Somethiing I forgot to mention

Hey Salem,

I meant to tell you this sooner; I'm sorry I didn't put you in my big picture. I have two or three other people I need to tell this; they were on my list but I ran out of paper. I will make you an extra special contest entry sketch to make up for it.

God Bless,

ScottyBlue (not logged in)

Art Trade + Contest

Hey, Salem. I'm done with your picture! Ta-Da! I also drew another picture, this time of your character, Salem, for your contest! Ta-Da!(again) BTW, you didn't specify if Scirius should have a weapon, so I gave him a dagger. ~Kalm

File:Scirius Branchclimber.jpg

A picture of Scirius Branchclimber for Salem.

File:Salem the Cruel.jpg

A picture of Salem the Cruel for Salem's contest.

Contest

As it seems to be the done thing around here, I am holding a contest for the best version of my avatar character. The deadline is Oct. 1st; rules, prize list, and description can be found on my profile page (Click on my name below).

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 05:45, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. I will have your art trade picture up soon; sorry for the delay.

Chatting

Sure, I'd love to chat! Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 18:27, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'd love to! Except, um... I forgot the link to it. Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 18:53, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Salem, sorry that I was gone from speeqe for so long. I couldn't find what I was looking for. So what did you want to talk about? Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 23:39, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 12! Short update with only one line of dialogue...enjoy and please comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:23, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no, what?-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:24, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my, are you okay? What's happening?-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

That's understandable. It's seems that you're okay though, so I'm glad. I know a lot about lost power...I'm glad it's back! I gtg now so if I don't answer you, it's not because I'm ignoring you since I wouldn't do that.-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, of course we can go back on speeqe. Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 01:48, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Contest Info

In case you were wondering, this is what the grand prize winner of my contest will get. For rules, and other places' prizes, see my user profile page.

Grand Prize (1 Winner)

• Full Picture in "Other Users" sections of my Art Page
• Full Picture on Profile Page
• Full Picture as part of my Signature for at least a month
• Allowed to create one character for my fanfic "Gingiverian" (some very slight specifications here)
• Allowed to name three "Gingiverian" characters that I describe
• Personalized "Thank You" picture from me, in color (This is a rarity)

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 03:22, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that. I will be praying for you and your family.

God Bless,

ScottyBlue (Not Logged In)

Tests

If you'd like to test signatures or anything else, please use the Sandbox. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 05:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The books I have read.

I have read Redwall, mossflower, mattimeo, mariel of redwall,martin the warrior, the bellmaker, outcast of redwall, pearls of lutra, the long patrol, marlfox, the legend of luke, lord brocktree, loamhedge, racketty tam and high rhulain.Badger Lord RoseThorn 15:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, What's up?

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

That's the problem with online chat rooms; you can't ever really know for sure what's going on at the other end - you only have the other speaker's word for it. I wouldn't worry too much about it if I were you.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:23, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. I've been watching news reports on Irene's damage and have been praying for the people affected, including you. Was there much damage in your area?

I was praying that you wouldn't suffer much damage. SOrry to hear that the water main's out; we have our own water pump at my house, but when that goes out it gets miserable around here.

My internet has been acting very slow and very wierd so I'm going to close it down and restart it. Talk to you later!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't know you lived on the east coast. Is it close to VA? Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 00:02, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

what happened? -- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 03:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

OH NO! Where do you live? Did it take your house? ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 03:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey!!

SALEM!!! I got your message whats wrong!!??--Redmight 03:34, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok Salem, you had me really worried by your message, are you sure everything's ok?"--Redmight 03:39, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sure

Sure thing Salem, first thing I do when I wake up will be to go to the Chat.--Redmight 03:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

well, that's good then. I live in Arizona, but I hope to get some rain soon, it's been rather hot lately. I hope everything gets fixed over there ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 07:14, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Because no one that I know around here likes Redwall very much. So when you mentioned getting hit pretty bad by the hurricane, I thought, Wow, one of my Redwall friends might acutly live around where I do! Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 13:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

So what state do you live in? You dont have to answer if it makes you uncomftorble. I just want to know how close you are to where I live. Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 13:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, you live a little farther away than I thought. Where I live is not exactly "boring". Besides being close to the beach, one of the friends that I made at school, loves Redwall and happened to be on this site (Folderon swifteye the squirrel). But he is also not really involved with anything. Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 14:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just bought Redwall The Graphic Novel!! Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 14:23, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes

Hello SalemtheCruel, yes, I do take art requests.

PS. Do you have guinea pigs? I have two really cute silky guinea pigs! :)

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

First, I have no idea what ATM means, and second, I am currently unavalible to do art requests because I am doing one for Lilac Stormrudder and I hope to enter Scotty's art contest. If you want to, you can leave a description on my talk page and I will get to it as soon as I can. Laterz! Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 16:24, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

sure

Awww, cute name. My guinea pigs names are Zippy and Nutmeg!

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

No, not yet. I think I've read 11 out of the series.

The thing is that I am fairly new Redwall fan (about a year). :)

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

Believe it or not, right after I left my last comment I actuly thought it might mean that. :) Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 16:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

alright

Alright, give me couple of day and I'll post it!

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

Update

• Chapter 26 is up! :)

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 18:45, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I first read Redwall when I was 8, but I became a fan when I was about 10. How could you be a "fan" of Redwall when you were 4? Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 20:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Art Trade

Hi this is Lilac, I'm more than flattered by what you think of my art :) I'd sure love to do an art trade.

Here's my character description for drawing

Name:Lilac Stormrudder

Species: Female River Otter

Fur:Dark brown with a light brown almost tan neck

Eyes:Brown

Clothes:A dark purple tunic with a red sash for a belt

Weapons:A bow or staff with a small dagger tucked in the sash

Jewelry:a small hooped earring in each ear,a greenstone necklace,3 red bracelets on the right wrist and an arm band on the left wrist

Well,that's everything. I can't wait to see how the picture looks when it's done.

When you send in your character description,try to put in as much detail as possible.

Looking forward to the trade.

To God be the Glory --Lilac Stormrudder 22:49, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I would love to chat.

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

How?

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

here's how you post a picture

1.click leave a message

2.click on the button on top of the subject/headline that says add image(it's next to the button that has the letters str with a line through it)

3.once you click on it,click browse and find the picture

4.after you get the picture click on it and then click upload

5.when you're finished editing(which is optional),just click add image and you're done

I can't wait to see your picture

p.s the squirrel you wanted me to draw,is it a male or a female?

To God be the Glory--Lilac Stormrudder 16:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Help

Hey I can't find the picture you drew Where is it again? How do I find it? --Lilac Stormrudder 00:33, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Zanna

Zanna the fang is up on Redwall Wars! JumpoverMoon 03:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you:D

Thanks you SO SO SO much for my picture!!!! It looks awesome

I finished the rough draft of your picture and all I have left to do is enhance the colors and I'll be done Thank you for your patience :)

To God be the Glory--Lilac Stormrudder 04:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hello

Hello Salem I got your Message --Redmight 05:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

what happened? -- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 06:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

hmm, would it hurt to tell me what you two fought about? ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 21:47, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

urg, will she just go away! Bullying my friends is so uncool, she has no right to do that ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 05:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem! I can't chat right now, as I have to run an errand, but I'll chat with you as soon as I get back! Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 20:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem! I'm not busy anymore, and the only thing that I was recently doing was playing Halo Reach with my little brother. Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 01:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Argh! Darn, I have a busy day. I can't right now, but I'll let you know when I can chat. (I have to run another errand) :( Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 02:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well,

Give me the links to the pages in 3 days or I'll put them up again. Madness? I. AM. A STAR PRODUCTIONS HELPER!!! star kirby12 Talk to the one that made Bloons 2 star mode! 04:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem, Chapter 2 is up! :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! I'll comment and then I'll meet you on speeqe. :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 19:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem! I'm ready to go on speeqe now, but for some strange reason, it says that I can't comment on A Little Night Music. :( I think that the update was awesome! Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 19:12, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Art Trade

File:Redwood Springfern by Lilac.jpg

Redwood Springfern Hope you like her :)

At long last,here's your picture.

I hope you like it

To God be the Glory--Lilac Stormrudder 03:21, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Art trade

I'd love to do an art trade with you! Just tell me what to draw!--Wolf985 23:10, September 4, 2011 (UTC)wolf985

Hmmm....Could you draw my fan-fic Character Marcus O'leary. He's an otter from the highlands and has a strong scottish accent. He has reddish brown fur, dark gray eyes, and wears square spectacles and a long sleeved dark blue tunic with a plaid scarf. His headfur is often sticking up at random angles.

History, he came to mossflower after his father died and eventually settled down in a small holt just north of Salamandastron. He got married to a local female named Miranda. Together they had a daughter, but the day after she was born miranda and the babe dissapeared. About two weeks later she came back to the holt without the babe claiming to have been attacked by vermin. Marcus at first believed her, but after he spoke to the holt cheiftain he became suspicious because there were no vermin in the surrounding area. A few days later Miranda was found guilty of murder and was hung for her crime. Marcus then moved to Port Kendall where he is an assistant for Algernon, the badger healer.

Sad I know, but he is an important character that will soon come into play in my fan-fic "The Captain's Daughter" (sequal to a tale of two rogues) well good luck drawing! --Wolf985 23:32, September 4, 2011 (UTC)Wolf985

Should have mentioned this

Did I remember to explain that, except for the odd special request, all my pictures are B&W? It takes me a long time to draw and I have so much school and church stuff I don't often have time to color in a pic. This is just to let you know that unless you expressly wish otherwise my half of the art trade will be B&W, though I will try to make it as detailed as I possibly can. If there's a problem, or if you really wanted it in color, feel free to let me know; I won't mind but if that's the case it'll probably take me at least another week to get it done.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 04:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well it is done, I really hope ye like it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p10EZt67shA Corbus May The Wind Be At Your Back, Matey

I'm glad you liked the picture Thanks for the art trade :D

To God be the Glory--Lilac Stormrudder 16:42, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, of course! Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! 21:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 3 is up! Also, I'll get started on the cover right away! :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

The picture's coming great! The only part that I have a hard time with is with the animals' legs. ;) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

Salem when ye get on in the morning could ye get on to Speeqe? wiki chat is not working right for me. Corbus May The Wind Be At Your Back, Matey

Art Trade Info

So I would like you to draw my corsair ferret named Arzana. She is a brown ferret with a lighter underside. She wears a tattered green tunic and brown arm guards. She also wears a belt where a curved sword is tucked in and she also has a pouch hanging from her belt that has throwing darts in them. Good luck in drawing her and I'll draw your badger ASAP--JumpoverMoon 20:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Done!

Hello Salem, I am done with your pic.

I hope you like it! :)

File:Onepaw Bloodtooth.jpg

Onepaw Bloodtooth for Slaem.

Squirrelmaiden File:Slyla the Archer.jpg ^{Some times I do act like a hare...For a slice of pie!}

Done!

File:Lady Sable Brock by Jump.jpg

Did it in a new style. Sorry if it's too small.

Hi Salem. Here is the pic of Lady Sable Brock. Hope you like!--JumpoverMoon Kachunk! 02:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: ANOTHER art trade?!

sure, what did you have in mind? -- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 03:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Question

I made a special preview of the children's fantasy/fiction novel I am currently trying to find an affordable self-publisher for, at this website: https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1087402

Could you please check out this link and provide feedback on my writing? Any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is hightly appreciated. NOTE: I already know the formatting /indenting of the paragraphs is bad, but that was not how I wrote it originally; somehow in the saving of the draft it got messed up.

If you do leave feedback, please do it in the provided text box on the createspace link, not on Redwall Wiki. Also, please don't leave your real name anywhere on the page; use your screen name or keep it anonymous.

Thanks, and God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 06:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

About the Above Link

If you don't want to fill out any feedback about the short exerpt in the link above, please at least mark how many stars you give it (out of five).

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 14:51, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

what animal is Onepaw? You forgot to mention that ^.^' do you think you could draw my fox Selound? Her ref pic is my wiki ID, you could use that for a ref ;) ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 21:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hello Salem!!!

Hello Salem!!!

Just to let you know, I will be starting a new fanfic, Squirrel With A Bow. Hope you enjoy it!!

Sandingomm the Wildcat 23:34, September 8, 2011 (UTC)Sandingomm the Wildcat

Watch the fur fly for fun!

Check this out! http://redwallfanoncharacters.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Lord_Rose_Thorn/A_Fluffy_Bunny_or_a_Gluttonous_Hare%3F_A_Blog_About_Bartholomew_Billberry_Bowstring

ENJOY!--Badger Lord RoseThorn 17:18, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Accounts

There IS a required age to sign up for a Wikia account, and it's 13. -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 00:43, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 4 of my fanfic is up! Please comment! :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be! Also, I'm nearly finished with your picture. :)

Chat away...

Salutations! Sure, I'd be open to chatting, but I thought the shoutbox was taken away. (?) --Laurel Haremaid ^{Oooh look, a pastie!} 08:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Contest and Cover

Hi, Salem, I've finished the cover for Sisters, but they aren't! Also, I just found out that I won the contest, and I am so happy! XD I will let you know when I have thought up all the characters. :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

File:Sisters, but they aren't..jpg

The cover of the fanfic Sisters, but they aren't for SalemtheCruel.

Sure, of course! :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

My day's been great! How 'bout yours? :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

Sure, I love drawing! :D Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

Okay, cool! I'll get started on it right away. :) There might be a bit of a delay, as I just started school and I have homework. I will get it done as soon as possible, though. :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

I finished your trade pic, but my comp won't let me post it on the wiki, but I was able to post it on DA :D http://kalza.deviantart.com/art/AT-Onepaw-258136521 ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 01:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

aww, glad you like it :D yeah, school's tough (especially if you're in the 10th grade)

it wasn't the name that was the problem, my computer has dial-up and randomly disconnects---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 21:40, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I have finished my project so I should have your picture finished very soon. Sorry for the atypically huge delay.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 17:27, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Update! Pre-battle...please enjoy and comment!-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 03:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ohmigosh! Salem! Why didn't you tell me about your art contest!! D': I would have loved to enter. Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 20:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

( Well, ok, but I'm kinda upset that I didn't get to enter. Anyway, I know it sounds odd, but what is your favorite char from the Redwall series? Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 21:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Salem! The picture is nearly finished! :D I just don't have a lot of time at once to work on it, you know, because of school and stuff. But it's turning out nicely! :) Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

What is it?

What's the art request? (Sorry I'm not logged in). --Jump

well, Salem is Slagar's daughter in your fantasy, and Selound is Slagar's daughter in my fantasy, so that dosen't really mean they have to be step sisters. I have a friend who created twins for Slagar and her story is a lot like mine, but that's of her fantasy. We can all share Slagar, isn't that why Brian made him; to share with everybody? I'm just stating a fact, not being mean or anything ;)

really? Okay ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 08:33, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. I still dont get what is so lovable or likable about Slagar. Even Cluny the Scourge is nicer. ;) Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 13:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Armuk Rinn is done! Hope you like!

File:Armuk Rinn by Jump.jpg

--JumpoverMoon Kachumk! 21:44, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Spam

I'll handle disciplining users, thanks -- LordTBT File:Tbtico.jpg ^Talk! 16:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I can do art requests! Just tell me what to draw! It might take me a bit to get the request up on the wiki though because im busy with school and sports. Yeah I know what you're thinkin, I have no life. School. Swim. Redwall. Repeat. :) anyways I can't wait to see what happens next in your latest fan-fic Sisters! Hope you read and comment on my stories. Oh and I took your advice and made one of those chapter list things for "Mina Silvermist" Now you can just click on a chapter and it takes you there :) TTYL. --Wolf985 02:17, September 19, 2011 (UTC)Wolf985

Yeah, I didn't get your message until just now, but sure! Whenever you're on, just tell me and I can chat with you. Unless I'm not at the comp...but I probably will be-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 14:16, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm on. Well, TBT takes a very strict stand on things like that. And he said it was frowned upon but still alright so it should be fine. Why did my comment embarass you? And what's the good news?-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 21:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was just commenting on how Onepaw specifically dropped back to listen, which made sense, I just thought she was going to do/say something to the gossipers. And then she left and fainted. You didn't do something wrong, I was just commenting. Yeah! An update! I think I'll update soon too...-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 22:17, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

). Uh-oh...was it the same guy as the other guy? What happened?Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 23:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

O O.o That's creepy. Did he say anything else or was this out of the blue?-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wow...that's creepy. Why the sudden interest? What did you say last time to try and get him off your back? Maybe you should start avoiding him at all costs-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:35, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

That would probably be effective but obviously not enough. Maybe telling him something like you don't date guys over the internet would help...or saying you can't-Segalia Riverstorm, Archer Ottermaid Warrioress File:Segalia.png ^{Eph. 6:10} 00:40, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done at last!

File:Salem daughter of Slagar.jpeg

Salem, daughter of Slagar

File:Sciruis and Redwood.jpeg

My half of the art trade

Here are your pictures!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 21:01, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Salem,

I have a revival meeting at my church tonight but I will take a look at it when I get back. Sorry for the delay; every class I'm taking has a long project due AT THE SAME TIME (aaaaarrggghh) so I've not had much time to get on here.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 21:13, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

what happened?---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 21:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

( Thats mean.. What did the spam comment say? Could you link me? Ruko "F.F."I am now accepting personal char art commissions, only. 21:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! :D Kalm Treeblade I'm with ya mate, and I'll always be!

which fanfic?-- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 22:55, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I see what you mean; but here's some tips to help you understand what people are saying. spam would be if someone wrote a thing not even about the story, or asking permission to 'copy' your story. Plus this may also be a form of trolling, in which peple tease or judge your work in a bad way. Here are some definations and examples of the following, and note, they are not meant towards you; they're just examples of the things people may say

things are different here from what they are on DA.

critique: someone giving advice. EX: I like the story, but you need to use better punctuation and each character's lines have to be a new paragraph to prevent the reader from being confused. Other than that, great job

trolling: someone making fun of your work for the fun of it, and they tend to never stop it. EX: this story sucks; just stop writing because you write like a four year old

spam: something of total junk and normally unrelated. EX: lol, kin u give me sum DA pts? (most common form of spam, besides chain mails)

as I said, this is just to help you in the future (plus, it will help you on DA) ---- SeloundFile:Jade the Swift.png Ahh good morning, I see the assasins have failed 00:45, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not :)--Wolf985 01:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)wolf985

I am open to start art trades at any time, and I will eventually finish them, though it might take a while. Any time you want to do an art trade just leave a character description on my talk page and I'll leave you one to work on, no time limit required.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I've got to read it first :). Give me a couple minutes.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:59, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

My dayhas been very long. I've been tired and almost fell asleep in Geometry because I had a swim meet the night before. Also I will be glad to do your art request! I need to finish onepaw still. its on my list of things to do. Hey I like the "He had it coming" signature. Is it from the play Chicago?

That is so cool! You have to let me know when you finish it so I can read! When I went to NYC 2 years ago I got to see Chicago on Broadway and it was great! This past summer I went again to New York and got to see Sister Act. It was better then I thought it would be :) I've always loved acting and stuff.

Sorry about that: I'll pray it feels better. I left a comment already but I'll read the rest later.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 02:09, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. I've only participated in one acting thing and it was called Destination Imagination. It's where you and your group have to write the script, make props, etc. My group endedc up going to nationals which was in Knoxville Tennessee, but we didn't win. Oh well it was fun meeting people from all over the world and participating. :)

Of course I will. hey I have to go, ttyl! --Wolf985 02:20, September 22, 2011 (UTC)wolf985

I know, it stopped working last night. And for some reason wiki chat is also not working for me. Corbus May The Wind Be At Your Back, Matey

Ideas....hmmm. Well, for one thing, you might want to explain how Triggut Frapp got loose after Ambry tied him to the tree at the end of The Sable Quean, and how he comes to appear in your story; the implication left in the book was that he would die stuck to the tree. I haven't got any other ideas at the moment but if I get one I'll be sure to let you know.

By the way (I may have asked this already) did you read the preview of my real book I'm working on, and fill out the feedback? It's pretty short. Here's the link: Did you read the preview of the real novel I'm working on?

(https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1087402)

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 19:00, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hi,Salem

Sure,I'd love another art trade. What would you like me to draw for you?

To God be the Glory --Lilac Stormrudder 19:41, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,sounds good. I'll try to finish just as quick as I can.

Here's what I'd like drawn for me :D

Name:Shark Waveblaze

Species:Young male otter

Fur:dark gray

Eyes:Dark Brown

Clothing A black sharkskin vest with a faded gold sash around the middle

Weapons:2 sabers strapped on his back

That should do it Can't wait to see it.

To God be the Glory--Lilac Stormrudder 23:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

What Question?

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 00:51, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty well, I should say. She is a bit different than the way Jacques wrote her, BUT, as you are trying to show a different side of her, this is not necessarily a bad thing. Keep it coming!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 00:58, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Did someone spam your fanfic again?

God Bless, --Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:02, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I've mentioned this before, though I don't remember if it was to you or to someone else; you can't ever really know for sure what's going on in the mind or life of the person at the other end of the chat. That's why I usually don't do them, because it's easy to place too much faith in the people involved in them and open yourself to hurts like that. I am already praying that the issue will somehow resolve itself, though my advice would be not to take over-the-internet insults too seriously. :)

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:06, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said, I am praying that this issue will resolve itself and that you will feel better. :) I need to go now; when you decide what character you want me to draw for the next art trade just send me a message.

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck File:ScottyBlue 2.jpg ^{O Sword of Truth! Fly swift and sure, that Evil die and Good endure!} 01:10, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

What's wrong? :(

--Lilac Stormrudder 04:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.

Sure thing Salem, here is a link to speeqe http://redwallwars.speeqe.com/ Everyone is on and Red might join us.Niko BanksFile:Matthias3.gif^{Hi, want to be friends? :)}, 09:00, September 23, 2011, (UTC)

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hey, i haven't properly welcomed you to the wiki yet, so here's a belated welcome to the wiki gift! ^^ -- FerretmaidenFile:Meeks new.jpg RAWR! I'm An Artist! Fear Me! 20:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

aw, you know, everyone who i give gift art to says that. i'm glad i made you feel better! =)-- FerretmaidenFile:Meeks new.jpg RAWR! I'm An Artist! Fear Me! 03:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

hey Salem! i do sincerely apologize for the absoloutely abysmal quality of the image :( my computer and scanner are both awful. Anyeay, i hope you like it! if you want any changes made, i'll be happy to redraw her for you! God Bless! Ariyh, Scriptor mirifice 14:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)